I enjoyed the little back-and-forth of Buffy and Xander in the last chapter, now you have Xander in the hospital. Way to hook people.

Author's Response: I was worried there was too much speaking in that scene but I went with my instinct and kept it. Really glad you liked it. Hooking people is the most important part :).

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent so far. Looking forward too more.

Xander listed her as a contact? Read all the chapters so far today; kind of eerie and mysterious, which is cool. Looks like she nailed most of characters including Harmony, she is the valley girl who grew up knowing all she do is stand there and look pretty to get through life. It is really a good story; when does Willow and Tara arrive? Soon I hope.

Author's Response: Really glad you liked it. I thought difference scenarios would work with it - and I just couldn't get the scene out of my head. At first, I'll admit, I wasn't going to include Willow and Tara. I know I know, sooo sooo wrong of me. Since you've brought it up - I am seriously going to incorporate them somewhere in the story - their intro might be minor but if will definitely grow. I just love the characters too much to disregard them all together. Thanks for the review - and of course mentioning Tara and Willow - will definitely work on putting them in.