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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2007 - 12:08 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Yah! I was wondering when there will be a new chap. I doubt Elizabeth or William are going to be in danger, but I can imagine how they will feel about the other in danger.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 07:18 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Love it when Elizabeth takes no bull from men!!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 06:26 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

So glad to finally se an update on this story. Love the time period. You've done such a good job with the charcters. This war wreaked such havox on the Americans, pitting them against each other. The pair have a lot to overcome and you are doing such a good job in your writing of it. Took a lot for Buffy to just rush in and help the enemy. Can't wait to see how you'll be writing the rest of it. Very much look forward to next update. Hope we don't have to wait so long. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: ksd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 04:25 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

This is such a great chapter. Elizabeth shows William that she is made of good "stuff" by being willing to go out and help his soldiers after everything she has been through. They may have a long way to go, but they sure have come a long way too.

Great character development and this plot is simply wonderful ... so original. Hope you are in the mood to crank out a chapter a day for the next few weeks ... (OK, that was a joke, but I am crossing my fingers that you get in the mood to write more soon ... LOVE this tale!!)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 03:25 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Loved this update. This is beautifully written.

Reviewer: nicky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 01:07 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Thanks for updateing, been waiting ages, update again soon, love the story.
nicky

Reviewer: minkholly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 12:52 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

I love stories like this. this time in history is my all time fav. i love reading anything to do with the old west and the cilvil war. keep up this awesome work. you have a gift. if at anytime you need something or just a question about this time i'll be happy to help but i dont think you'll be needing it LOL your good.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 12:05 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Nobody (neither Buffy nor William) talked about what had happened... at some point they have to.
Unexpected.... new twist. Elizabeth gets bossy; looking forward how she'll handle the new situation.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 10:39 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

ooo interesting:) cant wait to read more

Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 09:38 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Great that you have updated. Brilliant action sequence and now they will have to work together as equals to save the men. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 04:28 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

YAY IM SO HAPPY THAT U UPDATED!!! i love this story and am so happy that u updated. its so sad that she left him, and that he wants her but cant have her, and that hes hurt she ran away. i really hope that they get the troops and make it out ok. also i hope that she learns to forgive him and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. tahnx

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 04:15 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

I devour every new chapter when it's posted. Beautifully written, great characterization, always looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 03:36 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 03:05 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Been missing this story SOOOOOOO much !!!!!!! Loved this update!!!!

Great chapter of building their individual characters as well as their chemistry together. I can vividly picture the time period and the environment. Love your style and story. Bring it on.

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