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Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 07:09 am Title: chapter 25

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NOOOOOOOO!!!!!
omg please please update sooooon
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Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2007 - 03:45 am Title: chapter 25

Evil Cliff hanger! Read through this in a blink and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 07:20 pm Title: chapter 25

You develop your story in a fairly rapid pace even though it spans years, but still you are able to keep up this beautifully flowing narrative. I really got swept up with it so that I didn't have to sort of stop and have a conscious thought of "okay, we are moving forward in time" as is the case with some fics. All seems to happen very naturally in this story. I think it's also got to do with the beautiful way you describe the pain, the sadness and other angsty feelings. You don't make a number out of those feelings, but still they come through - in some wonderful fairytale kind of way.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 03:44 pm Title: chapter 25

frikin LOVE it!!!! can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 01:19 pm Title: chapter 25

No smiley face for me. It's all a bit sad. There are so many questions that need answering, please update soon and put me out of my misery - literally.

Reviewer: Nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 01:13 pm Title: chapter 25

look forward to more real soon. Poor buffy to still be in love with a man who has clearly moved on to someone else. And what is up with Robin. And how the hell do all these people know about Buffy and what happen with her and Spike. My God has Cordy and Willow been talking about her behind her back with these people.And Spike would wait til she was drunk to come and talk. well waiting for the next installment..N

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 12:51 pm Title: chapter 25

Started reading this on B?S diaries a long time ago , glad your back to finish it . What does he mean by "Are You happy now" ? does he mean it sarcastically or really wants to know if she's happy. I think he's really smug in this chapter and I don't like Fred here at all, can she go soon?, also it doesn't seem like Spike every really loved Buffy from how he's acting . I hope Spike's attitude improves.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 12:25 pm Title: chapter 25

So they talk and it looks like Spike and Freds relationship isn't the best dare I say a little possetive.

And what with the hope he doesn't know what i was doing with Wesley in his office.

I was hoping Fred would be sensible and realize he still loves Buffy and it maybe to soon for her to leave him to go back to Buffy. I can hope,

More please.

Reviewer: aoife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 11:29 am Title: chapter 25

i loved it! i read this story a long time ago, on bs diaries i think? i'm sooo glad your going to finish it. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 11:02 am Title: chapter 25

You´ve got me on the edge of my seat. Please update-yesterday!!! Got to say, though, it´s disturbing, how easily Spike got over Buffy, and if I have to read more lovey-dovey Fred/Spike I´ll need a bucket. My, did he ever love her at all? How can he not forgive, isn´t that what true love is about? How could he not try again, just why is he so cold? I´m really torn between wishing them to get together and just for Buffy to really move on and fall for somebody else, because I just can´t see where Spike is able to really love her. Ugh, the way they all talk about Buffy. Yes, she was a selfish liar, but she was also very young and in love, and scared. This is extremely depressing. Cant´t you put in something positive? I´m starting to wonder what the point of the story is, I mean, just how much has Buffy to be punished? Gah...

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 07:06 am Title: chapter 25

Love your story please write more soon!

Reviewer: Vampy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2007 - 02:20 am Title: chapter 25

Ahgggggggg.....you can't leave it there! Please, please, please have mercy and update soon!

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