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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2013 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 15

Very sweet ending !

Reviewer: Manson101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2012 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for an amazing story, pet! :)

Reviewer: spuffy28 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2011 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter 15

Hay, imagen if like Buffy, Willow died like for two seconds. then Buffy got called too. So that both Willow and Buffy where both slayer. That would be a great thing to do, for a sequel. What do you think?

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2007 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter 15

Read it in one hit and really enjoyed it. Thanks.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2007 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 15

Wonderful fic! Loved it!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2007 - 06:44 am Title: Chapter 15

Excellent story! Loved it!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter 15

I just love this!!! You're brilliant!!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 07:29 am Title: Chapter 15

Aww... I love that you ended things on a happy note. Thanks for the great read... Wonderful story! :D

Reviewer: Squid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2007 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter 15

It was really good! Don't ever worry about the mushy - that's why we all come here. To get our happy ending. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 15

Hey,
I loved the fic and followed it to the end faithfully.
I do feel it ended up too abruptly.
You're a pretty good writer, sucking us right into the heart and angst of the story.
However, I DO hope you work on how to end stories like this, wrap them up, so to speak. The ending to this somehow just didn't feel right, didn't feel finished. Yet, it didn't quite feel like something aching for a sequel (at least w/o being totally syrupy. Once Spike & Buffy defeated Angelus, the antagonist of the story was gone, ie that which kept the speed of the story going. Don't get me wrong, loved the loving between the two of them but it just wasn't going anywhere by then end of the fic.
(It was kinda like the line by Willow in 'Once More With Feeling', "...This line is mostly filler..."....)
There were directions the tale could've gone--- Buffy could have filled the shoes of various characters---slayers die and are called all the time...especially with there being a "Chosen Two", per se.... She could've been called ( know ,
She could've been a replacement of Faith or...? Or could've picked up magick in Willow's stead, since W. was interesting enough to be the Slayer called in this fic.
Or Buffy could've turned out to be a Key...
Anyway, it's done. All this said, I DID like it, and am kinda sorry to see it finished. But I DO thank you for it, and enjoyable read. Will look forward to any and all forthcoming fics from you, and am hoping you already have something new in the works!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh that was a good ending,

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 15

Enjoyed the ride so to say. :) (the read)
Fluffy is good to read after reading an angsty story.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

I was surprised when I saw "the end" at the bottom of the page, I didn't expect that already. But what a lovely ending! So sweet! Really liked this story, well done! :)

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 15

really great, i loved this story!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 15

Kudos Tammy that was very good

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