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Reviewer: PamS Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 10:57 am Title: Chapter 28

Ok Spike.. can you handle that Buffy swings both ways? Or maybe that has been addressed before and I have forgotten.

Welcome back .. and I hope there weren't too many crazies running around ... bad weather and all..




Author's Response: It was mentioned earlier on about Buffy's tendancy to swing towards the ladies, or Willow especially. He wasn't totally apalled by the idea. Glad to see you haven't forgotten about this story! I am back and hopefully ready to write! As far as the crazies...they never sleep!

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2007 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 27

Im totally loving this story! Finally, a story about spike as a slayer that doesnt suck like others do. i love it. You really got spike's rebel side plus buffy's slayer side all in one. and i love how you added bits of spike's personality into buffy to make her a vamp. pretty cool. i cant wait to read more about angel, fred, and gunn too. And making Angel like Xander is too funny! :)
Brillant Job!
xoxox

Author's Response: Wow, Stephanie...thank you so much for the serious boost to my confidence in writing! :) I hope the remainder of the story meets your expectations! I am suffering from Muse vacation (unsheduled, of course), but hope to get back in the saddle very soon! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 27

Can't wait to read what comes next!
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Author's Response: Thanks! Hope to have something out soon!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 9

Love the idea of Angel dressing like a shmuck!

This story is great!
XXX

Author's Response: Thanks, Sotia! The Hawaiian shirt idea actually came from one of my readers as a suggestion and I just had to put it in there! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2007 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 27

So Faith is Willow's new toy... I hope Buffy will find Spike in time...

Author's Response: Yep, quite interesting...wonder who is more insane? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2007 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter 27

Spike was right to worry how his father would take him being with Buffy. So there will be more trouble after the apocalypse. Hopefully he'll come around when he sees that she is helpful.
So Faith is back? That would be bad new even if she wouldn't work with Willow. That's even worse. At last she spilled the news to Buffy too early. ~ Till next chapter!

Author's Response: Ack, somehow I missed your review. Shame on me! I imagine Giles will come around eventually. Faith is definitely back and ready to cause some pain; thankfully, she's a big ol' blabbermouth. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2007 - 08:39 am Title: Chapter 27

It's kinda sad Giles won't give Buffy a chance, but I can understand where he's coming from.... but who knows maybe someday Buffy will be able to win him over a bit.
I enjoyed the Buffy/Faith confronation, thank goodness Faith accidently exposed her involvement with Willow. And Faith and Willow as team... very interesting. Willow is certainly creating quite an intriguing team for herself, can't wait to find out what other suprises she has up her sleeve. Wonderful update!

Author's Response: I imagine Giles will come around after everything I have in store for the couple. Should prove to be interesting. Thankfully, Faith doesn't know how to keep her trap shut. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2007 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 27

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to see you're still with me!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2007 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 27

Nice update.

Author's Response: Thanks, Sam!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2007 - 08:56 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh that was good.

Author's Response: Thank you kindly!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2007 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter 27

Haven't seen this in a while.

Big weekend ...Hopefully the week off helped.
And I back Coach for leaving "P" home. The kid will self destruct sooner or later IMHO.

Enjoyed..

Author's Response: IMHO, I really really really hope LSU stomps the ever living poo out of Bama. That's bad of me since it is my home state and all, but their fans are irritating me something awful. Thanks for the review. Glad to see someone out there is still reading since it took so long for an update. All of the sudden muse just up and decided to work on LC, pretty happy about that, too. Thought it was totally gone!

Author's Response: Oh and Pam, the drunken arrests have begun. One of my officers just brought in a man from LA who was so drunk he didnt know what hotel he was staying in and...he was taken in with no clothes on for public intox and indecency (he was wandering around outside in the buff!) Geesh, football weekends rock!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2007 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter 26

Just loved this sentence:
Tears welled in Fred’s luminous chocolate brown eyes, chin trembling, she laid her head down on top of the juncture that was their hands and let the sadness pour from her body.

You are amazing! :) I'm stunned with admiration :)

Author's Response: {{blushes}} Wow, you sure know how to make a writer happy! Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 26

Loved the update :) Hot start... and Fred seems to have accepted that Spike and Buffy are an item and is okay with it (as much as she can for now).
Good Buffy was there, huh? The others never expected her or Giles to practice magic. Can be helpful in the fight :)

Author's Response: Yes, she's accepted it as much as her heart will allow at the moment. Thanks!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 26

Interesting. I wonder if Fred's going to follow in cannon!Willow's footsteps and go a little power-crazy. Could get interesting. Great stuff, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Xela! Yes, I figure there is potential for an all consuming evil wicca Fred, but I haven't gotten all that panned out just yet. Thanks!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 08:40 am Title: Chapter 26

Nice update. Fred's been keeping a few secrets hasn't she (and so it would appear has Giles). Glad she and Spike have sorted things out but something feels a bit off. Will Fred be the willing human sacrifice to get her own back or just because she dabbles in things that she shouldn't? Looking forward to finding out more.

Author's Response: It will most certainly be an interesting twist, shouldn't it! thanks so much, Sam!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 05:16 am Title: Chapter 26

I liked how Spike handled the Fred situation, I think total honesty was the best way to go. I also enjoyed learning the new info about Willow's plan, should be interesting to see who the willing sacrifice is. Great chapter!

Author's Response: I just couldn't deal with writting an evil Fred, just wasnt right. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 26

Still loving this!!! I hope you will be able to update sooner!

Author's Response: I will try, but for some reason my muse isn't flowing as fast as I would like. I will try though, promise! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 26

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to hear it!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 26

:) awesome update...can't wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thanks ever so much!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:06 am Title: Chapter 26

So both GIles and Fred are magick users and the group doesn't know.

Why do I feel Fred will be the human sacerfice.

Author's Response: It's more like the demon in Buffy is able to sense the magical aspect that flows from the other two. Now, the interesting part should be finding out if they knew about their abilities. Thanks!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 09:25 am Title: Chapter 26

Congratulations on the Football Game ... great win.

Enjoying this fic.. Poor Fred.

But I'm stuck on Forbidden..

Author's Response: Well, lucky for you I just posted another chapter of FP, huh? Thanks so much, Pam. Congrats to you, too!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2007 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter 25

haha, I love how she threw Willy for a loop. Greatness. Love this!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter 25

Thoughtful Buffy. Hee, the smell thing.

Author's Response: Yes, it was very kind of her! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 25

Oh after Buffy told what she knows facing Anyanka as a combatant (enemy) won't be too easy.
Willow is involved then but another player too. I wonder if we know him (knew him as a human). :)

Author's Response: Oh yes, there are actually two other players that will be introduced shortly. Thanks!

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 25

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: WooHoo! Glad to hear it!!!!!!!!!!!

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