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Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 10:33 am Title: Can open...worms everywhere

Cute story, I like stories where Spike has kids, but I really think he should just come clean, lying will always lead to badness, and I doubt anyone would judge him if he told them he has a kid. But maybe he has some reason for not telling, although I can't figure out what that could be. Oh well, I'll just have to keep reading and hopefully I'll find out. Looking forward to read more.

Author's Response: I like stories where he's a daddy too, i know but i think it adds to the drama, yes you will. LOL, thanks for your review hon.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:52 am Title: Can open...worms everywhere

This is getting good, so how old is Dawn supposed to be? Also I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks hon, she's 3, don't worry i will be updating soon.

Reviewer: kitkat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2007 - 02:29 am Title: Can open...worms everywhere

Why the big secret? Why can't he just say he has a kid?

Author's Response: I don't know, i thought it added to the drama, thanks for your review.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: Can open...worms everywhere

Somehow I don't think that's the whole story. Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Oh definetly not... there is more coming. Thanks honey, i will be updating soon.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2007 - 08:40 pm Title: Can open...worms everywhere

Oh that was good, wonder what kind of slack Spike will get at work.


Author's Response: Thank you, I don't know guess you'll just have to wait to see. LOL!! I'll update soon.

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