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Reviewer: ksd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 01:16 pm Title: Rising Waters, Part 2

Completely awesome chapter. Action and romance (well, a little). William is trying (unsuccessfully) to control his attraction for Elizabeth, and vice versa. But you have done such an excellent job of showing them to be perfect for each other... they really do "need" to be together once they get past their issues.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 08:51 am Title: Rising Waters, Part 2

*phew* William can be lucky that Buffy was with them; she saved his life.
But as long as they weren't back in the camp he reacted very cold. Seems he was only worried though. Looking forward to the rest of the talk.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:37 am Title: Rising Waters, Part 2

Great chapter, this story is just getting better and better, i can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 01:45 am Title: Rising Waters, Part 2

Ok, I know William is worried about Buffy. But hopefully some sense will be knocked into him so he can treat her right. I love the story!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 12:07 am Title: Rising Waters, Part 2

haha i loved it:) great update....keep up the awesome work....cant wait till you update again

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 11:40 pm Title: Rising Waters, Part 2

Eeek! I can't wait for more! This story is so great! I love it!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2007 - 10:39 pm Title: Rising Waters, Part 2

I think this is so good. I don't know if it's the period thing or what but it's all bodice ripping under the surface tension and I can't get enough. William has quite possibly met his match here (in more ways than one). Elizabeth is probably so unlike the women that he is used to meeting. Can't wait for their talk, unless she tries something stupid. So looking forward to more.

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