Reviews For Get out of the box
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Reviewer: jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2007 - 06:19 am Title: Noticed.

Wow, me like =D

I can't wait to see what will happen now, great endning.


Author's Response: Hehe ! Thanks for your review hunni, more to come soon

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 07:36 am Title: Noticed.

This was good! I liked it, especially this sentence:
He looked at her in the eye as he sung his last sentence ''just get out of the box.'' It felt like they already had a connection :)



Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I love hearing from you :)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2007 - 04:59 am Title: Noticed.

loved it. great start.

Author's Response: Thanks for your Review Blondie!! X-x-X

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2007 - 08:58 pm Title: Noticed.

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Part 2's coming very soon :)Thanks for your review xx

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2007 - 09:01 am Title: Noticed.

OH I love the changes


Author's Response: You're the one who mainly helped me so thank you xx

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2007 - 01:57 am Title: Noticed.

i wouldn't call this a ficlet if you plan on continuing it, that makes it sound like there's only one chapter. it was okay, except for a few minor mistakes here and there, i would suggest getting a beta to look over your work for you, it really makes a big difference. also, just a little piece of advice, if you have mistakes in your summary, that shows a lot of how the writing would be and some people might not read the story, so i would also get that fixed, just something to think about.

Author's Response: Thanks... I think, but give me a chance seeming as its my 2nd spuffy fic ever..

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 10:15 pm Title: Noticed.

Great start on the story so far... keep it up you're doing good.

Author's Response: :D thanks for you're review!! xx

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 07:25 pm Title: Noticed.

Interesting start, I like it. Keep writing, I'm looking forward to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, the update will be here by monday :S xx

Reviewer: Nancy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:54 pm Title: Noticed.

I like it. Keep up the good work. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks hunni for you're review xx

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:46 pm Title: Noticed.

Nice start and thank you for making them a bit older than most stories; more places to go with the story line. Good luck and I hope more people review.

Author's Response: Thanks, hun xx

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