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Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

Poor kid, living that kind of hell. Her hero is here after all. great chapter, really enjoying this, thanks.

Author's Response: Abuse is a hard subject to write about but i feel like its going to add so much depth and insight to her and her character~Noel D

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 10:26 am Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

Hey hun! Ok, I'm getting worried... just what did her father do to her???

Well, I'm off on holiday for two weeks, so I'm going to miss your updates! but, I'll be straight onto them when I get back! thank you for a good chapter hunni! xxx

Author's Response: Her Fathers a mean guy. He's going to be the villian pretty much. Im sad your leaving but have a spactacular trip and there will be a few updates waiting for you when you get back! ~Noel

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

awww....hmmm i'm intrigued as to buffy's past....interesting chapter....

cant wait for the next update:)

Author's Response: Tommorrow! Its just around the corner Im making a few quick changes and than it shall be up! Im excited.~Noel

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

Great chapter Noel, very revealing about them both. That poor girl what she must have been living through, how horrible . I hope he doesn't pull away from her because he's afraid to love again, and who beat him so badly also, was it That freak Angel? He isn't in the story so far both I have a feeling he's going to rear his ugly head, I hope not, Thanks for writing and i'll be looking for the next chappie.

Author's Response: lol 'was it that freak angel?' that quite possibly made my life. I cant say much but yes sooner or later Ill bring Angel in but not in the role your thinking and the next chapters finished Ill probably post it sunday or monday! thanks for your continued support and reviews! You rock my world! ~Noel

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

I like this fic I hope you continue with it :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I dont plan on stopping anytime soon.~Noel Darling

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

Fab chapter and Elizabeth's father really is a piece of work! Love the fact that William has done a complete 180 and is so attached to her already. Thank you for the update it made my evening.

Author's Response: I love Sam I really truly do ;-) Thanks for your review hun. I wanted to hold off on him falling in so deep so soon but I couldnt! Those two are like magnets ~Noel Darling

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

Wouldn't have guess... abused by her father.. And now protected by the man who was hired to kill her.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Well if spike is every hired to hurt buffy you know its not going to happen lol us spuffy writers just cant do it ~Noel Darling

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

Must have been her father that beat Buffy. (I forgot if it was mentioned before.) A father that wants his daughter dead is able to do everything. Did her father more than only beat her, abused her?
Loved the way Spike took care of Buffy. ~ Looking forward to what will happen (Spike going back with or without Buffy..). Till then.

Author's Response: her father is def. a monster but Im leaving it open and not mentioning the extent of his abuse just in case i want to take it someplace else later on. ~Noel Darling

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2007 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hold me

Wonderful Spike/Buffy scene. I liked how tenderly Spike was taking care of Buffy, he's definitely bonding with her, and that's a good thing for both of them as far as I'm concerned.
Reading about Buffy's nightmare was really heartbreaking though... her father was truly a monster. Can't wait to find out what happens when Buffy wakes up. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you dear! I love writing the spuffy scenes and I cant wait till later on where I can actually write the gushy stuff between both of them! I will post the next chapter in a couple days! ;-) ~Noel Darling

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