Date: 10/14/2007 - 06:46 am Title: Uh-oh
Oh man I hate cliffhangers!!! Please update soon, great chapter by the way.
Author's Response: Thanks hon, i will try to update soon.
Date: 10/14/2007 - 02:57 am Title: Uh-oh
oh god! what an evil cliffhanger! PLEASE update soon, love this story :)
Author's Response: I know it was kind of evil of me, i'm sorry sweets. Aww thank you. I will try to update soon.
Date: 10/14/2007 - 12:55 am Title: Uh-oh
OH know, why do I fell something bad is going to happen.
Author's Response: I have no clue...*Smiles innocently* Everything will all work out.
Date: 10/13/2007 - 10:57 pm Title: Uh-oh
well, I gotta say that it was incredibly rude of Giles to air his sons dirty laundry to perfect strangers! i bet imagine the gossip will circle fast. And, while I don't agree with Buffy's idea, Spike acted like a bit of a jerk. Buffy may need to come to her senses, but he owes her an apology too.
I am enjoying reading this fic, tho & hope to see more! :)
Author's Response: Well they are not perfect strangers, they've all met Giles before. He did act a bit rash but, everything will work out. Oh there will be much grovelling!!! Thanks hon.
Date: 10/13/2007 - 10:33 pm Title: Uh-oh
I'm really enjoying your story, which is unusual because it's not my usual type of thing. I do have one suggestion I think you should consider - getting a new beta. Beta's are supposed to correct your mistakes and your one doesn't seem to know correct punctuation and grammar. I think if you got a new beta to clean it up a bit, it would really make a good story that much more fantastic. I'm not saying this to be offensive in any way, so please don't take it as a flame or anything, but as an author you obviously have really great potential and it's a shame to see things like punctuation get in the way of telling a story. Thanks hun, I wish you well
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much, ok i'll take it into consideration, thank you. Oh no i don't take it that way, i truly appreciate your advice. Thank you, no one has ever told me that before. Thanks sugar!
Date: 10/13/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: Uh-oh
i hope the baby is alreight or spike is going to blame buffy, thinking she did it deliberatly. hope help comes. can see why Spike hid from her, but it was a typical, juvanile thing to do
Author's Response: It is a juvinile thing but i felt it needed to be done so they could grow up. Thanks for your review sweetpea.