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Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2007 - 01:31 am Title: Chapter 6

What a wonderful, sweet story. I loved the dialogue and it was so refreshing to read a story that I didn't have to wait to hear what happened in the Spuffy part of the story. I liked that the whole story was their story. It was a great read from beginning to end. Well done indeed.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/02/2007 - 05:14 am Title: Chapter 6

What an excellent story! You can just feel the assurance and calmness of this deep, abiding love that they share just flowing through the whole thing, even though they're not together for the first few chapters. Spuffy doesn't get much better than this...unless you get to see William's reaction to the baby news! But, I love that you left off where you did & left that to the imagination. Kudos to you for a great, well written story.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hi-- A little shortened & choppy there at the end... this often gives readers the feeling that the author just loses interest & wants to wrap up the story, to get it over with as fast as possible (at least you did finish it, unlike SO many never-finished fics in fic-limbo-land). As the reader, I would've liked to have had more of a glimpse of their new lifestyle together, it's challenges & rewards, & their experiences in more depth.
That said, I enjoyed it, & as always look forward to more from you. You tell great stories, & tell them well.
(Oh, & sorry about the lack of wordwrap, but am reading & posting from my cell phone's browser til my laptop is back in the game...)
Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2007 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

Good compromise, letting Spike go on tour again and Buffy coming with him.
Loved the end, enjoyed reading the story. :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2007 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

lovely ending to a lovely story, many thanks

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