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Reviewer: fallen_angel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 - 12:07 pm Title: II

Everyone has their own unique way of telling a story so don't fret. There's just so much fanfic out there that unique ideas are rare but yet each fic is different. I can even give examples. Belonging by DoS, The Worst Betrayal by TC and Driedel By Constance all have Spike being captured and sold as a slave but the fics themselves are different and eachone is simply amazing. So, just tell your story the way you want to and I'm sure everyone will love it.

Author's Response: I'll have to check those out; don't think I've read any. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:38 pm Title: II

loved the dream sequence!

poor buffy, i feel for her know... *jumps on the next chapter to see her reaction* lol

Author's Response: Don't worry. It will get better. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 - 03:38 am Title: II

Well, I've read quite a few pieces, but no one with Spike closing the portal. So, for what it's worth, it's new to me to, and I am enjoying it. Love that heartfelt crypt discussion. Love their babysteps.

Author's Response: I think that Spike and Buffy can be defined in nothing but babysteps; it's why they went so horribly wrong in S6.

Reviewer: fee_kh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 09:01 am Title: II

Not hackneyed at all. I'm guessing Dawn feels a bit guilty right about now.
And I love the flashback to before the fight,, just different enough to canon.

Author's Response: Dawn's an unpredictable teenager; you never know how she's going to feel!

Reviewer: louise39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 12:02 am Title: II

Great start and I'm sure you will have your own interpretation and consequences.

Author's Response: I do hope so. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: HollyDB Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 - 01:44 am Title: II

Yeah, I admit that I read something similar once...but already, just with this chapter, it's very different. And even so...like there aren't a ton of Something Blue fics out there.

I'm actually working on something that has been done at least once before. However, I think that your position of not knowing the other fics gives you an advantage. Sure, the formula's the same...that doesn't mean the results won't differ.

Anyway, all that just to say...I'm loving this. Please, Jenny, may I have some more?

Author's Response: You know, that thought hadn't even crossed my mind. There ARE a ton of Something Blue fics out there. :P Glad you're still enjoying it. :D

Reviewer: wall_flower Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2006 - 09:00 am Title: II

I love this- even if it's not as unique as you'd hoped, the beautiful writing style more than makes up for it. This has such a wistful feeling about it, I'm pretty sure that Buffy finding out about Spike's death is going to make me cry.
I adore this -x-

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2006 - 01:53 am Title: II

I like how this fills in between the bot and the RV run, look foward to more

Author's Response: Thanks! I've just posted chapter three, so you won't have to wait any longer. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 08:40 pm Title: II

Ah, Spike survived, being a vampire. I'm glad the Buffy opened up a bit to him. ~ And then everything changed. Now I wonder if the first part was only Buffy's imagination.
Good chapter though, looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Erm. The first part of the second chapter is a memory...perhaps I need to clarify that more? :/ But Buffy has indeed opened up to him, and will continue to do so in the distant future. Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I hope you keep up with this story!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 05:42 pm Title: II

This is well written and entertaining. You're doing an excellent job with the voices, and the dialogue is sharp and in character. You deftly handled the choreography in the fight with Glory, and wove in canon dialogue seamlessly. Buffy's visit to the crypt was richly detailed and vivid, and it left me wondering whether it was a flashback or a dream. No matter, the sentiments she expressed were wonderful to read either way. This story flows beautifully, and it already has me hooked. I'm looking forward to how Spike's sacrifice alters the Season 6 storyline.

Author's Response: To be honest, I was sweating bullets over the choreography with Glory; most of it was stolen (borrowed) from "The Gift", and I just put words to it. One of my weaknesses as a writer is writing fight scenes that are descriptive and interesting; one of my hopes is that by writing this fic, it will no longer be a weakness. Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I hope to see more from you soon! :)

Reviewer: Dihcar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 09:28 am Title: II

Yes, i have read several stories like yours, but they are quite different. For one thing they only have Spike sucking the blood of Dawn or Buffy. Not fight with a goddess before his big finish. And then they either have him come back as a weak human, making weepy all the time and very much un-canon.
Your story is just fine as it is, original. Can't wait to see how Buffy will react.

Author's Response: When I was outlining the fic, I played around with the idea of bringing him back human, and decided against it. I like Spike as a vampire (doesn't everyone?), and it's canon that dead vampires have come back as vampires -- i.e. Angel. And I don't see Spike as ever really being weepy...I think he'd handle a return from Heaven/death much better than Buffy did, simply because he's been through it before. Approximately. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Bonny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 04:13 am Title: II

I like the story so far cant wait to hear more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working furiously on chapter three, and expect to have it up on the weekend.

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 01:17 am Title: II

Not hackneyed or cliched at all. I didn't mean to imply that in my last comment. Your writing is really excellent, and it's always interesting to see different authors start from a similar place and go in completely different directions. There is something hypnotic about the pacing of this story. It draws me in, and makes me long for more.

Author's Response: Oh, not at all! I didn't mean to imply that anyone had said it; it's just a general fear of mine. No worries. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing; I hope you keep up with it!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 11:52 pm Title: II

Maybe there is other stories similar to yours, but I have never seen them. I hae read a couple stories where Spike wished later that he had thought of taking Buffy's place, but it never actually happened.
I'm looking forward to more of your story, soon I hope.

Author's Response: I'm working on chapter three, and it seems to be going well. I hope to have it up by the weekend. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: II

I love it so far, Yes there are simular stories but every writer takes a different spin on thing. More please.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you keep up with it!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: II

Clever idea; and very well written. Looking forward to seeing how you further develop this!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on chapter three, and it seems to be going well, so look for it soon!

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: II

Gotta love Spike. But I love it so far. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Roxy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 07:52 pm Title: II

*sniffs* I hope he's not dead...Love the story, can't wait for next update!

Author's Response: Well, of course Spike's dead...he's a vampire! :P Nah. He'll be back, eventually...this wouldn't be a very interesting (or long) fic if he was gone for good! It'd be nothing but Buffyangst. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: II

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: Heh! I'm hoping to start chapter three sometime tonight, and writing's going fairly quickly ::crosses fingers:: so keep a look out for it around the weekend, I assume. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sandyrah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 07:37 pm Title: II

Just to reassure you, this one is already fairly different from the others. Good job, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Hope you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 07:09 pm Title: II

well, i haven't read anything like it. maybe i'm just a little behind. anyway, i love it and i'm really looking forward to reading what happened to spike. why wouldn't dawn want to tell buffy that spike saved them???? hmmm... post soon. loved it bunches.

Author's Response: The next chapter, or perhaps the one following, will get into why Dawn is hiding the truth from Buffy. As cliched as it sounds, she has her reasons. :P Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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