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Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2007 - 02:38 am Title: Lullabye

the name thing is so sweet. Annabeth is a beautiful name, and the whole William for a boy thing... that kind of stuff always gets to my mushy side *sniff, smile* lol

The song is gorgeous, too. Awesome choice :)

Author's Response: Well... you know my whole thing for traditional names... and Anna Elizabeth, is one that's always stuck with me. Thanks!

Reviewer: Cissi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2007 - 07:26 pm Title: Declarations

Hi!
I started to read this story yesterday and only stopped when I really had to go to sleep :) Ooo it's so sweet! Actually, I've never read a story by a guy but you're absolutley the best author. You describe everything so well! In the chapter were Buffy and Spike have sex in Vegas they didn't say anything to each other, and still it made me all teary :) At the end of each chapter, I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes. I really hope to read more from you soon! This story is incredible, love it!!
Sorry for my bad English, I'm Swedish ;) //Cissi

Author's Response: Well, beautiful, I do have to say I'm flattered and... incredibly giddy, lol... There's only a few people out there that have ever made me blush, and you have been the latest :) I'm very happy to hear you're enjoying the story; you lovelies and your words really are my muses :) Thank you for the awesome review, sweetheart! :) And you needn't worry, my love, your English is a lot better than mine, lol ;P

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 10:09 pm Title: Declarations

Bittersweet. Very bittersweet. :( I know that it doesn't really matter so much who the biological "father" is when there's a very willing father, but I don't want Spike to be deceived! Ah!!!! I want it to be happy. NOW!

Author's Response: I don't think anybody wants to see Spike, deceived, even I'm feeling for him, I really am... but I'm still feeling a little bit evil, so... it's gonna be a while still for him to know the truth, but the question is... will he still be willing after he finds out the truth? :P Thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: Declarations

Sweet, romantic schmoop! Spike blowing off Lilah in his excitement to join Buffy at the doctor's office was charming.

Author's Response: Who me? Yeah okay, lol ;) Thanks, glad you liked!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 08:43 pm Title: Declarations

I wonder what Spike would have done if he knew that Lilah wanted to talk about a promotion; I hope he still would have gone to the doctor's appointment.
Awe :) Spike may have told her first but Buffy said it back :)) I hope he won't forget his feelings when things are revealed.

Author's Response: Well, Spike is so smitten with Buffy I'd like to think that he would have blown her off anyway, lol...
Maybe he won't forget his feelings, but you have to know he's gonna be hurt anyway, it's just the way it is, don't you think?
Thanks for the review, sweet! I'm very glad you like :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 04:36 pm Title: Declarations

woonderful, really enjoyed this, dreading when William finds out its not his

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked :)

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 04:01 pm Title: Declarations

What a stubborn couple. I forsee a good deal of angst coming up for these two boneheads. Please update soon. Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Yes, a lot of angst, though I'm trying not to make it so much, 'cause even though I like angst, I suck at writing it, lol... Thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 03:21 pm Title: Declarations

:-D Awesome chapter. It's one of my favorites lol. It's so sweet and romantic and stuff lol.

Author's Response: Sweet and romantic and stuff. Right on. That's just what I was going for! lol... Thanks!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 10:58 am Title: Declarations

Poor William, he is going to be devastated. It´s unimaginable that she keeps her lies and deceit up in a situation like this. My compassion for Buffy has dwindled down to zero.

Author's Response: It's understandable that your compassion for Buffy isn't there anymore. It's something I was expecting... kinda. I know Buffy isn't being such a good girl in this, and that she's lying to him, and that it doesn't seem like a good enough reason, I'm not gonna ask you to understand, but she has her reasons, might not be good ones, but they're there, lol :P

Author's Response: Still, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It's awesome to know what you guys think. Thank you for the review! I appreciate it.

(sry, kinda out of it, LOL)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 - 09:48 am Title: Declarations

Oh I love it, so they want to be surprised.

MOre please, love it.

Author's Response: Yep, much with the surprises. Well okay, it was mostly my indecision on if it should be a boy or a girl, lol :P Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Body & Soul

To your last answer: But it made the situation even more unforgettable. And think of the teasing you can do when he's older :)
Oh what should I say? Loved it :)
Especially both of them acknowledge that they are in love. But from acknowledge it to oneself and to speak it out loud to the other, that's a bit harder to do.
Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: C’mon now, can’t do that to me boy. His mum already has enough ammunition with the naked baby pics. I can just picture her showing them off to his girlfriend when he’s older “…and here’s Isaiah in the bath” ;P

Yeah, the feelings are coming out soon, and once done we get closer to the truth getting revealed then we start with the angst but, I gotta give them a few more happy times first ;) Thank you for the review, sweetheart!

