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Reviewer: camp8 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 48:Epilogue

you did such a good job on this story.

thank you

Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writting this one and the enormity of my reviews has given me the courage to write more in the future!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 47

Oh yes.

Author's Response: Oh...thank you.

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 47

AWWWWWW.... I love that song and it absolutely fit with this chapter.. Can't wait for an update!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Hana. I had originally planned to use another song and actually had already written the chapter almost 4 months ago. When this song came out, I decided to rewrite the entire ending! The last update will be out later today so stay tuned!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 47

What a great grand gesture! (Did you watch Arrested Development, on the off? That's what I think of now when I hear grand gesture...just wondering.) Great chapter, I'm glad they're talking and finally clearing the air. Silly rabbits, don't they know they belong together?

Author's Response: I watched a couple of episodes of AD, never really grabbed my attention. Think it had to do with the fact it was on during one of my night classes, so I only got to watch one here and there. I have been using the phrase 'grand gesture' for years now. Thank you for the wonderful review, Xela.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 47

Whew I also thought he got up to leave, glad he didn't do . This was very gratifying, glad their back together, I want to hit Angel though, Spike wanted to come clean from the beginning but the great poof talk him out of it to preserve his own skin, but that's all done with. Anxiously awaiting more.

Author's Response: Had to throw in some "Eek" factor to get your emotions going. I know how you feel about Angel, I often want to hit him! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: camp8 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 47

yay yay yay yay

Author's Response: Was that good enough for you!? I read the "fix it" review and laughed. Glad it was up to your satisfaction.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 47

awwww cute chapter:)

cant wait for you to update again soon

Author's Response: Thank you! Originally I had planned for that chapter to be uber sad and teary. Decided to change it at the last minute. Glad to hear you liked it.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 47

Yay they are cack together again I hope. And she has been around Giles for to long with the oh dear lord.

Author's Response: Do you really think I would break them up after all this work? Yeah, you probably do since I made their relationship a disaster! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 47

I loved song it was very fitting...Hope this is a start to Buffy and Spike sorting out their problem.... Thanks for the update Spikes Mrs....

Author's Response: I thought the song worked out great for the mood I was aiming for. The very last chapter will be posted sometime today. I am a little sad to see it go! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 46

Angel revealing his past is honest and daring, hope that Buffy can see that men can be victims by women too! Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks Vette. You know Angel must have felt pretty bad about his actions to come out and finally tell Buffy. Glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 46

Oh Angel. He never changes, does he? But I do hope Buffy gets over it and finds Spike before they do something equally stupid and have to start aaaallllll the way over.

Author's Response: Ah Angel. Once a manipulating-broody bastard...always a manipulating-broody bastard.LoL!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter 46

I hate the pregnancy card, doesn't work much anymore these days (I hope); plus Dru always sounds like no one can say No to her, crazy or not.. Can we please dump her at the nearest mental health ward or the Jerry Springer show and get on with lives/ Good Chapter.

Author's Response: I actually know of a girl that pulled the same stunt that Dru did in this chapter. Total scankalicious bitch. Luckily, my best friend didnt fall for the lie. I actually like Dr's character in the show, but didnt want her with Spike. Maybe some other sexy villan. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Joan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2007 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 46

can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Joan, glad you are liking it!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2007 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 46

I guessed all of this chapters ago , when Lilah brought the file to Buffy , but it's good to have it all out in the open . So what's Ms. "let me throw him out of my life before getting the full story going to do now"?
Hope you can update soon, and why only from work?

Author's Response: I only have access from work because there isnt any internet available out in the sticks where we live. Totally sucks, but I have peace and quiet all the time. Sorry I was so predictable, bu glad you are liking it none the less. The last full chapter will be up tomorrow night! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2007 - 09:08 am Title: Chapter 46

:) love the update


hope you have another one for us soon

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be up by tomorrow night, after that...only one more chapter! Eek!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2007 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter 46

OH please say yes Buffy, and how could Angel 2 girls at one time.
More please, love it especially the back history of Angel and Buffy


Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Two things I feel that I need work on are my secondary characterization and my history of main characters. Glad that you enjoyed them!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2007 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter 46

And there's Angel still trying to do what he thinks is best for Buffy and cocking it up again. Well at least he's done the right thing now. Although Buffy had better be quick, Spike's been alone and drinking for days now. Oh and she has no option she will forgive him - my glass is half full. Really enjoying this and sad to hear it's coming to an end.

Author's Response: Leave it to Angel to try and control the lives of everyone around him. Thanks for leaving a review, Sam! It's almost over, all remaining chapters should be up by Wed.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2007 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 45

ahhhh! please don't stop there! what happens next? is there a happy ending at the end of it all?


Author's Response: Ah...I love optimisim! You won't have to wait too long for an answer. I will post the next chapter tomorrow night. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2007 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 45

hehe cant wait for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: Thanks! It's coming up soon!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 45

i think the person who gave you that review is crazy! I think ur story is wonderful

Author's Response: Well thank you very much Shelly. I am inclined to agree with you on that one! :)~

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 45

So Spike was home! Great update! Can't wait to read more!

I absolutely love this fic and can't see why anyone has a reason to complain about it!




Author's Response: Of course Spike was home. Even I am not that mean as to send him out of town at such a crucial part of the story! Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Caz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 45

well I don't think you made him a piece of meat. I find his reactions very belivable except the 48 hours thing think it was a little short but whatever it's not like I'd stop reading for details that in my head doesn't work. cuase they work in your head and it's your story and now I'm rambeling thats what you get when you ask for my opinion

Author's Response: Two days was a bit short looking back. I had originally planned to make their time apart longer, but since I really want to finish this story before I get too burned out. Glad to hear you still liked it though!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 45

I don't agree with that reviewer at all. I love this story, it just keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: The end of the story is drawing near, maybe only about 3 more chapters to go. Four at the most and maybe a short epilouge or something. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 45

I actually liked this chapter and I hope you post soon... It is after all your story. You can do whatever.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it Hana. I actually had a good bit more to put with it, but I liked leaving the cliffhanger of if he got through or not. Evil me. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 45

Seems to me that when you write an AU, the idea is that the characters are gonna react differently to certain situations... If not, then why write and AU at all?

Mebbe Spike isn't exactly as in the series, but hello! not vampire anymore. I suppose Human!Spike would react differently to certain things too.

Anyhoo, I like the story, I read the updates, and I get frustrated because I only have a chapter (maybe two or three if I'm not paying much attention to the page) to read in a go...

Author's Response: Maybe the person writting in didn't consider the fact that my story is very AU and that contributes to different reactions from the characters? So very sorry that I make you guys wait a week for updates. I really would like to write more, but without internet at home and this time of the year being the busiest for law enforcement...I tend to get a bit swamped from time to time. The next update will be out midweek since I am actually taking some time off and going to visit friends out of town! Yea! Thanks again, Avalon!

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