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Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 01:34 am Title: Innocence/Lost

Execellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: glad you liked it :) Hope to update soon.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 01:15 am Title: Innocence/Lost

Bad Riley.
You called Angel "Duncan".

Author's Response: gah! thanks for telling me - how embarassing *runs and hides* thank-you

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2007 - 08:59 pm Title: Innocence/Lost

Buffy's been through hell since Dawn was killed! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: that she has. Her life really sucks. I'm trying to show exact reasons as to why she has this hard exterior and a "I hate the world" attitude which will be shown in heavier detail later.

Reviewer: Faith Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2007 - 06:12 pm Title: Innocence/Lost

Well, Ive only seen a few Veronica Mars, and yeah, I hated them. But whatever, I do like this story. It's pretty good, there are only 2 things I dont like really. Number 1~ the 'maybe' murder scenes. They a little annoying. And Number 2~ NEED MORE SPIKE!!! Lol.

But regardless, great story so far. Please update again soon.

Author's Response: Glad you like it ! for the 'maybe' murder scenes - yes they are getting a bit annoying - probably as annoying as they are to write them. I just wanted to set it up so that there could have been numerous reasons to why she died with numerous suspects. I'm thinking that Riley's will be the last one - there will be flashbacks as we learn new information but probably no more 'maybe' scenes. I do like that term by the way. :) Spike is going to be a VERY important part - he did have a larger part in this chapter but I took it out as it seemed too Veronica. But his role will get definitely bigger. I promise.

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