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Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2007 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty nine

hooray for want take have...but all the pesky emotions that come with it? that's tough. we all wish we could shut them off but...that's what makes us human

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine

So that's it; Buffy fears that if she stays and her and William won't work she'll be stranded in a foreign land. She is afraid. And that words from her mother? Really cruel. ~ Loved the chapter, deep thoughts of Buffy.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty nine

Great update, I like where your taking Buffy in this

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty nine

I'm so glad that he backed off at breakfast-- seems he can still make her a little skiddish. But I like how he acquiesced and went shopping (what a true man!) and insisted on buying the book-- that was too cute. At the end, I'm starting to cringe because I can see the hand-writing on the wall. That phase that I, like so many others, went through-- self-destruction, thy name is Buffy. Hopefully she won't leave William just so that she can have power and a feeling of self-control. Hopefully, he can help heal her poor self image, and she can see that true power lies in making herself vulnerable and accessible to someone she loves. Great update.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty nine

This chapter really gave us an insightful glimpse into Buffy's head. Looks like William still has his work cut out for him. It's a shame Buffy's parents were so cruel and made her feel so unlovable. I can't wait to see where things go from here for our favorite couple. Fantastic update!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 12:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty nine

the storm is about to hit. i can tell. i don't know how big or small this storm is gonna be but it's definately gonna be a storm. loved it. please post soon. completely understand where buffy is coming from. sometimes it's just easier to run. please post soon.

Reviewer: Scooter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty nine

I'm really enjoying this story. Knew it wouldn't be all "peaches and cream" the morning/day after. But I have faith that Spuffy will win out.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine

So, Buffy sees opening up emotionally is giving up control and power, and she doesn't want to discuss these feelings with Will. That doesn't bode well for a healthy relationship. I knew it was going too well...

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine

Poor confused Buffy. She doesn't realize that she wants the same thing as William. He wants her to stay and love him, and she wants to be loved by someone who will stay. Wonderful chap. more please.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine

wow you are pounding them out today. Such a roll. Great job and yes I am following you so far.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine

hmmmm I don't know whats going to happen next! interesting chapter

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine

Someone should have Buffy's parents mouth's glued shut! Great chapter!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine

God I hope she doesn't run away from William. Why doesn't she just talk to him? I know she's afraid, but she can't go through life living like she did before. I hope he gets her to stay. Update soon please!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine

loved this chapter!! cant wait to see what happens next!!

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