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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 08:35 am Title: Chapter 12

Oh please tell me she is not dating RIley, oh and the fun Buffy and Spike can have in costumes.

Author's Response: I could tell you that, but then I'd be lying to you and that wouldn't be nice at all. I promise that its not as bad as it sounds. Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 07:39 am Title: Chapter 12

Nice.. quick update.. but waiting for the party and their encounter. And Willow, sneaky little matchmaker.

Here's to a slow day with the crazies so you can write more.. Need that Spike/Buffy loving ....
Enjoyed.

Waiting to see whose game the storm is going to mess with.



Author's Response: Ugh, I am so not even looking forward to the game this weekend. My poor boys are really struggling this year and I realized it's totally my fault because the past two weekends I haven't had on my Auburn undies. Shame on me! Anyway, glad to hear you liked the update. It just kept spewing out and I literally had to force myself to stop because work got a bit hectic. I figure tonight will be worse since all the fans will be pouring into town. I'm really looking forward to writting the next chapter, so I don't want to try and do that on a busy night because I want it to flow a certain way. Maybe my insomnia will work in your favor while I'm on a mini vacation this weekend, I'll try to squeeze in some writting! Thanks again, Pam. Good luck with the game!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter 12

Yay! I knew that a character in the Twilight Chronicles had to be based on Buffy.

I have really enjoyed this story so far but the latest chapters have me completely addicted and I can't wait for another update.



Author's Response: Ok, so I was a bit obvious, but I had to do it! Glad to hear that you have become addicted! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2007 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for the update, Wonder what the second reunion will be like?

Author's Response: You are very welcome, Kelly. I actually wrote most of it last night since muse refused to stop. Just had to finish it and polish it a bit before posting. The second sighting should be posted sometime next week. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

Loved your update! :) Ypu are a genius, bringing William to school. I didn't suspect anything like that, you really made me surprised :) Sweet of him to go and look for Buffy, but I understand why she acted like she did. I think she has to tell Willow about her secret.

Author's Response: Flattery will get you everywhere my dear! Might even get you an update later tonight. LoL! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: tina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 11

wow thats good that they saw each other will there be agnst cause i kinda like that

Author's Response: Glad you like the angst, Tina, because there is a great deal more to come. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: jadangel2001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 11

oh m god! oh my god, oh my god, oh my god!!! that was so...i wanna read more so, so badly right ow! please update again soon! i'm on my knees, begging here! :$

Author's Response: Well, you should be able to read more sometime tonight. I'm about 3 quarters of the way through the next chapter, just need to finish and do some proofreading. Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 11

Still Love this fic! Great update, waiting for another!

Author's Response: Thanks, Kelly! I'm so happy that you not only love this story, but take the time to let me know. Makes me smile and that's a good thing since I am at work!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 11

I wondered how they were going to find each other again. Great job with the time line! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm sure there will be some angst but it's all good as long as it ends up Spuffy!

Author's Response: Yes, there will be more angst, but if all goes as planned and Muse doesn't get totally out of control, then we are nearing the end of the story. Somewhere around 5 more chapters, maybe. So, not too much angst! Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 10:20 am Title: Chapter 11

You evil person you! Knew as soon as you mentioned creative writing who was going to put in an appearance but now there's a student/teacher barrier in place as well as age. Having said that age won't be such a problem now and Spike has made something of himself so surely Joyce can't object should they decide to rekindle their relationship!!! Loved it and so glad you updated.

Author's Response: At least I admit to being 100 % evil, right? As of right now, Spike isn't a teacher, not until the first of the year will he be on the actual payroll. All of that will be explained later. Now, we just have to get those crazy fools together. Thank you so much, Sam for the review!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 08:44 am Title: Chapter 11

First love.. lost but not forgotten. Kinda awkward. student-teacher. Small world- so now - 3 years have passed.

Been waiting for the update and their meeting.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Yep, three years have passed since they have seen one another, but only a little over two since the end of the last chapter. Might confuse some people, but you caught it. Yeah! I'm working on the next chapter, Muse showed up for this story and is eager to work. Thank you so much, Pam. Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 08:15 am Title: Chapter 11

So he went back to England, wonder what they will say to each other when they talk again.

