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Reviewer: LourdesRuiz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2011 - 02:34 am Title: Part 1

People all over the world take the business loans in various banks, because that is fast and easy.

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 09:00 pm Title: Part 1

I'm from sweden and I could understand most of what Anya was saying. It was really great, to read something that was almost Swedish :).. And I really like the beginning of this

Author's Response: Haha, Good! And you could probably only *almost* read it becuase it's probably NOT gramatically correct...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 07:16 pm Title: Part 1

Loved it :D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2006 - 03:37 pm Title: Part 1

Love it, hope Dawn hasn't ruined all the fun.

Author's Response: Well. Maybe. But if she did, not for long.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Part 1

Absolutely brilliant. Fascinating how Dawn is the only one who retains her memories correctly. Love the Giles/Joyce sexage and Anya's persistant pursuit of Xander and Xander giving in to Anya even though he hasn't got a clue what she's saying. As for Willow's babbling denial and the Hotness that is Buffy & Spike... perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next. Has Dawn fixed it all or made everything permanent... and which would be better? I just hope that when it's all resolved Buffy doesn't get all nasty and vengeful towards our poor Spike. Waiting impatiently for updates now...

Author's Response: Now would I do that? ha, yes. Yes I would. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2006 - 09:26 am Title: Part 1

Great start can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Part 1

This sounds like fun. Their world turned upside down :) Looking forward to more, I'm not sure at the moment if I saw that episode, that will won't stop me from reading.

Author's Response: Actaully, I only saw part of it; bascially, it means they all regress to their teenage personas. :)

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 10:01 pm Title: Part 1

Hee hee! This looks like fun!

Author's Response: Oh it is. It really is.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 07:28 pm Title: Part 1

We haven't heard from Dawn, yet! Is she a floating green light in the room? Or was she not afected since she is already a 14-15 year old.

And Joyce and Ripper are reenacting the summer of love again....oh boy!

Author's Response: I'll never te-el...until you hit chapter 2. HA. And things should get hot an steamy for...most everyone invovled. But only graphically for our favorite Spuffy.

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 10:53 am Title: Part 1

LOL :)

Author's Response: eeeeeeeexactly. ha!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 10:26 am Title: Part 1

Great start! I look forward to reading more. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 06:24 am Title: Part 1

'His hand was on a woman’s boobie. His HAND was actually TOUCHING a REAL boob.' and '“Boobie!” he crowed delightedly.' OMG!! Funniest thing ever!! I almost choked on my water while reading that. LOL!

Ooh, I love this!! Everyone going back to their 'roots,' so to speak, and starting over. Fantab!! Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: Actually, *I* cracked up when I wrote that. Because I can so see Xander doing that!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 05:34 am Title: Part 1

Ooh, this is excellent! Love the idea of them losing half their memories like this, very fun...can't wait to see where it goes!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :) It's gonna be a fun fic. With like, 5 minutes of angst, but fun none-the-less.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 01:38 am Title: Part 1

Something like "please give me an orgasm?" lol

Author's Response: Pretty much...yeah. Or something to that effect, at least. :D

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 01:06 am Title: Part 1

This sounds like a lot of fun, it's great so far. Looking forward to more. =)

Author's Response: Oh, I certianly hope so!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 12:44 am Title: Part 1

Very funny, look foward to more

Author's Response: :D Danka.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Part 1

this looks to be very interesting wonder what the big game is. More please.

Author's Response: The big game is...the big game. It just is. Kind of a McGuffin plot device?

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 12:15 am Title: Part 1

great start, I'm looking forward to more

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: stacy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2006 - 12:02 am Title: Part 1

um, yeah, this is very strange. i wonder how they're going to find their way out of this mess. what happened to dawn? did she go back to being a green blob of energy? i hope my stomach can handle a repeat from band candy. giles and joyce being together is sometimes gross to me. well, i don't know norweigan, but i do know that if this is before anya became a vengeance demon, then she went by the name aud. anyanka came afterwards, i'm pretty sure anyway. well, i'm interested to see what else you do with this.

Author's Response: Don't you trust me? And the G/J isn't going to be overly explicit. They're not the coupling I'm *really* interested in. As for Anyanks v Aud...Aud is shuch an aud name, don't you agree? I much prefer Anyanka.

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Part 1

Great start. Love it... well everything except that stupid last name Joss slapped on Spike. Bad Joss

Author's Response: Ha, I know. That was really mean of him...but also just a little bit funny. In a mean way.

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: Part 1

HAHAHahaha its soo funny i likey i likey! update soon please :)

Author's Response: haha, thanks! I'll get to finishing my edits quickly.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 10:56 pm Title: Part 1

Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Merci!!

Reviewer: evildeadgirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 10:45 pm Title: Part 1

I think its fantastic! I can't wait to read the rest :D

Author's Response: Thanks! It was really fun to write!

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