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Date: 07/08/2007 - 02:54 am Title: What's Your Secret?

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thank you!!!!! Hope to update soon.

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Date: 07/08/2007 - 01:58 am Title: What's Your Secret?

ah, Buffy quote (or paraphrase): Some how I knew this was going to happen. Not in the way of having any idea of course.
ah, VM quote: Shut up! If I want you to speak, I’ll wave a snausage over your nose.
yah, Buffy and Spike kiss!

Author's Response: ya - Buffy and Veronica quotes pop into my head all day - I use them in everyday life. It seemed fitting. :) Thought I'd finally give some actual Spuffy in this chapter.

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Date: 07/07/2007 - 01:28 am Title: Just a shell

That was wow. though Buffy should have ogled Spike's chest more, I would. But no, she has to be carefree to do that. She has too much weighing her down to look that much...

Author's Response: I was going to have much ogle-ing but it didn't feel right. I would definatly ogled too....but we are not Buffy. And yeah - she doesn't want to harbour those thoughts as she need to focus all her attention on solving the murder. You can imagine her ogle-ing thoughts....there will be more in the future.

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Date: 07/06/2007 - 04:49 am Title: Just a shell

I wonder how Spike will act towards Buffy now that he knows the truth! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: he is clearly shocked at this information. He really didn't know what tipped the scales. Now he does. Trying to update now but the site or my comp is being wonky...

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Date: 07/06/2007 - 04:28 am Title: Just a shell

great chapter! it's sad that people can hate other people and not know a damn thing about them...oh well, life sucks. i love the way you write, cant wait for more!

Author's Response: thanks so much! I really wanted to show how her life is being ruined by rumours - that many people don't even know the real reasons.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 01:26 am Title: Just a shell

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent chapter.

Author's Response: really glad you liked it! Trying to update now...

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Date: 07/04/2007 - 01:34 am Title: Innocence/Lost

Execellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: glad you liked it :) Hope to update soon.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 01:15 am Title: Innocence/Lost

Bad Riley.
You called Angel "Duncan".

Author's Response: gah! thanks for telling me - how embarassing *runs and hides* thank-you

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Date: 07/04/2007 - 01:09 am Title: Bring Him Down

Poor Xander.

Author's Response: but at least he's alive :) lol.

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Date: 07/04/2007 - 01:05 am Title: Size Me Up

I enjoyed the little back-and-forth of Buffy and Xander in the last chapter, now you have Xander in the hospital. Way to hook people.

Author's Response: I was worried there was too much speaking in that scene but I went with my instinct and kept it. Really glad you liked it. Hooking people is the most important part :).

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 01:01 am Title: Pleasantries

Oh, cool, Xander

Author's Response: yup - had to put Xander in there. :)

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Date: 07/03/2007 - 08:59 pm Title: Innocence/Lost

Buffy's been through hell since Dawn was killed! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: that she has. Her life really sucks. I'm trying to show exact reasons as to why she has this hard exterior and a "I hate the world" attitude which will be shown in heavier detail later.

Reviewer: Faith Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2007 - 06:12 pm Title: Innocence/Lost

Well, Ive only seen a few Veronica Mars, and yeah, I hated them. But whatever, I do like this story. It's pretty good, there are only 2 things I dont like really. Number 1~ the 'maybe' murder scenes. They a little annoying. And Number 2~ NEED MORE SPIKE!!! Lol.

But regardless, great story so far. Please update again soon.

Author's Response: Glad you like it ! for the 'maybe' murder scenes - yes they are getting a bit annoying - probably as annoying as they are to write them. I just wanted to set it up so that there could have been numerous reasons to why she died with numerous suspects. I'm thinking that Riley's will be the last one - there will be flashbacks as we learn new information but probably no more 'maybe' scenes. I do like that term by the way. :) Spike is going to be a VERY important part - he did have a larger part in this chapter but I took it out as it seemed too Veronica. But his role will get definitely bigger. I promise.

Reviewer: Marre Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 - 09:34 am Title: Bring Him Down

Love it. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: working on the next chapter as we speak.

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Date: 06/21/2007 - 02:37 am Title: Bring Him Down

I wonder what Buffy plans to do to make them pay?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: oh payback is going to be good. Going to update soon.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 - 01:48 am Title: Bring Him Down

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks so much! Really glad you like it!

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Date: 06/20/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: Blacklisted

I really, really hate Veronica Mars, and especially Veronica/Logan. The comparisons between them and Spuffy already bother me, so I'm not sure I can read a story where Spuffy basically redoes V/L's storyline. I do like your writing though, so I'll look for your next fic.

Author's Response: You hate Veronica Mars?!?!? :O I absolutly love the Veronica/Logan story. I am trying to separate the two - it will have similarities. I am really trying to break apart from that. Just some lines are too good to not use...lol. I understand what you mean though - I'm so glad you like my writing style and my next fic will be an original. I will just want to finish this one first. I will seriously try to break it apart from the Veronica line - but the stroy is based on it and I am making Buffy a very sarcastic, tough girl. Veronica's attitude. Also, I adore the "whole town's against her" way and the fact they might be against Spike to somewhere down the road. He will eventually have to choose a side. The similar story lines will be from Seasons 1 and 2. But they won't be mirror images of each other. I am just taking ideas from it. I absolutly loved the 2nd Season's finale - so similar plot lines might happen there. I am thankful for your review - and please do look for my next fic.

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Date: 06/05/2007 - 08:37 pm Title: Size Me Up

Wonder what happened to Xander?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: You'll find out next chapter - which I hope to finish soon. Look for updates soon.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 01:22 am Title: Size Me Up

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent so far. Looking forward too more.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 01:22 am Title: Size Me Up

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent so far. Looking forward too more.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it - working on the next chapter. Hope to update soon.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 - 10:38 pm Title: Size Me Up

Xander listed her as a contact? Read all the chapters so far today; kind of eerie and mysterious, which is cool. Looks like she nailed most of characters including Harmony, she is the valley girl who grew up knowing all she do is stand there and look pretty to get through life. It is really a good story; when does Willow and Tara arrive? Soon I hope.

Author's Response: Really glad you liked it. I thought difference scenarios would work with it - and I just couldn't get the scene out of my head. At first, I'll admit, I wasn't going to include Willow and Tara. I know I know, sooo sooo wrong of me. Since you've brought it up - I am seriously going to incorporate them somewhere in the story - their intro might be minor but if will definitely grow. I just love the characters too much to disregard them all together. Thanks for the review - and of course mentioning Tara and Willow - will definitely work on putting them in.

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Date: 03/21/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: Pleasantries

Loved the conversation Buffy had with Spike. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: glad you liked it! :) hope to update soon

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Date: 03/17/2007 - 02:24 am Title: Motives

spike!!1 yum, can't wait to read how buffy and spike interact! update soon!

Author's Response: I've been trying to figure that one out for a while now - keep delaying - and with the site being down - it didn't help my case. lol. hope to update soon - I'm about 3/4 done the next chapter.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 - 05:41 pm Title: Motives

Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: a new update is heading your way soon.

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Date: 03/16/2007 - 02:37 am Title: Blacklisted

I'm hooked already! Loved it! More please!

Author's Response: I'll try to update as frquently as I can - really glad you liked it :)

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