lol the whole thing with HAL was hillarious. also.. so is william vamp spike or is he human? great story tho

Hmm.. is Spike human now, too? Does he remember anything?

hi...

the story is really great...
but i don´t like the end...
i mean i would prefer that Buffy remembers Spike or William.... THAT would be a grat End ^^

but so-.... i really like this story ^^

The ending was kind of sad 'cause William couldn't be her William. Loved the rest of the story, though.

So they really did it, did give Buffy the poison. Never really asked her what she wanted, they just did what they thought would be the best for her, including Spike.
For me something is missing at the end, it's "jumping". Ending with Buffy getting the poison to make her human, Faith hiding the diary. And then, two years later Buffy sits in the sun, meeting William. So Spike became human too even if he never wanted it? It just seems as something is missing (like with William being there at the end).
It's good to see the story have a happy ending, but you did speed it up too much, not 'knotting the loose ends'. That's a bit sad even if the story had a good end. ~ I hope I could explain myself / express myself right. That's how I felt about it.

Good story, but a little confusing. Did Spike become human too, and why did she forget everything and go valley girl?

Author's Response: Sorry about it being confusing. I have gotten so bored of this story and wanted to end it ASAP. The blood caused the Vampire to forget all about thier vampire life. They become human. I just wrote her as how I would see a woman like her in our time period. After some thinking Spike made his desicion and took the blood. Yes he was human and couldn't remember. Sorry for the confusion.

It was a sad ending, I wish he would have given her a choice on what she wanted, then he might not of thought have felt like he was betraying her.

He also kept some for himself I am assumming, I wonder why he didn't take it with her, then they could have woke up together and continued on being lovers. I would have been easy to put some in both glasses.

Loved it even if it was sad.

Author's Response: I wanted to show that Spjike was not only in love with her but his vampiric-ness too. I wanted it to seem like he had to think for a while before he could make his desision.