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Date: 01/21/2016 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2013 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter 33

Despite quite a number of grammar/spelling errors and typos, this is a well-written story. Though I have to say Spike turned his hatred of Buffy into love so quickly it was a bit unbelievable. I think Buffy would have had to do quite few more selfless things for Spike to trust her enough to fall in love with him. And while I get the appeal of Spike-Slayer and Buffy-Vampire, in this case, when vamp falls for Slayer, it's the stereotypical mooning girl, pining for the hot, desirable guy, instead of how it was on the show, with charming role reversal of the badass hot guy totally gone over the sweet, strong heroine. Like the dialogue; each character sounded like him/herself.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2009 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 33

Hey this was brilliant! I loved this story. Slayer Spike and Vamp Buffy are one of my favorite type of stories. I am on to read the sequel now, but I thought the last part was just perfect ending, no more needed...At least for this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Brett! I'm happy you enjoyed it! I originally hadn't planned on doing a sequel, but the lovely Sotia convinced me otherwise. LOL Apparently I make her sad alot with my stories. Thanks for the review, hun, hope you like the sequel, too!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2008 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 33

Well Sotia and Cordykitten are very wise, as this story just beggs for a sequel. Yes, I know you're altready writing it, just wanted to stress that point.

It's a great fic, with an interesting take on things and I've always loved Spike as the Slayer... and Vamp Buffy (except for a couple of fics that shall not be mentioned).

Loved it (well... the angst not that much, but hey... maybe just maybe the sequel will be lighter?)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Andrei! I'm uber-excited that you made good on your promise to read! :) The idea of the story actually came from a very intriguing dream I had and after a long chat with a good friend from the Realm, I was convinced to write and post it. I was shocked, to say the least, that it received such high marks!
I am hard at work on the sequel, just so you know. While I have promised the requested "happy ending" for our lovely blonde couple, I will tell you like I told Sotia.....I never promised to make the road wouldn't be filled with potholes and speedbumps up to the fairytale ending. LOL Thank you so much for the wonderful review and I hope you stick around for the completion of the sequel.

Reviewer: Kelli Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2008 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 33

So...when is the sequel going to be up? hehe!! Excellent writing! Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Hey Kelli! Thanks for the review, I am already working on the sequel and hope to have the first chapter up soon. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 09:35 am Title: Chapter 33

oooooh you evil bint! i was crying right along with Fred and Spike (love their moments!) and then u bring in Halfrek!!! sooo write a sequel! i'm taking up the petition too!!!! WRITE! A! SEQUEL!!

loved this story! lol so glad i finally got to sit down and read it!

Author's Response: Hmmm...to give you a clue about the vengeance demon or not? Tricky. Let's just say that Halfrek doesn't make an appearance in my story and leave it at that! Oh and don't worry, I will write a sequel. Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad that you liked it so much. I knew you would, but someone kept distracting you, right? ")

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 09:18 am Title: Chapter 32

omg u pulled a S2!! that was wicked cool! and interwove it with S5! great job Tori! i loved this chapter and am glad that Giles finally saw the light. poor Spike! u know u'll have to bring her back right?

Author's Response: Yes, poor Spike...someone should comfort him, but who? Me. Anyway, so happy to hear that you approve of my wickedly evil mind!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 09:04 am Title: Chapter 31

okay, i totally expected Faith to die but what the hell?? i hope there's a good ass reason for what Buffy did!

(and you did a great job on the fight Tori!)

Author's Response: Don't you know me well enough by now to know that I love evil confusing cliffhangers? loL! thanks for the review!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 07:01 am Title: Chapter 30

yes, i don't like giles! he's a freakin' ass in this story! and Spike needs to watch who he stabs more closely. good use of S7 too!

Author's Response: I'd be shocked if you did like Giles right now! Guess the power of the scythe got Spike a little wound up, huh?

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 06:46 am Title: Chapter 29

weird chapter! buffy begging to save faith? that is weird to me! and they are so screwed! i hope faith gets out of her revenge kick before it's too late. and i'm surprised to say this, but i hope they stake willow's ass!

