Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:16 am Title: A deeper Insight
good story line so far i'm liking it......you may want to correct a few grammer error's and consider getting a BETA, small miss spells and it brings the story down a little bit....but on the overall i'm lovin it:)
Date: 11/12/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: A deeper Insight
you got to tell me wht happened
Author's Response: lol thanks! Yeah sure email me if you want and I can help you with anything you need!
Date: 11/11/2006 - 10:44 pm Title: A deeper Insight
its funny i thought that when i started this chap is was gonna be a fight between her mom and her but then you surprised me lol
good chap
Author's Response: lol thats what stories are about, suprising the readers. I wanted it to be a fight but I thought it would go better the way it went. :-D thanks for the great support!!
Date: 11/11/2006 - 11:30 am Title: A deeper Insight
I think Buffy can't remember the next morning that she talked to Spike, especially about love.
Oh that's way! They have a history. Spike was Buffy's first. And the father of the baby she lost. Though I can't see why he acted as he did, taunting Buffy and saying terrible things.
And the accident did happen because people got to know she slept with Spike. When he didn't tell it... did he tell Drusilla and she told? Or who did spill the secret I wonder..
But now things are better for Buffy, going back to her family, having therapy....
And discover that she is pregnant! She doesn't remember sleeping with Spike it seems :) Till next part!
Author's Response: lol yeah that basically sums it up!
Date: 11/10/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: A deeper Insight
love it, can't wait to see what happens next. She talked about a miscarriage, you made it look like it might have been Spikes is that right. If so then I guess he will be the father to this one too.
Author's Response: lol yeah Spike is was her first and only person she slept with! Though she doesnt know she slept with him this time! They had a one night stand when she was fifteen. Leading to a miscarriage.
Date: 11/10/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: A deeper Insight
great chapter!..cant wait till the next one!!!
Author's Response: thanks :-D