Reviews For One Moment More
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2012 - 04:35 pm Title: Five
Date: 09/19/2012 - 04:35 pm Title: Five
Very sweet and lovely. Is this finished? It seems to want more...
Reviewer: Kaitlynn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2004 - 02:21 pm Title: Five
Date: 06/21/2004 - 02:21 pm Title: Five
This was so sweet. I can't believe it was so short! I hope your in to writing more!
Reviewer: cammie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2004 - 08:23 am Title: Five
Date: 06/21/2004 - 08:23 am Title: Five
An enjoyable story, overall, but you desperately need to break up some of those incredibly long paragraphs into managable bits, especially when you have dialogue.