Date: 09/23/2007 - 01:10 am Title: All Sales Final
Oh, this is good. Damn good! I love your Crazy!Spike dialogue; it's very true to what we saw on the show. Looking forward immensely to where you're taking this. Update soon!
Date: 09/22/2007 - 10:16 am Title: All Sales Final
Nice Birthday Present :-D
I like the start; it didn't take Buffy long to figure out that Spike has a soul now. Looking forward to read what she'll do with the new knowledge she gained :)
Date: 09/22/2007 - 07:48 am Title: All Sales Final
Fab start. Both Buffy and Spike are spot on. I could hear this playing out in my head. Really looking forward to more.
Date: 09/22/2007 - 02:55 am Title: All Sales Final
Beautiful beginning, and startlingly in character. I was actually hearing "Beneath You" Spike in the church, in my mind while Spike was rambling. You've got him pegged all the way!
Buffy as well, I love her internal dialogue, as she's being reluctant as always.
This is really great. More Plz.
Date: 09/22/2007 - 02:04 am Title: All Sales Final
This sounds really good DOS, I would like to read more soon.
Date: 09/22/2007 - 12:15 am Title: All Sales Final
You write a very good insanoSpike (my term). I think I'm going to like this. Carry on...
Date: 09/21/2007 - 11:42 pm Title: All Sales Final
Very intriguing beginning. More please.