Date: 12/17/2006 - 10:12 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
It made him think... and now he wants to change the things he does.
That's a start :) Now to the next chapter :)
Date: 12/09/2006 - 07:36 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
okay...i forgot to leave a review for this chapter so here it goes.....wow. spike is an asshole but at least he knows it and wants to change. i don't think boffy is going to make it easy for him but that's what change is about. it takes time. loved it lots. now i can read the next chapter....
Date: 12/09/2006 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
Wow, poor Harmony! I hope Spike can find a way to make her feel better. Good chapter! :)
Date: 12/08/2006 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
Seems to me, that this is a fantasy fic, hense, non-canon, and well, FANTASY. For all anyone knows Tara could be a totally different Tara from the show, and even if it isn't, character portrayal is the author's choice!
Once again, FANTASY. They are fictional characters, at least to most people.
Date: 12/08/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
"Spreading her arms wide, Harmony the Ghost sang, 'Ghost of Women Present!'
'Oh fuck me,' Spike muttered..."
Excellent portrayal. I can picture Harmony doing that so easily, as well as Spike's reaction. One bit of characterization that bothered me a bit however, was Tara's. She seems a bit pushy and judgmental, which is rather the opposite from her function and personality in the series. Perhaps placing a character such as Cordelia in the role that Tara fills in this fic would be a better choice, simply because her character is much more demanding and confrontational. Just a thought.
Looking forward to the next ghostly visit.
Date: 12/08/2006 - 04:35 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
I had myself a good laugh over that 'fuck me' .. 'nope, not here for that' part - too funny. I forgot to menitoin too I love the title you chose for the fic, it's brilliant.
Glad to see Spike is getting his attitude knocked down and seeing himself and the present woman in the perspective that he should. Poor Buffy. I really feel bad for her. Let's hope Spike can make himself worthy of her when it comes time. Thank you for sharing this fic, I'm truly enjoying it. Kuddos sweety, can't wait for the next chapter... I bet it's going to be a real shocker.
Date: 12/08/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
What a heartbreaking beautiful spuffy version of a Christmas Carol. I luv it!
Date: 12/08/2006 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
That was very powerful. I hope it gets to him.
Date: 12/08/2006 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
Really enjoying the journey you're taking Spike on with this. Great update, great story, great writing, great writer :oD More soon please!
Date: 12/08/2006 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
Excellent chapter - I really liked this idea of a ghost allowing Spike to see himself through his own eyes , but as a silent,horrified , sad presence.
What a lesson learned !
The scene where he watches Buffy is very moving .
And that he knows now what she thinks of him - and that it is the truth.
I love what you're doing here.:)
Date: 12/08/2006 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
Again, excellent chapter! I love it!
Date: 12/08/2006 - 06:51 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
I love the way the story is playing out. Wonderful chapter!
Date: 12/08/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Date: 12/08/2006 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
good update
Date: 12/08/2006 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
Great chapter just like the last two, I really like how he regrets what he did to Harmony. Unfortunately, the vampire never did. I guess Buffy is Future Ghost, look foward to more.
Date: 12/08/2006 - 02:52 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
OMG I CANT BELIEVE THAT BUFFY SAW THROUGH HIS ACT AND UNDERSTANDS HIM. i love this story and am so happy u updated. im so glad that he has decided to change his ways and that he wants to be worthy of buffy. also im glad that hes going to apologize to harmony and try to make buffy happy. i really hope that the ghost of future shows him that it will turn out well if he stops his ways and that he and buffy will be together and happy. please update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. thanx
Date: 12/08/2006 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
I felt really sad for Buffy in this chapter. I do know what it's like to be lonely and that's a feeling nobody should know. Great chapter, cant wait for more!
Date: 12/08/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
That was mean of Dawn. I always thought she was a little selfish at times. Sure she had her good days, but other times...just a brat. Poor Buffy. I'm glad Spike realizes what he's been doing. Hopefully he'll change it now. Update soon please!
Date: 12/08/2006 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present
Wow, that was excellent. Beautiful, poignant--made me feel for every single one of the characters (except maybe Darla :-) now, time for ghost of woman (note the singular use of the word...) future? love this!!!