Author's Response: Willow being staked wouldn't be a bad thing, that's for sure. As for Buffy begging Faith, wouldn't you do something like that if you were grasping at straws to squelch an apacolypse?

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Date: 03/22/2008 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 28

that was so freakin' hot!!! great chapter! although Andrew seemed kind of different, u use what u can right?

Author's Response: I always wanted Andrew to be more of a "go-to" guy instead of the one everybody picked on at first. He always seemed very knowledgable with the demon stuff anyway.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2008 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 27

Giles needs to grow a personality and let Spike grow up and Faith needs a good ass-kicking! she a stupid freakin' hoe bag if she thinks Willow is gonna keep good on her word!

Author's Response: Giles's definitely needs a major readjusting and it will happen eventually.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2008 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 26

wow, i wish the scoobs had accepted Spike asquick as they did Buffy! great chapter!

Author's Response: Don't we all wish that the scoobs (or well, Willow and Xander) could have accepted Spike.Thanks!

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter 25

woah! who the hell did she sire??? good chapter!

Author's Response: Ha! Keep you on your toes, don't I?

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 24

LMAO! well if Willow could almost end the world, y not Anya?! and yep, just as i thought, Wes is still poncey!

Author's Response: Exactly! Anya was way more scarier in the show and Willow almost made everything cablooey.

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter 23

::rolls eyes:: oh jeez, here comes the Wimp Watcher!! u know, i'm glad Wes grew a pair before he died. he was sort of a joke until s4-5. Fred really tore him up! and it sucked the way he died. but at least he died w/ a smile. and woo-HOO! great sex scene!

Author's Response: Yes, in the first part Wes is very much BtVS watcher and not the gruff guy he turned out to be in ATS.

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter 22

awww poor fred! :o( i feel so sorry for her. i've been there! and dayum, Spike is moving pretty fast!

Author's Response: Fred will recover, promise! I like her character too much to let her hurt too much.

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 09:22 am Title: Chapter 21

woo-hoo!!! perfect day in the Spuffy world!!! except, u know, Buffy being a vamp and all!! love this tori!!!

Author's Response: I don't know if having your romp in the kitchen part of any perfect day. At least not in my book!

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter 20

awesome chapter!!! see, everything Spike did to her, i'd do to Spike! lol and what line are you talking about? i didn't catch it!

Author's Response: Thanks! As for the line, it was: “I’m only alive when you’re inside me.” Which Cordy said to Angel when possessed in the ballet episode.

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter 19

omg!!! she staked Xander!!! what the hell?!! and isn't that kind of ironic. Willow biting/killing Tara. i just noticed that.

Author's Response: I based Buffy staking Xander on the Angel/Darla thing. And I just couldn't leave out Willow wanting Tara in some shape or form.

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 06:51 am Title: Chapter 18

great chapter!!! can't wait for the fight!

Author's Response: Thanks! It'll be interesting, that's for sure!

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 17

i would've killed him too! damn motherf**cker!! go Buffy!!! and i'm so glad Spike went back! yay!

Author's Response: I figured pretty much any woman would do what Buffy did.

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 06:34 am Title: Chapter 16

ya! that's what i'm talking about!!! go Tori!

Author's Response: Glad it meets your approval! LoL! I couldn't keep them together forever.

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 15

yay! woo! "Grrrr"Spike is back!

Author's Response: Did you really think I'd keep him all docile and contained? Really woman!

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Date: 03/21/2008 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 14

omg, i love Buffy's dress! that was awesome! and LMAO at Angel dancing. seeing as how i've seen him dance before, i can just see what a total dork he's being!! and THANK GOD Spike's not in love w/ Dru (finally)!

Author's Response: I love the dress, too! Sadly, I actually modeled it after an outfit on the Sims 2, just made it shorter. And, I couldn't keep Spike pining over Dru when Buffy's back, could I?

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