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Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2015 - 04:57 am Title: Epilogue

Wonderful story - enjoyed it Super Much as I have enjoyed your other work.

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2015 - 04:39 am Title: A moment in the aftermath

What a wonderful touch using that iconic scene from the series -

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2015 - 04:11 am Title: A small victory

Great job with your battle scene -

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2015 - 04:00 am Title: A battle commences

Nice to have some of the original Sunnydale Slayers in the battle -

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2015 - 03:44 am Title: A gift of power

intense with the drinking of Dawn's blood - you did a wonderful job with all the conflicting emotions and trauma for Buffy, Spike - they have so much terrible history between them.

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2015 - 02:36 am Title: A scene replayed

Well - we knew it was coming still a bitch when it came.

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Date: 08/06/2015 - 02:02 am Title: A step back

Nice forward movement point for Buffy and Spike - while it is the obvious advantage for Willow to do a reconstructed memory spell we would be missing all their snark and tensions.

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2015 - 01:18 am Title: A coming awake

excellent chapter - talk about KARMA for all those years she refused to acknowledge his attempts to be that better man/vampire for her.

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Date: 08/06/2015 - 12:05 am Title: A different turn

This is so horrible for poor Dawn - I just hope to all TPTB that he will recognize her.

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2015 - 11:11 pm Title: A version of the past

I love this story - Glad to be reading it once again.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 06:04 pm Title: Epilogue

Fantastic story, I really loved it. Heaps of errors. .. fixing them would make this a much better read, but it's still definitely worth the time. Could have used more smut, you did fine on the love scene.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 04:55 pm Title: A small victory

=) love the author's note... I agree. I'm being distracted by Spike right now!

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 04:12 pm Title: A plan explained

Love the "Buffy was legend, WtB was myth" line.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 02:12 pm Title: A welcoming committee

Oh, man.... genius speech by Xander. Heart warming.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 01:55 pm Title: A scene replayed

I love Xander's "I have a really bad idea." Hilarious, and so in character.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 01:39 pm Title: A little bit of history repeating

Very good. The little errors still need fixing, but you are really at weaving a compelling tale.

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Date: 01/15/2014 - 01:22 pm Title: A realisation

Oh, my god, that was powerful: "No, I don't love you yet." Squeeeee! Simply amazing; what a fantastic moment. Very nicely done. =)

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 04:22 am Title: A little closer

Good chapter. Love the bits with Spike's patchy memory, and Buffy's apprehension.

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Date: 01/15/2014 - 04:16 am Title: A version of the past

Good chapter, though a bit rushed. Again, just needs a bit of polish. Dialogue is good, I'm loving Dawn & Xander here. Buffy sounds too British here and in the previous chapter, and still some grammar/spelling errors.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 04:02 am Title: A return of friends

Ooh, good way to end the chap. Good dialogue for Spike. :)

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2014 - 03:59 am Title: A rising force

Hmm. Good chapter despite the grammar errors, but it would have been better to see it before the previous chapter, I think.

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Date: 01/15/2014 - 03:53 am Title: A Call to Arms

Good start to the story, but it could use a good beta. Several grammar errors, and the writing could use a little bit of polish. But I'm really intrigued so far, so really good start. =)

Reviewer: Miranda Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2013 - 03:23 pm Title: Epilogue

I really liked this

Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2009 - 06:05 am Title: Epilogue

loved it! wonderful, wonderful fic!

Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2007 - 06:06 am Title: Epilogue

Another wonderful story! I love stories where Spike goes back to the Scoobies with no memories of their shared past and I have to tell you, I really really liked that you made Spike remember Dawn first. It was so good to see JealousBuffy! Eh eh. I can't wait to check out your other stories! Keep up the wonderful work!

Oh! I was almost forgetting.... the sex scene was delicious!!! ; )

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