I'm loving this story, but a few tiny little errors are bugging me. 1st, in chapter one, the word "morgue" is misspelled as "mourge." And then, in that chapter and many of the following ones, including this one, the word "too" (as in "excessive," like too much, too long, too hard, too bad, etc.) is misspelled as "to" (which should be used like, to run, to the store, to be, etc.).

Just wanted to let you know... I do love the story, and those have just jarred me a bit as I was reading.

You know, I think the main *squick*/problem I have with this story, is that Spike automatically takes Buffy to the bed he has sex with his wife in, and Buffy doesn't even care. I mean, yeah, adultery is wrong and sleeping with an underage girl is wrong and all that. But, mainly it's the just the bed /location thing that grosses me out. lol. You wouldn't wanna have Buffy say something about that would ya'? :P

Either way - I'm very much enjoying this and hope to see mroe soon! :)

God does he think of noone but himself , does he not realize that his way of thinking is going to hurt her, he's so dense. I hope they don't get caught now. He's really making me mad.

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!