Very sweet, liked it a lot. Could use editing, several grammar/punctuation/word problems to be cleaned up. Overall, very enjoyable!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I didn't realize I even had an unresponded to review for this story. Yes, I know it has some issues and I have been planning a read through to fix those up. I didn't have a beta when I first started writing. :) Thanks again for the review! I am so happy you enjoyed it.

Loved it u haf asked earlyer in the story about ur portrayal of chacters. I think it was great! Besides like u saud its au!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Amazing! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Is she pregnant? :) Just a feeling I got...
So this is the end? Feels sad, because I really loved your story! Luckily, I can read Lose Control and Forbidden Passion :) Love them too! ;)

Author's Response: You guessed it, she's preggers. I left it there thinking I might come back some day and right a fluffy one shot about them later. I may get around to it someday. I'll miss your constant reviews for this story, guess that just means I have to get on the ball for the other ones, huh? FP and LC are both coming to an end, figuring less than five chappies left on each; unless muse gets a wild hair up her bum! I have kept myself at a restricted 2 WIPS at once, which is hard since my mind runs rampant with story ideas. I'm too afraid that I'd get too much on my plate with more stories than that and leave my wonderful readers in the lurch. Couldn't do that at all! So, glad you loved this one so much, keep up with the others and don't worry too much...there will always be more in store for you from my strange and sometimes warped gooey mind. Thanks so much, Ariadne!

Wow , i got angry , i even cried. its so near to what happened to me execpt i didn´t got in to a new relationship.

I was frustraded when i read what others reviewed. I been abused and even álmost strangled and . i could totaly understand Rileys behavior. And i can also relate to Spikes feelings , that he wanna kill Riley.. I have a male friend who wanted to kill or abuse my X-housebound badly! There is no rules for how people reacts when somebody they care for gets hurt!

So please belive me when i say , that this was one of teh best fics i read .. And to me it was so close to the real thing it scared me. I liked it a lot!

Author's Response: Hey Spikes Babe! Thank you so much for the heartfelt review! While I haven't been through the through the exact same thing that many people have went through with a physically abusive partner, I have had to deal with an emotionally abusive one and I tried to bring that out in the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story. Breathless was my very first venture into the fanfic world and I am astounded at the response it reveived. Thank you again!!!

Don't forget to mark this as complete! Great job, loved this fic.

Author's Response: OMG! Thank you for reminding me. I totally forgot to do that! Thanks for the review!

OH that was such a great ending, but why do I have this little feeling you are cheating us on the little gift he is going to flip on the way she rubbed to tummy first makes me wonder is she pregnant.


Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I had originally planned on taking the final chapter all the way to the big announcement, but time became an issue as well as interest. While I love this story since it was my very first, I was starting to get bored with it and wanted to hurry and finish. I really dislike it when authors leave their storys as WIPs and I didn't want to do that to my readers since you guys have been so wonderful about leaving reviews! thanks again!

Really enjoyed reading this story and in my imagination, Buffy breaks the news of the upcoming addition to their family with a song.

Thanks for this story and look forward to reading your other stories.

Author's Response: Wouldn't that be funny? Somehow I think finding the perfect song to announce getting married and preggers would be difficult. Thanks for thre review, vette!