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Reviewer: asha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

oohh my this is soo interesting. i really wasn't expecting the end of this chapter with the mental illness thing..wow, i'm hooked

Author's Response: so glad you liking it I was afriad I might loose a few people with that twist but I do have a vision for this.~noel

Reviewer: Verda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

So what's this bit of a twist? Have a glimmer of an idea where this might be going, very excited to see how it happens and what it will mean to our couple. Sorry things are so hectic right now, Homecoming is such a big thing. Enjoying your fic, looking forward to more updates.

Author's Response: thanks! Im excited this next chapter should be longer. I have a good deal written already. Im going to try and hav another chapter up by wed. or thurs. ~noel

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2007 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Hmmm... very intriguing, I like this new mysterious twist. Great chapter!

Author's Response: thank you.~Noel

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2007 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

ooo very interesting:) i love it hehe....cant wait for you to update again soon

Author's Response: I will hopefully by wed. Im trying. :-) ~noel

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Wow! This story has taken quite an interesting turn. I like it.

Author's Response: thank you. :-) I am deathly afraid people arent going to like where Im taking it so thank you thank you thank you for the support.~noel

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Elizabeth is behaving weird. Instead of being Elizabeth Abigail Clarice Farnley she's telling Elizabeth Rayne? Sounds as if she was possessed. And after dropping that bomb fainting? So no normal behavior.
Mmmh her grandma had such an 'episode' too? I wonder if that's connected....

Author's Response: on the right track more will be revieled in the next chapter.~noel

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Alright not what I was expecting but ,I'm going to stick with you and see where she's going with this. I was hoping for lot's of groveling on his part because i'm still mad over the dress incident., but I guess theres a method to your madness. Update soon , or i'll whinge and whine some more , take care babes.

Author's Response: haha I wanted the groveling too but than a thought came to me........... when would a piarate captain ever grovel? He's going to do alot of not so nice things to her but I promise Ill try to make it all right in the end. ~Noel

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Mmmm. Please update and I loved it.

Author's Response: will soon. maybe by wed.....hopefully.~Noel

Reviewer: LuvsBitch Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Oooh! Great chapter, I am once again on the edge of my seat :)

Keep up your excellent work! x

Charliex

Author's Response: I love twists ant tuns there my favorite~Noel

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 10: 19th Year

Strange twist... chanelling greatgrandma?

And retired teacher here...Homecoming .. ah the rites of youth !!

Enjoying.

Author's Response: thank you for understanding and you are not supoesed to guess my now ovbious plot! lol thanks for reading~Noel

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