Reviews For Hidden Talents

Name: . (Anonymous) · Date: 04/14/2007 - 12:21 am · For: Hidden Talents
um, okay, is this for real? i couldn't even get through the whole thing. i can tell that hardly anytime was spent on this. besides being completely out of character, you seriously need a beta. there are way too many mistakes. if you're actually serious about writing, i would really suggest that you get one. i'm not trying to be rude, but this needs a lot of work.

Name: smlcspike (Anonymous) · Date: 04/13/2007 - 07:58 pm · For: Hidden Talents
Oh I love it, more please.

Name: lulu (Anonymous) · Date: 04/13/2007 - 04:56 pm · For: Hidden Talents
So why do the characters scream and yell so much? Is everyone hard of hearing?

Name: spuffy (Anonymous) · Date: 04/13/2007 - 03:40 pm · For: Hidden Talents
I love the story. But shouldn't Spike have a couple of friends on his own. I mean Angel wasn't his only friend, right.

I can see spike being friends with people like Gunn and fred.

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