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 07:55 pm Title: Body & Soul

Amazing story. Looking forward to more. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Linz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 07:20 pm Title: Body & Soul

uh oh and WOW,what a beautifully descripted chapter! i have knots in my stomach cuz of you :) (shakes fist). Ill write to you soon, cant wait for more, this is wonderful!!1
xxx
your always Buffy

Author's Response: Aw, thanks princess. I’d apologize for your knots but you know you love ‘em :P

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 08:34 am Title: Body & Soul

wonderful as always....looking forward to the next bit

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 08:28 am Title: Body & Soul

SO we are in love, are we going to hose them down anytime soon.

MOre please, love it.

Author's Response: Might of just had to if they kept going at it ;) Thanks for the review, love!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 05:35 am Title: Body & Soul

Yay!!! :) YAY! :) YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! Haha, I was thrilled to see this hot chap get posted. And it was sweet too... but I'm a big kissing fan, so it was hot, haha. :) Looking forward to them admitting their feelings, but dreading the truth coming out... but it has to! Update soon!

Author's Response: I’m a big kissing fan too. You can tell a lot by a way a person kisses you and it’s just *cute boy smile* nice. I’m glad you enjoyed this chapter ‘cause I had a lot of giggly fun writing it :P Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: I mean, lots of laughing manly fun ;)

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 05:15 am Title: Body & Soul

:D sexy. very very sexy. and intense. very very intense. and steamy and hot and is there a uh... an award for best kiss in a Spuffy fic? because if so, you know who'll be nominating you ;) great chapter!

Author's Response: Best kiss? Nah… best prattle maybe LOL :P Thanks!

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 05:14 am Title: Epiphany

One of the sweetestest scenes ever! lol, awesome chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: reader Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 04:18 am Title: Body & Soul

and now that she knows she loves him she also knows that he deserves to know that the baby might not be his. i think that it is really time that buffy is honest about that.

Author's Response: Yeah, he deserves to know, but that’s still a ways to come. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 03:00 am Title: Body & Soul

What a beautifully written chapter! It reads as though you wrote it effortlessly and without pause ... as though it just flowed. Really nicely done.

I hope that things don't get too hairy for these two ... I'd hate to see the bottom fall out on their sweet relationship. (granted it is sort of based upon a lie) I really like how you have developed their potential future should things work out smoothly (if that even makes sense).



Author's Response: Thank you. That is one of the sweetest compliments about my writing that I’ve ever gotten.

It really does make sense. You can’t just jump straight to the angst and have everything work out, you know? Thanks for the review, sweetie!

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 01:21 am Title: Epiphany

MORE MORE MORE! I love this story! It's very good and very CUTE! Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you're enjoying it, since I was very nervous about posting :D

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2007 - 01:09 am Title: Epiphany

Great story Can't wait for more. Since Buffy has painted herself into a corner. Will Riley reappear? Friends ....Xander or Willow drop the bomb on Spike. The possibilities.

Give it up and get a new puter. It hardly ever gets better.







Author's Response: Not sure yet if anyone else from "Sunnydale" in this fic is going to make an appearance, since my main focus has been Spike and Buffy, but uh... we'll see, yeah?
I did give in. I got a new computer (does elmo dance) It's awesome, lol...
Thanks for the review, sweet!

Reviewer: Asha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2007 - 11:25 pm Title: Epiphany

does anyone else think that Buffy should have brushed her teeth? lol anyways, great chapter. i love this story. i especially liked the part about Spike "mumbling the whole way about misbehaving sprogs and their bad timing when he's trying to ask his wife if they could date". Great job, looking forward to more!


Author's Response: *lol* I was waiting for that. I thought It'd be enough for me to have her just drink a glass of water, to cut down on the ickyness of it, 'cause, I mean, for me, it's not gross. You have a girl you love enough, and add the beauty of her being pregnant with (at least he thinks) your child, and the ickyness just... goes away. Okay, now that I just prattled on, lol, uh.. I'm.. Thank you for the review. It's rad to know what you guys think and what part you liked the best :)

Reviewer: readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: Epiphany

Verrrry sweet. I loved the "Please, if it's no good..." -- using William's speech from canon was an excellent way to evoke the
emotion of themoment.

She should tell him.

Author's Response: I was wondering if someone was going to catch that. Yeah, for some reason, in scenes like that part, Spike always ends up sounding and acting more like William in my head, and you get a glimpse of "insecure little boy" all of us men are when we're taking a chance and risking our heart. Boy I'm in a talkative mood tonight, lol... I simply thank you, for the review. I love to hear what you guys think.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2007 - 10:01 pm Title: Epiphany

really nice chapter, short but very sweet

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm very glad you liked!

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