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Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter 16

I’m sorry, but I just can’t. It’s too much, please forgive me.

*sighs...pushing anger away* OK, let's pick this apart shall we? first off, that STUPID BLONDE BINT say's "I'm sorry". well if she had stayed instead of running off like a COWARD, there'd be nothing to be sorry about now would there? Next. "I just can't." YEAH, THERE'S AN EXPLANATION!!!! that's like you saying no and the other person saying why and you saying because. IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE! that is NOT a reason!!!! Secondly, "It's too much." what's too much?? all you've been through? everything you two have fought for? trying to be with each other when everyone was telling you NO? SETTLING FOR RILEY?! that's just SICK! you are a coward and you need to face the music!!! grow up! BE WITH SPIKE!!!! Lastly, "Please forgive me." UM.....NO!!!!! not until you come up with a good reason for being a stuipid bitch and running from the only guy that made you happy! then maybe i will!!!

*sighs, shakes hands out of nervousness and lights a cigarette. folds paper, hands it to Serenity* mail that to Buffy will ya?


Author's Response: Wow...nicely performed rant, Mon. As you will come to realize while reading my stories...I am an uber evil bint who likes to drag my readers threw turmoil before making with the happies. Just be patient!

Reviewer: Gillypod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2007 - 11:29 am Title: Chapter 16

Angst - thy name is Serenity. and to think I added you as a favourite author. Bad woman, but a fantastic chapter - gonna have to move on sweets......

Author's Response: I have thought about writing fluff, I just don't know if I have the talent for it. I do love to torture my characters, and readers it seems.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2007 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter 16

WAT HOW COULD SHE SAY THAT????? LOVE THIS STORY, CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! THANX!! (sorry i had wrote another, longer review yesturday but i guess it didnt go through, which sucks. this chapter rocked, though buffys crazy, u kickass)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! So sorry to hear that your other review was lost, but thanks for coming back!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2007 - 09:34 am Title: Chapter 16

I can't believe I missed this! The only good thing with this is that I have another chapter to read :)

Author's Response: I was wondering where you were! And, trust me...that chapter hasn't been up long. Managed to write 2 chapters in like a day and a half. Plus I am halfway through another one. Muse may have left, but she came back in full force. Thanks!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2007 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter 16

awwww....i really hope you update again soon...i want to know what happens next lol....:)

Author's Response: Working on the next chappie now! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 16

What!!!! I was thinking more along the lines of "I am leaving my finance, have dinner when I get back?" Will be waiting for another update.

Author's Response: One would think so, right? Buffy's an idiot, I wanted it to go a bit different but the voices in my head said otherwise. Thanks so much, Kelly!

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 16

Awesome! :D can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Seems muse wants to work on this story for a while, which is ok I guess since it's almost done. Should have something up before the weekend if all goes well!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 16

I knew it, there she goes again run, run , run, Buffy she's so infuriating , but gotta say this chapter was great ,love it ,

Author's Response: Never said she was a smart girl! If Spike wanted me that bad, hell...he'd have to have a task force to peel me off of him! LoL! Thanks so much for the review, Jo!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter 16

Oh no, I hope they can work it out, now what she cheated on Riley maybe he can be booted out too.

Author's Response: She was a naughty naughty girl. Do you really think I'd let her be with Riley? Please. THANKS for the review!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 08:59 am Title: Chapter 16

Sorry.. had to comeback for another comment.

'Course running away from Spike is what she does...passionate and out of control with him and maybe that is the problem. Guess she had a bad case of the guilts.. and did she get that ring? Don't remember.. need to go back and reread. I was probably too caught up in the moment !!


Author's Response: Like I'm going to complain about you coming back for another review. Nope, nuhuh...not me! The ring, yes, the dreaded lost symbol of hope and love. It wasn't mentioned. Will be in the next one. Interesting little diddy. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 08:55 am Title: Chapter 16

Well, didn't expect that... tell the muse she better get those two back together somehow or I will be very upset... Ha!! Need my Spuffy..


BTW good luck this weekend.
Never thought LSU was #1.. They maybe the comeback kid.. guess it wasn't enough last weekend.
Just a lot of mistakes that cost them dearly,

Author's Response: Had to add in one really good twist in the form of Buffy being all Buffy-like and running away like a fraidy cat. I imagine this weekend will be tough, course I have to side with my boys, but they've had a bad case of head up ass syndrome this season! Thanks, Pam!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 07:49 am Title: Chapter 16

NO - stupid, stupid, stupid Buffy. Spike's admitted worst mistake, shouldn't have listened etc and she ups and leaves him. He should go and drag her back by her hair! Anyway you are mean leaving it there but I think I can forgive you because of the image you created in your A/N - now there's a thought to brighten my day! Loved it and am really looking forward to more - PLEASE.

Author's Response: Yeah, that mental image was quite tasty, wasn't it. Kinda drooled on the keyboard while typing it. LoL! Thanks so much for the review, Sam! Glad I haven't totally ran you guys off just yet with my cliffhangers and indecisive Buffy-ness.

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