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Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2007 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 42

OK I know you said cliffhanger but OMG. Please hurry with the next chapter so that I can get off the edge of my seat. Have read 2 or 3 chapters together so haven't been reviewing each one but this is great reading. Please keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sam. I do love a good cliffhanger; keeps em coming back for more, hopefully. I am going to try real hard to get a chapter out some time tonight. Let's all keep our fingers crossed that bad things dont happen to throw me off course!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 42

You sure do cliffhangers well!! I'm dying to know what was in those papers! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I am an evil individual who totally adores cliffhangers! Keeps the readers coming back for more. Thanks for the review and the next chapter should be out by tomorrow if all goes well tonight at work!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter 42

:O dont leave us hanging here lol .....hmm i wonder whats in the letter


hope you update soon:)

Author's Response: I am aiming to have another chapter out by tomorrow or Friday morning at the latest depending on how busy work is the next couple of nights. Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 42

oh! oh! what is it? upsdate soon please.....

Author's Response: I will certainly try to have something out soon, aiming for either tomorrow night or friday morning if work is slow. It's a total strain trying to write while at work, but since there isnt any internet access out in the sticks where I live this will have to do for now. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 42

oh please hurry and update again soon. i can't wait to see what buffy read on the papers.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am so glad that everyone seems to be loving the story. The next chapter will be all sorts of angsty and grr, but things will work out soon!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 42

Aaahg, I want to know!

Author's Response: Soon my pet...soon!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter 42

Oh no this is bad, I hope Buffy and Spike will be able to work it out.



Author's Response: WARNING!!! Angst is coming...there will be arguing and unpleasantries... but please stay with me because I am not a total sadist. I, along with everyone else on this site loves the Spuffiness and want it to work out. That is unless it is possible for Spike to be with me which in that case I would send Buffy far far away. But...enough with the rambling. Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter 42

Evil place to leave it........ Need to know what Spikes suppose to have done please.......

Loved the chapter it had good thought out content, and I'm glad to see that Riley addmitted he was a bastard to the court, and the Judge didn't argue with him just read out the sentence....It that Bitch Lilah thats causing trouble now.........

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and I am happy to hear that the chapter flowed so well. I wrote it in bits and pieces over the duration of my 12 hour shift and was worried that it would appear all choppy. Yes, Lilah is being an evil bitch...it's what she does best!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 41

Oh boy, what does Lilah have planned?? Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: You will most certainly not like Lilah in the next chapter! That is of course, if Muse shows up and lets me write it. Kinda depressed this week because my kittycat is missing. :( Sad and dont wanna write which is bad because I had so many ideas over the weekend. Good thing I wrote them down! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 11:31 am Title: Chapter 41

Oh no what is lilah planing. It can not be good for Buffy and Spike. And Riley why would he have the ring at the hospital did he think he could back together with her.

Author's Response: Trouble is definitely brewing for Spike and Buffy! The Lilah in my story is based more on the earlier seasons of her on Angel. Vendictive and bitchy. As far as Riley and the ring, if my Muse will get her butt in gear it will be explained in the next chapter! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 11:26 am Title: Chapter 41

That was a great chapter, but your gonna make trouble for them now? Now that they are so in love? come on don't do it.

Author's Response: I am a big ol meanie because there will be DRAMA and ANGST coming up. Please don't be too mad at me! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 10:24 am Title: Chapter 41

Sorry I don't always review, but I do look forward to your updates, I am a bad, rude woman !! ( where did I hear that line before??) anyway, after the way Riley had behaved, like a complete ass, that with his brush with death and the taking of a human life, accident or not, that he has seen the light, and now is seeking some redemption. As for Lilah, I am sure she will burn someday, what ever she is up to I am hoping that our duo can put her in her place and send her on her miserable way. Good chapter, great job and thanks

Author's Response: Aww, thanks for reviewing this time Debbie and I totally forgive you for not commenting every time, sometimes you just forget. At least that is my problem. As far as Riley goes, he is an ass but I am glad that he is now trying to make up for the crappy things he pulled. Lilah will get away unscathed, well at least in the sense that no actual harm will come to her. Spike and Buffy will have some misery heading their way, but we should all keep the faith that they will prevail! Thanks again!!!!!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 08:44 am Title: Chapter 41

Great update, loved the Spuffyness at the end. I hate Lilah, though. :)

Author's Response: I kinda liked Lilah towards the end, but really not at the first part. Total bitch then and that's who I am basing this character on. Most certainly pre-Wesley-shagging-Lilah! LoL! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter 41

What the bloody hell is Lilah up to ? Loved the up date looking forwards to the next....

Author's Response: Lilah is being a naughty girl. Will her plan work or not? Hmm...that is the question. Thanks for the review!!!!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter 41

oh no! I have a feeling Lilah is not going to let them stay happy! can't wait to see whats next!

Author's Response: Thank you Shelly! Lilah is up to no good and there is some angst ahead. I should have another chapter out maybe midweek. Stay tuned, thanks again!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 09:54 am Title: Chapter 40

Oh that was good, I wonder if the trial will continue. Spike knew just what to do.


Author's Response: Thank you so much. Spike always knows what to do because he kicks ass and is the perfect boyfriend...or is he? DumDumDum.....

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2007 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter 39

more please

Author's Response: If all goes well over the next couple of hours, your wish could be granted. Please tell all of the citizens in my county to not act stupid this week so that I can write! :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 39

Riley sure is pathetic. Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am aiming to have another chapter out by Friday!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 39

Nice update but couldn't Riley put us all out of our misery by having a fatal crash? Loved the Spuffiness but it would seem that there could be trouble ahead. More please.

Author's Response: Wouldn't that be nice? But, no...our dear annoying bumbling fool has to stick around to cause a ruckus in our fav blonde duo' s relationship. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 39

Oh I love it, why do I feel Riley will either kill someone important or get himself killed.

Small airless room, at least you get a small airless room, I have a large room that at times I have to share with 500 other people answering phone for peoples orders.

More please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Riley is destined to cause some drama, but nothing to bad will result from his drinking and driving. Nope, his major drama will be saved for causing angst for Spike and Buffy.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter 39

Really enjoying this story. More please! :)

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter 39

Oh, can Riley please do an OJ on the highway but with no harm done to the public and he meets a end full of blazing glory, LOL.........

Kimber

lovely Spuffy moment

Author's Response: Riley will most certainly cause some unwanted damage to himself and probably to others but will live to see another day. Mainly because I need him for the angst issue that is coming up. Thanks for the review, Kimber.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 38

Can't believe Riley's going to try to get away with a insanity plea! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: He can try! Can't say if he will succeed or not! Thanks for the review and I hope to have something out by Sunday morning!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 11:17 am Title: Chapter 38

Good update. Surely Riley's insane to think he's going to get away with it. Please don't make it too bad for Buffy.

Author's Response: Well, Riley is a tad bit nutso! The trial part is actually not going to be too bad on Buffy. Or, that's what I imagine as of right now. It's the aftermath that leads to some problems. Ok...that's too much information for now! Thanks for the review, Sam!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter 38

Oh, I hope the judge hits them both, Lilah and Riley, with his wooden thingy.........

OH, I can't wait for the response.........

More please

Author's Response: Hey Kimber. i am planning (hoping) to have another chapter out sometime this weekend. My computer at home went caput and all of my chapter outlines are on it. My husband, being all sweet, took it to the shop before I could get my dad darned disc out of the drive. Hope the comp techs dont read too much!!! Anyways, going on my memory on the next chapter, so it may take a little longer than normal. Hopefully by Sunday morning!

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