I enjoyed getting the glimpse into Spike's diary, now I'm really curious about the identity of mystery woman Spike was writing about.
Interesting Spike/Buffy scene, Buffy is definitely full of spirit... this should be one eventful voyage to Jamaica. Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks. after re-reading it I was like...Is this TO much and than I remebered this is Spike and Buffy we're dealing with. ~Noel

I'm really enjoying this story...I'm amazed that she stabbed him though, didn't think she'd go that far.

To enclose the italics you need to do the same as you do for the start of the italics but put a / in front of the i....this will close the section in italics.

Author's Response: I think Im in love with you. Computers and me arent so fond of each other. I can do word and paint but thats about where all my knowledge ends. You are my hero! ~Noel

Wow , I cant' believe she stabbed him, but he's being such an ass , and what does he mean tend to his men ,in what way . He needs a little bit of the green eyed monster to show him what he wants , well he already knows what he wants just doesn't want to want it, He really isn't being a gentleman is he , making her sleep with the rabble.

Author's Response: haha I remeber writing and that and meaning she was going to tend to them when they get sick. I knew you guys would read it and think something else so i kept it there liking when it implied 'sex' better. ;-) ~Noel

Buffy's got her claws out then. Loved it and can't wait for more.


Author's Response: When does she ever put those things away? Stubborn chit. ~Noel

lol woot i loved it lol:) cant wait for the next update

Author's Response: hahaha woot! Well I love you! And I will be posting a treat before tues. because I am leaving tues and going out of town till Mon. so I'll give u a suprise ;-) ~Noel

Oh my! i luved this story! it's great! keep it up! lol

Author's Response: thank you so much! You have no idea how wonderful it is to hear that everyone likes it so much. ~Noel Darling

Buffy thinks Spike is helplessly lost and that's why he didn't kill her? I wonder why that is so / what makes Spike helpless against her father.
Hey! Cliffhanger... so it will take some time to answer the question. Maybe Spike could just pretend to kill her...

Author's Response: I was thinking that him pretending would be a good idea but then I thought it would be a real shocker to actually kill buffy off! Because that never happens! ;-) ~Noel Darling

I'm so glad I read it all, I've really enjoyed it so far. Please do update whenever you next can. Thanks xoxo

Author's Response: aw thanks hun and I will update soon! Promise ;-) ~Noel Darling

Interesting, Giles is a pirate too, can't wait to find out what his plan is. Good update! :D
I enjoyed your long answer to my previous review. ;-) I love how enthusiasic you are about your first story. =)

Author's Response: I just went back and re-read what I wrote and I laughed so hard. Out of all the BTVS characters I am probably the most like Anya. Very blunt and very sexual. Ah I crack myself up. Okay Im delirious so I wont write much more but thanks for your continued support hunny! And of course Giles is a pirate...heres a spoiler just for you....I did it so we can start calling him Ripper. Im excited! ~Noel

You're my new favourite! Too short. Please more fast.
THere are only a few that I read every posting. You're one now.

Oops I posted under chapter 3by accident when I went back to re-read it.

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this story!

Author's Response: (gasp) You have no idea how that just made my day! I didnt expect the feedback Ive been getting probably because this is all so new to me and I usually the one reading..not the other way around! Thank you luff you made my day ;-) ~Noel Darling

awesome story so far:) i cant wait for the next chapter:) i love it

Author's Response: thanks sweetheart! I cant wait till its finished and you guys have it all. I cant wait to hear whatcha think ~Noel darling

Spike certainly lives by an interesting set of rules. Gotta say I'm not surprised Spike yelled out Buffy's name, looks like somebody is smitten... even if he isn't ready to admit it yet. ;-) Good update!

Author's Response: thank you. I re-read it and re-read it over and over trying to decide if I should have him do it or not. I didnt want things to happen to soon. After all hes known her for what? An hour? Than I started thinking about all the fantasies we have with people we dont even know at all...people we have never even met...the guy you see in the car next to you going to work in the moring, the mysterious next door neighbor..... I mean we are consumed with sex! I wont lie and say I havent ever masturabated while thinking of somone I just met and didnt know at all.....that of course was before I married my lovely, beautifully, strong and handsome husband whose name is the only name I scream now ;-)but I've done it ! And Spike is even more consumed with sex than me. I me than man ooozes sex appeal. It something that is on his mind constantly so him meeting a girl and wanting her that way and than wishing she was the woman he f*cking and screaming out her name isnt terribly unreal...its actually something he would very much do because the other thing about him is...he has a beautiful heart. He's a mans man but a womans man too. He wouldnt just take her without her wanting him too because he cannot mentally be okay with hurting a woman like that. I mean look in BTVS how he had to run and become something else when he almost raped Buffy. Its because mentally he cannot fathom the thought of himself treating a woman badly or hurting her to the point where all she has is fear for him....okay I will stop now. Thats my rant for the day. I dont even know why I wrote all this lol. Thanks for the review hun! ~Noel darling