Date: 10/28/2013 - 09:11 am Title: Epilgue
Ultimately sweet, but I'm not sure I find the rape or their recovery from it all that believable. I understand what you were trying to do, but honestly, the story would have worked better without the rape. Several typos/errors.
Date: 09/14/2007 - 09:06 am Title: Epilgue
Just wanted to leave a little review before I turned off the computer for the night and say that I liked this story. Ups and downs and all around angst in a story with the pleasing addition of a happy ending are my ideas of a good story!
Date: 09/28/2006 - 10:50 am Title: Epilgue
I really loved your story and I can't wait to read more from you! Great job!!!
Author's Response: thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest
Date: 08/13/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: Epilgue
Nice ending.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 08/13/2006 - 09:53 pm Title: Epilgue
Excellent story. Thanks so much for sharing it. I loved the ending and how she told him she was preggers by talking about decorating the room. That was really romantic and sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 08/13/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Epilgue
Really loved the end :) It was fun to read the story properly. I enjoyed it very much :)
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 08/13/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Epilgue
Really great ending - thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 08/13/2006 - 06:43 pm Title: Epilgue
I wanted to review this here, even though I read it on your site.
I really liked the story because I enjoy the Spuffy that developes at a nice rate.
spuf
Author's Response: thanks