Author's Response: It shoudl be interesting, that's for sure. Thanks, babes!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter 11

:O you cant leave us hanging like that....i loved it:) hope you update again real soon i cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Of course I left it hanging like that, silly! Evil cliffhanger! Yeah! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 10

I guess Joyce and Spike had a talk? How else could she know about the age difference, seven years, between him and Buffy? Great update! :)

Author's Response: Hmm...did they talk? Maybe...maybe not. Just have to wait around and see, huh? Yes, I am evil. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 10

lovely! can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I am hoping to get a chapter out by Friday night if all goes as planned.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 10

I loved this story! There are so many possibilities, I am thinking TA or something, maybe Drusilia is one of the Prof.? I will be watching for an update!

Author's Response: I haven't decided what to do with Dru, but she will make an appearance eventually. Maybe interested third party or something? Thanks for the review and I am pleased as punch to know that you love my story!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 10

BTW.. went back and reread your bio.. realized you were a Bama girl.

If it is the Alabama Crimson Tide you back.. Hoping Saban can do some good and then won't pick up and leave! Ha!

I'm from Louisiana ...LSU Tigers.

Good luck against Arkansas and we'll see what happens Nov. 3 LOL



Author's Response: Hey Pam! Well, I am from Bama but I am a Auburn fan. War Eagle! (Even though my boys are sucking very nicely this season) So, far though, Alabama seems to be kicking some major booty. I am at least a nice enough person to pull for them when they aren't playing my boys!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh I want to know how they will meet again, I feel bad that she thinks Spike betrayed her.


Author's Response: It's an interesting meeting, that's for sure. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter 10

OK great , now bring Spike back before she decides he's all wrong for her or some other guy comes along and she decides she has to be with him instead , because that's how she is and it's totally frustrating when she does stuff like that, but she'll probably do it anyway right,even though she's not in a relationship. OMG I hope he hasn't moved on also. I feel an ill wind blowing in , love this story though.

Author's Response: There is an ill wind a blowing! How perseptive you are, Jo! Glad you are still liking the story, I am actually quite taken with it. In fact, it was suppose to be my secondary story that I fall back on when Lose Control gives me trouble, but all Muse wants to do is work on this! Crazy muse! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter 10

Moved it on nicely...And good bye Scott Hope.

A chapter or so of high school and introspect, or a little of Spike's journey would have been ok with me..

And Mom knows Spike's age? Maybe a conversation where he promised not to...

Waiting for Spike's return.

Enjoying.




Author's Response: Spike will make his return in the next chapter, so don't worry too much. Glad you liked it, Pam, and thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 06:04 am Title: Chapter 10

I have a strange feeling that Barb from the book club was infact Spike from the bedroom but what could they possibly have to discuss - stay the hell away from my daughter or wait around in the wings and see if you still have feelings for each other when Buffy's grown up? I thought the time passing worked well. Spuffy with no Sp just isn't the same! Really looking forward to more and thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I totally love the way you worded the whole "Barb from the book club was infact Spike from the bedroom". Great! Glad the time passage worked out so well. I was a bit nervous about it. Thanks so much, Sam!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter 10

I'm wondering how Spike's going to explode into Buffy's quiet and constructed life. Should be interesting. Update soon please! :)

Author's Response: It is going to be quite a doozy, that's for sure! Thank you so much for the review, babe! I'll try to update as soon as I can. Really need to put out a chappie of LC first!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter 10

oh also i wonder how joyce knew spike age, i really hope that he didnt come by to talk with her and she kept that from buffy. also i hope that she didnt know that becuz she was either with him or knew that he was with cordys mom. i cant wait to read if anything like that happened, thanx

Author's Response: Very good, grasshopper. I was wondering who would catch that or if it wasn't as obvious as I had thought. You will be clued in soon. If not the next chapter, then the one after that! Thanks again!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter 10

OH HOW SAD!! IM KINDA GLAD THAT SHE GOT OVER SPIKE AND MOVED ON, BUT I WANT THEM TO BE TOGETHER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i hope that when she goes off to college she meets up with spike again and that theyre able to be together, but i know that u said that there was going to be angst so im not expecting them to be together and happy so soon. i just hope that everything works out in they and and that they do end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. THANX U KICK MAJOR ASS

Author's Response: WoW, what a great review! I'm still grinning like an idiot even though I'm currently dealing with a hostage situation. But it's mainly a waiting game anyway from my standpoint in the dispatch office! Which is good since I get to post and read reviews, right? There is more angst and decisions to make on Buffy's part so I hope you like that as much as you have liked the rest. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 10

Great high school ending. Now to the adult stuff please.
The chapter was good.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, DK. Honestly, I had not intended for this to have stretched out so long during the HS years, but Muse got carried away. Adult stuff will be soon, promise. Glad you liked it!

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