Thanks for the warning, just skipped that part. Now to see what Elizabeth's been doing.

Author's Response: I aim not to offened all though being a writer you always tend to step on a few toes. ~Noel

awesome story so far:) i cant wait for the next chapter:) i love it

Author's Response: thanks sweetheart! I cant wait till its finished and you guys have it all. I cant wait to hear whatcha think ~Noel darling

Spike certainly lives by an interesting set of rules. Gotta say I'm not surprised Spike yelled out Buffy's name, looks like somebody is smitten... even if he isn't ready to admit it yet. ;-) Good update!

Author's Response: thank you. I re-read it and re-read it over and over trying to decide if I should have him do it or not. I didnt want things to happen to soon. After all hes known her for what? An hour? Than I started thinking about all the fantasies we have with people we dont even know at all...people we have never even met...the guy you see in the car next to you going to work in the moring, the mysterious next door neighbor..... I mean we are consumed with sex! I wont lie and say I havent ever masturabated while thinking of somone I just met and didnt know at all.....that of course was before I married my lovely, beautifully, strong and handsome husband whose name is the only name I scream now ;-)but I've done it ! And Spike is even more consumed with sex than me. I me than man ooozes sex appeal. It something that is on his mind constantly so him meeting a girl and wanting her that way and than wishing she was the woman he f*cking and screaming out her name isnt terribly unreal...its actually something he would very much do because the other thing about him is...he has a beautiful heart. He's a mans man but a womans man too. He wouldnt just take her without her wanting him too because he cannot mentally be okay with hurting a woman like that. I mean look in BTVS how he had to run and become something else when he almost raped Buffy. Its because mentally he cannot fathom the thought of himself treating a woman badly or hurting her to the point where all she has is fear for him....okay I will stop now. Thats my rant for the day. I dont even know why I wrote all this lol. Thanks for the review hun! ~Noel darling

Well, I liked it! lol

Yeah, ok so I don't like Spike with anyone else besides Buffy either, but as you say that it's important to later on chapters, I'll trust you!

Thank you for update hunni!

xxx

Author's Response: awww thanks babe! In the fiction world its all about trust....believe in my love of spuffy it'll get you through! ~Noel Darling

It is short. There's nothing much that happened that i can review. Can you please update and can you make it longer? Your plot is so much interesting it would be a shame not to make a good story out of it.

Author's Response: The next chapter is def. longer. These first few I wrote a long long time ago (I think I was like 18 lol). Than I gave up and dropped it...now I've picked it up again and when I started really grabbing hold of what I was going to do (it happens a little bit later) the chapters start getting longer and the detail is much better also/. ~Noel Darling

I'm not sure who I feel more sorry for.....Elizabeth for having a jerk of a father ((((Jerk is putting it mildly)))) or Spike who is sooooo flustered!!! Another great chapter! Can't wait for more! ~Hugs~

Author's Response: lol I think I lean toward Elizabeths side just because her fathers abusive and wants her dead and all... not to belittle Spike flusteredness but come on lol Love ya girl ~Noel Darling

I thought it was great, especially the part between Spike and Buffy. I hope there's more interaction between them in the next chappie!!!!!!!!!Can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: There will be lots more interaction you dont have much to worry about on that front! ;-) ~Noel Darling