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Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 06:59 pm Title: Wait and Bleed

the smell thing was really insightful. leave it to anya to be practical & sensitive like that....

'She vowed in that moment to never let Riley touch her again'
this line was great! it shows how buffy's concern for spike mixes with her disgust for riley...

i just loved the dialogue between the two of them. spike's whispered question, 'What’s wrong, luv?', made my heart break. how she blames herself for not knowing (and not being able to prevent), how he kinda comforts her. the 'i'll protect you from humans, but against the demons you're on your own' bit made me smile. buffy manages to offer protection without damaging his already battered self-esteem...

pretty pls update as soon as you can! :D


Author's Response: I will attempt to salvage Spike's self esteem. Thank you so much for your kind words :D

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 02:19 pm Title: Wait and Bleed

Oh i cant wait to read the next chapter! Riley deserved to be castrated!

Author's Response: Riley's MIA in the next chapter, sorta, but he will be punished, I assure you. Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 02:01 am Title: Wait and Bleed

loved this chapter. buffy being respectful for once in this type of situation. i can't wait 'till joyce fines out what really happened. mommy is not going to be happy! and loving the spike / giles relationship too. and anya's always a thinker :)

more please :)

Author's Response: Wait no longer- mommy Joyce is home :D And Buffy well, she had to face reality sooner or later. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 01:40 am Title: Wait and Bleed

oh yeah. riley definately needs to be on the receiving end of a few of buffy's punches. maybe she could kick him around a little too. more soon please!! great job.

Author's Response: Riley will eventually be on the recieving in of a lot of things... Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 12:15 am Title: Wait and Bleed

Loved it! Very sick and twisty how Riley's still getting off on his power trip. Love that Joyce is concerned about both Buffy and knows that Riley must have hurt Spike. Love the interplay at the end between our fabulously blond duo. More soon, please?!?!

Author's Response: Sorry for the wait, but here it is :D I think Joyce will make you proud here...

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 - 12:06 am Title: Wait and Bleed

Nice Buffy-Spike scene

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review :D

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: Wait and Bleed

Oh, well done, Buffy! Kudos to Anya for thinking of the scent thing.

Author's Response: After a millenia plus, Anya was bound to pick up some things ;) Thank you for reviewing :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 - 07:39 pm Title: Wait and Bleed

Oh that was good of Anya to point that fact out to Buffy, I am so glad that Spike and her are getting along, somehow I think she is going to help him throught this.

Author's Response: Yes, Buffy will most certainly help. And that's all you're getting out of me ;) Thanks for reviewing.

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