Date: 12/13/2012 - 12:19 am Title: Epilouge
Great story, ended so nicely. Needs editing; grammar and punctuation issues made it difficult to read at times.
Date: 07/17/2010 - 11:00 pm Title: Epilouge
really enjoyed ur story. very heartfelt and inspiring
Date: 04/27/2009 - 01:37 am Title: Epilouge
this was great love the ending kids aways comeing in at the worst times. lol keep them coming
Date: 05/09/2008 - 01:10 am Title: Epilouge
i love his fic one of my faves.you rock!
Date: 08/31/2007 - 03:32 am Title: Epilouge
lol oh wasnt that the perfect ending! Your amazingly talented and thank you for sharing
Date: 07/01/2007 - 12:20 pm Title: Epilouge
Was searching for some slightly older completed fics that I might've missed, since summer's fic-update-slump seems now to have officially arrived... and, I am glad I went looking! I read it straight thru, and enjoyed it! So very sweet! Especially loved the Wedding Singer songs inclusion.
Con-Crit: Spelling, grammar, & especially punctuation could use some attending to... so, perhaps a beta? And, use of defined "story break points", ie ways in which you switch from one scenario to a totally different one, such as when significant amounts of time has passed. In 'net fanfics, perhaps double-spacing between paragraphs, or breaking the paragraphs up with a bar of some sort, such as a line typed across the page to indicate a break.
However, enjoyed it!
(And please forgive my own typos & mistakes, plus probable lack of wordwrap, as I'm reading & posting from my cell-phone browser.)
Good luck & keep writing!
fyreburned@yahoo.com
Date: 02/18/2007 - 06:45 am Title: Epilouge
Oh Bugger! ROTFL!!! Nothing worse then being caught in the act by your kids!! Great story! Really enjoyed it.
Date: 01/20/2007 - 11:36 pm Title: Epilouge
Awesome!!!! do another ! do another !
Date: 01/17/2007 - 12:14 am Title: Epilouge
i loved it ! *hugs*
Date: 01/03/2007 - 08:25 pm Title: Epilouge
I loved this. The ending was cute too.
Date: 01/03/2007 - 01:45 am Title: Epilouge
AWWWW THAT WAS SOOOOOOO CUTE, SWEET AND WONDERFUL. A PERFECT ENDING. i loved this story so much and am so glad that i read it. the end was brillant and how everything ended was perfect. i really enjoyed reading this story and i think that you're an amazing writer. thank u for writing this fic, it was fantastic and i cant wait to read more of your work.
Date: 12/23/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Epilouge
LMAO, oh man, that's what they get for doing the hanky panky in the afternoon when you got a kid. Me and my boyfriend learned that the hard way with our daughter. Great story, I hope to see more of your work!
Date: 12/21/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Epilouge
Oh yeah, Buffy is happy now (and lucky too to have what she has). Their life turned out well.
Sorry to see it end but I loved the epilogue (and the story too); it was fun too. And Emma has a bad timing *grins*
Date: 12/21/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Epilouge
Beautiful story, I really had a great time rading it. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 12/19/2006 - 10:28 pm Title: Epilouge
That was such a great ending to a great story!!! "Mommy....Daddy what are you doing?" lmfao!!!! Great job!!!!
Date: 12/19/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Epilouge
Loved this fic!
Date: 12/19/2006 - 09:17 pm Title: Epilouge
That was a funny ending to the story. I've been reading along for awhlie and I really like the way this tory has developed. I hope you continue to write because you're really good!!!
Date: 12/19/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Epilouge
oh wow. lol. greatending and great story. loved it bunches and so sad that it's ending. amazing job.
Date: 12/19/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Epilouge
Wow you should warn people that this is not a fluffy Buffy fic.I was a little shocked at the begining but I have to admit that I really like it.Nice fic :)
Date: 12/19/2006 - 07:27 pm Title: Epilouge
Enjoyed the story... love the happy ending with Spike and Buffy...
Date: 12/19/2006 - 07:09 pm Title: Epilouge
I really loved this story it was so great. Are you planning on a sequel cause that would be great?
Date: 12/19/2006 - 06:45 pm Title: Epilouge
Buffy got her prince! A rock star!Loved it!
Date: 12/19/2006 - 06:45 pm Title: Epilouge
Great story! It started out so angsty and ended so nice! I really am sad to see this one end!
Date: 12/19/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: Epilouge
Loved it. I'm so sad that is ending.