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Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 07:13 pm Title: V

i think buffy's not really fine... her life seems to get better, the relationship with dawn less strained, but... she is slighty falling to pieces. like when something big happen to you, and at first you're too shocked to feel the pain.

glad that tara noticed it.

Author's Response: I think Buffy's very good at repressing what she feels; years of hurt will do that to a girl. And I love Tara as a confidante for Buffy.

Reviewer: HollyDB Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 12:33 am Title: V

Again, your characterization just blows me away. I love how you've gotten into Buffy's head, and how her thoughts are so realistic and flow very well from the vantage point that you started at. You haven't had her come to any sudden realization, but you haven't gone too slow, either. The pacing in this fic is amazing.

And I just gotta c/p a couple lines I liked:

“I’m the Slayer. It’s not like it would be hard for me to break down this door.”

So very Buffy.

And this one about broke my heart:

Buffy locked the door and went to meet her friend, hoping that Spike would not follow her there, and wishing he would.

Wonderful stuff, sweetie!

Author's Response: That line about Spike following Buffy nearly killed me, too. Seriously. It's just...gaagh. I'm just worried that because I've been in Buffy's head so long, I'll have a problem with getting into Spike's when he comes back. I mean IF! IF he comes back! NO SPOILERS. :P

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2007 - 06:26 am Title: V

I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying this story! Your AU makes logical sense, and I like that Buffy is having a difficult time dealing with all the changes in her world. Suddenly being responsible for a teenager is a Dig Deal; and it's nice to see that dealt with.

Author's Response: Oh, yay. I'm glad you think that my AU isn't totally...well, AU. And you're right, it's a huge deal for all this responsibility to be suddenly thrust upon Buffy, and I think she would stumble along the way. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: V

Ah Buffy, back in denial? She tries very hard to act normal.
So bittersweet to see Buffy encounter memories of Spike (and her missing him).
Good chapter, and good luck for your exams!

Author's Response: Thank you! I need all the luck I can get! And I think that going through a loss is never easy, but even less so when you don't realize exactly how much the person meant to you until after the person is gone. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 - 04:03 am Title: V

Love her coming to terms with her grief as well as her enforced adulthood. Hope she can find her knight in black leather again. He's haunting her already. Loving it, please update soon.

Author's Response: For some reason, writing the scene with Spike haunting Buffy was really fun for me to write. I have no idea why; it simply was. I'm glad you're enjoying my little story so much!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 - 03:15 am Title: V

Great build up, look foward to Spike's return

Author's Response: You and me both. Unfortunately, it's still a ways in coming.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: V

Super update, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 06:39 pm Title: V

Lovely and moving. Your Buffy and Dawn are so excellent.

One tiny suggestion: a little stuttering goes a long way in fiction. Having Tara stutter in almost every sentence is a little distracting.

Other than that, though, this story is excellent. You really are taking a basic concept done before (Spike sacrifices himself to save Buffy and Dawn) and making it completely original. I don't know where you are going with this, but I'm happily along for the ride.

Author's Response: Honestly, I was torn about the stuttering. I knew it was overkill when I wrote it, but I felt it was overkill in the show, as well. So it got to the point of how close to canon I wanted to be. In retrospect, I should have toned it down. Other than that, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 01:06 pm Title: V

I love this fic, it is really well written. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're still enjoying it.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 10:37 am Title: V

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: fee_kh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 09:14 am Title: V

Fantastic. You write the angst and the slow changes in Buffy's and Dawn's demeanour very well and above all believably. I think i would have preferred this version to what actually happened in the show. The writers never did give Spike enough credit.
So, keep up the good work and I will swing back when you update.

Author's Response: You and me both, dear. :P Especially because I know what's coming up in the future, I would have loved to have seen this version on the show. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story!

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