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Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

So this is your first fic, well good for you. Spike must have been speaking of Dru , I take it? Wow, she stabbed him, that was a surprise. How is she going to get off the ship? Are they still anchored? Very interesting turn. Now to see what happens.

Author's Response: yes the ships still anchored and he was talking about dru....what would this story be without her? A very happy piece of fiction thats what but I dont do pure fluff sorry one and all/...I just cant stomach it~Noel D

Reviewer: nicky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

update soon love the story, i think she did right stabbing him, just hope the consequences are not too bad for her though!


Author's Response: lol ooo maybe he'll handcuff her to the bed and spank her! ooo naughty naughty. Wheres my husband I need to rape that man ~Noel

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

Ohhh!!!!

I wonder who Spike was writting about in the diary... hmm... Dru or Cecily???

lol, you think it's amusing that Buffy doesn't know his name yet?

Ok, it's kind of funny!

Oh, and wont the other shipmate know that Buffy is female? or is that for another chapter? you know, Spike finds out that she's having to ward off advances and ends up having to keep her in his room? Hmmm...

Oh, go Buffy... stab the love of your life! .. Yep, definately the Buffy we know! lol Thanks hunni! xxx

Author's Response: HEY Stop guessing my story! lol Your to smart for your own good or I guess Im predicatable lol one of the two...I had to get Buffyin there with something pointy you know that girl and her weapons Sheesh! ~NOel

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

Well! I didn't see that coming. Poor Spike I hope the wound isn't too deep. Can't wait for update.

Author's Response: I know. I do not like seeing that man injured. But maybe buffy can nurse ;-) him back to health ~Noel

Reviewer: saradane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

YAY! Waited patiently...Tap, tap, tap, POUND. You already know we want longer chapters so I won't mention it ; )
AND more often but I won't mention that either.
How will she meet Giles?
I can't believe she stabbed him, I didn't see that coming.
Will she be jealous of Dru?
I can't wait until he loses his control for the first time.
tap, tap, tap.

Author's Response: lol Your cute I like you it official! That chapter I remeber writing and I remeber going Im just going to throw something crazy inthere. But it worked out with what I wanted next so its alllllllllll good ;-) ~Noel

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

I enjoyed getting the glimpse into Spike's diary, now I'm really curious about the identity of mystery woman Spike was writing about.
Interesting Spike/Buffy scene, Buffy is definitely full of spirit... this should be one eventful voyage to Jamaica. Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks. after re-reading it I was like...Is this TO much and than I remebered this is Spike and Buffy we're dealing with. ~Noel

Reviewer: BluEyeDevil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

wow, i loved that turn, not sure what i'd been expecting but that wasn't it. lol nice one.

Author's Response: thank you. I aim to please lol ~Noel

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

I'm really enjoying this story...I'm amazed that she stabbed him though, didn't think she'd go that far.

To enclose the italics you need to do the same as you do for the start of the italics but put a / in front of the i....this will close the section in italics.

Author's Response: I think Im in love with you. Computers and me arent so fond of each other. I can do word and paint but thats about where all my knowledge ends. You are my hero! ~Noel

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

I've posted on the tag: you need to use see here or here The LJ tags won't work here but the normal tags. (bold, italic, etc.)

Oh Elizabeth was reading the diary; I thought it was someone talking. So she has to stay on the ship anyway, working. Didn't expect Elizabeth to stab William. Neither did he. Too bad William wants to cut all her hair.

Author's Response: Yeah I think putting that in italic is going to help. It was a little unclear. I might add a line there or something. The whole hair thing makes me really sad. I hope he doesnt make her cut it but now thats she's stabbed him who knows what he'll do. You know Spike, hes our wild card ;-) Thanks girl ~Noel

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 11:32 am Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

Wow , I cant' believe she stabbed him, but he's being such an ass , and what does he mean tend to his men ,in what way . He needs a little bit of the green eyed monster to show him what he wants , well he already knows what he wants just doesn't want to want it, He really isn't being a gentleman is he , making her sleep with the rabble.

Author's Response: haha I remeber writing and that and meaning she was going to tend to them when they get sick. I knew you guys would read it and think something else so i kept it there liking when it implied 'sex' better. ;-) ~Noel

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 10:20 am Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

This is a great story. Good for Buffy for stabbing him! Seems she reacted before she thought about it. Can't wait for longer chapters! You would never know this was your first fic. Great job!

Author's Response: Awww thanks Jenn! I was worried about people throwing things at me because she stabbed him but every is in aggreement- Hes being a bastard and deserved to get it lol you guys are so mean ~Noel

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

Buffy's got her claws out then. Loved it and can't wait for more.


Author's Response: When does she ever put those things away? Stubborn chit. ~Noel

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

Tough girl.. If he said she would be treated like a man he should have known she would fight for her life.. and respect her as one.

Author's Response: Good insight. Good thought. Hey maybe you should be a writer....wait you probably are huh? ~Noel

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

lol woot i loved it lol:) cant wait for the next update

Author's Response: hahaha woot! Well I love you! And I will be posting a treat before tues. because I am leaving tues and going out of town till Mon. so I'll give u a suprise ;-) ~Noel

Reviewer: spikeslilchit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2007 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter 4: The next ten minutes

I love this story! I cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! And more shall come. I am posting again before Tues. ~Noel

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