[Report This]Date: 10/15/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: LOVE...
So sweet, I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks hon!!
[Report This]Date: 10/15/2007 - 06:27 am Title: LOVE...
Great chapter, it's so sad that Buffy lost the baby exspecially since she decided that she wanted it. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks hon, I know but it added to the drama, i will try to.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2007 - 11:23 pm Title: LOVE...
Glad the disagreement and following events didn't ruin their relationship. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yea i was glad too, I know me neither, i will try to update soon. Thanks for your review. Reviews help me write better.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: LOVE...
aaawwww :( Poor people :(
Author's Response: I know, made me sad just writing it. Thanks for your reviews. Reviews help me write better.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2007 - 10:01 pm Title: LOVE...
Oh sorry she lost the baby, but maybe it is for the best right now. And they can always make another one.
Author's Response: I know i was sad when i wrote it. Yea i think it is too, yea they can. Thanks for your review, reviews help me write better.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2007 - 09:11 pm Title: LOVE...
aahh lovely spuffy chapter
looking forward to more, loved the bit about andrew
Author's Response: Thanks, me too, i'll try to update as fast as i can. Yea i loved it too.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2007 - 06:46 am Title: Uh-oh
Oh man I hate cliffhangers!!! Please update soon, great chapter by the way.
Author's Response: Thanks hon, i will try to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2007 - 02:57 am Title: Uh-oh
oh god! what an evil cliffhanger! PLEASE update soon, love this story :)
Author's Response: I know it was kind of evil of me, i'm sorry sweets. Aww thank you. I will try to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2007 - 12:55 am Title: Uh-oh
OH know, why do I fell something bad is going to happen.
Author's Response: I have no clue...*Smiles innocently* Everything will all work out.
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2007 - 10:57 pm Title: Uh-oh
well, I gotta say that it was incredibly rude of Giles to air his sons dirty laundry to perfect strangers! i bet imagine the gossip will circle fast. And, while I don't agree with Buffy's idea, Spike acted like a bit of a jerk. Buffy may need to come to her senses, but he owes her an apology too.
I am enjoying reading this fic, tho & hope to see more! :)
Author's Response: Well they are not perfect strangers, they've all met Giles before. He did act a bit rash but, everything will work out. Oh there will be much grovelling!!! Thanks hon.
Date: 10/13/2007 - 10:33 pm Title: Uh-oh
I'm really enjoying your story, which is unusual because it's not my usual type of thing. I do have one suggestion I think you should consider - getting a new beta. Beta's are supposed to correct your mistakes and your one doesn't seem to know correct punctuation and grammar. I think if you got a new beta to clean it up a bit, it would really make a good story that much more fantastic. I'm not saying this to be offensive in any way, so please don't take it as a flame or anything, but as an author you obviously have really great potential and it's a shame to see things like punctuation get in the way of telling a story. Thanks hun, I wish you well
Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much, ok i'll take it into consideration, thank you. Oh no i don't take it that way, i truly appreciate your advice. Thank you, no one has ever told me that before. Thanks sugar!
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2007 - 07:50 pm Title: Uh-oh
i hope the baby is alreight or spike is going to blame buffy, thinking she did it deliberatly. hope help comes. can see why Spike hid from her, but it was a typical, juvanile thing to do
Author's Response: It is a juvinile thing but i felt it needed to be done so they could grow up. Thanks for your review sweetpea.
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: Meetings and bad news
wonderful chapter. Poor Buffy and spike, a hard choice to make. i can see why Buffy would be so scared, not that i agree with her choice but she is so young. lloking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks, i know i don't think i could make a decision like this. I would pee my pants if this was my decision. I will try to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/13/2007 - 05:59 am Title: Meetings and bad news
Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks hon, i will be updating soon, so yea!!
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2007 - 09:47 pm Title: Meetings and bad news
OH no, this is not good.
Author's Response: I'm sorry.... but i needed to add more drama.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2007 - 09:58 am Title: New acquaintances
OH so they get to meet Spikes Daugther and Tara gets a friend.
Author's Response: Yea they meet, and yes, it makes me happy they meet!! Yay Tara and Willow. thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2007 - 05:45 am Title: New acquaintances
Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks hon, i will be updating soon so no need to worry!!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2007 - 09:47 pm Title: New acquaintances
lovely chapter, can see why Spike kept quiet. like the way Tara and willow meet looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks hon. Yea, needed a reason. Oh thanks i thought about how to make them meet i must have went through a million scenarios in my head.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2007 - 10:33 am Title: Can open...worms everywhere
Cute story, I like stories where Spike has kids, but I really think he should just come clean, lying will always lead to badness, and I doubt anyone would judge him if he told them he has a kid. But maybe he has some reason for not telling, although I can't figure out what that could be. Oh well, I'll just have to keep reading and hopefully I'll find out. Looking forward to read more.
Author's Response: I like stories where he's a daddy too, i know but i think it adds to the drama, yes you will. LOL, thanks for your review hon.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2007 - 04:52 am Title: Can open...worms everywhere
This is getting good, so how old is Dawn supposed to be? Also I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks hon, she's 3, don't worry i will be updating soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2007 - 02:29 am Title: Can open...worms everywhere
Why the big secret? Why can't he just say he has a kid?
Author's Response: I don't know, i thought it added to the drama, thanks for your review.
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: Can open...worms everywhere
Somehow I don't think that's the whole story. Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh definetly not... there is more coming. Thanks honey, i will be updating soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2007 - 08:40 pm Title: Can open...worms everywhere
Oh that was good, wonder what kind of slack Spike will get at work.
Author's Response: Thank you, I don't know guess you'll just have to wait to see. LOL!! I'll update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2007 - 11:02 pm Title: one
Great beginning! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, oh don't you worry your head about it there will be more!
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2007 - 10:21 pm Title: one
love it so far . More Please!
Author's Response: Thanks. there will be more don't worry. Just trying to work all the bugs out of it.
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