Date: 09/07/2007 - 06:19 am Title: Noticed.
Wow, me like =D
I can't wait to see what will happen now, great endning.
Author's Response: Hehe ! Thanks for your review hunni, more to come soon
Date: 08/09/2007 - 07:36 am Title: Noticed.
This was good! I liked it, especially this sentence:
He looked at her in the eye as he sung his last sentence ''just get out of the box.'' It felt like they already had a connection :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I love hearing from you :)
Date: 08/08/2007 - 04:59 am Title: Noticed.
loved it. great start.
Author's Response: Thanks for your Review Blondie!! X-x-X
Date: 07/29/2007 - 08:58 pm Title: Noticed.
Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Part 2's coming very soon :)Thanks for your review xx
Date: 07/27/2007 - 09:01 am Title: Noticed.
OH I love the changes
Author's Response: You're the one who mainly helped me so thank you xx
Date: 07/27/2007 - 01:57 am Title: Noticed.
i wouldn't call this a ficlet if you plan on continuing it, that makes it sound like there's only one chapter. it was okay, except for a few minor mistakes here and there, i would suggest getting a beta to look over your work for you, it really makes a big difference. also, just a little piece of advice, if you have mistakes in your summary, that shows a lot of how the writing would be and some people might not read the story, so i would also get that fixed, just something to think about.
Author's Response: Thanks... I think, but give me a chance seeming as its my 2nd spuffy fic ever..
Date: 07/26/2007 - 10:15 pm Title: Noticed.
Great start on the story so far... keep it up you're doing good.
Author's Response: :D thanks for you're review!! xx
Date: 07/26/2007 - 07:25 pm Title: Noticed.
Interesting start, I like it. Keep writing, I'm looking forward to read more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, the update will be here by monday :S xx
Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:54 pm Title: Noticed.
I like it. Keep up the good work. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks hunni for you're review xx
Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:46 pm Title: Noticed.
Nice start and thank you for making them a bit older than most stories; more places to go with the story line. Good luck and I hope more people review.
Author's Response: Thanks, hun xx