[Report This]Date: 01/21/2009 - 03:01 am Title: 55 Weapons
Kicking each others' asses and he's thinking about how pretty her hair is. He's got it bad. Wonder if Oz will have any memory of the vamp when he changes back.
Author's Response: Hehe, Spike's got it bad... As for Oz, maybe not this time, but maybe next time. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/19/2008 - 06:20 am Title: 55 Weapons
Spike showing up for Oz duty was also nice and couple-y. You're making their relationship work in a bubble and it's lulling me into this false sense that everything is going to be okay. I'm enjoying the vivid detail in the training and Spike's devotion. I'm sure everything is going to go to hell soon, but this quiet is lovely.
Author's Response: Yes, couples must do things together, even if it's werewolf watching, LOL. Buffy and Spike themselves are very much making their relationship work in a bubble, just going day by day and not talking about what's hanging in the air between them. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2008 - 11:37 pm Title: 55 Weapons
Hard to find words... I won't try to.
Enjoyed the chapter a lot.
Like the training. Spike bringing food. The hair.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked all of it! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/11/2008 - 10:04 pm Title: 55 Weapons
THEY ARE SO GOOD TOGETHER AND SHOULD JUST BE TOGETHER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i hope that nothing happens with oz and that spike and buffy get closer. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: We're slowly moving toward happiness for Buffy and Spike, I swear! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/2008 - 06:53 am Title: 55 Weapons
Loving the story, but again have to say I'm really totally, utterly in love with how you write their voices. They're so true to character and still all yours. I'm in awe.
Can't wait for more, *hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm starting to realize that dialogue is my thing. I always write the speech part of the chapter first, sometimes not even bothering with 'he said,' 'she said,' and what they're doing as they talk until later, then I go back and put it in. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/2008 - 04:49 am Title: 55 Weapons
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[Report This]Date: 07/10/2008 - 12:54 am Title: 55 Weapons
Yay an update! I was so excited to see that you had updated.
Love this chapter......can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/2008 - 12:50 am Title: 55 Weapons
good sparing scene
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/10/2008 - 12:50 am Title: 55 Weapons
good sparing scene
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 11:25 pm Title: 55 Weapons
I have to tell ya, I love this fic. I've been with you from the beginning. I had some problems logging into my account for a while. Couple that with my laziness and I haven't reviewed like I should have.
Anyways, I love this premise - it's different and fun. Every chapter leaves me craving for more.
I love how you write Buffy & Spike. I've read so many stories where they are just over-the-top emotionally. But here...I dunno, their relationship, the things they say, the way they act. Everything is completely believable. Thank you so much for sharing. Looking forward to more.
-Aly
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments! Aw, don't worry about not reviewing more, hearing from people anytime is nice. As for not being over the top, I always liked doing the little things. How characters act around each other, or say things offhand to show how they feel, letting them build slowly to something. (Gah! I haven't even had Spike declare his love yet. But it is *so* coming...) Glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 10:36 pm Title: 55 Weapons
Enjoyed! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 09:37 pm Title: 55 Weapons
nawww... loved this chapter:)....
can't wait for the next one
hehe
hope you update again soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 08:53 pm Title: 55 Weapons
SQUEE - he gave a key to his place... can't wait to see when and why she'll use the first time. Okay, pulling my mind out of the gutter so I can reivew now, lol. I love all the sparring they did, how nonchalent Spike is about his abiities. And then he had to do the sexiest thing EVER... keep making remarks about her hair, playing with it, stroking it... sighs - he's smitten. I was glad to see Buffy didn't get too upset when they talked about his past and the other two slayers. Too often in fanfic, she gets all bent out of shape, and while I understand that - its refreshing to see a Buffy who accepts it because hey, vampire here. So bravo, I loved it as I did the entire chapter sweety. Huggles.
Author's Response: Hmm, well Buffy might not actually be using the key until they have a fight. A really big fight... And I'll leave you wondering. :) Glad you liked the sparring and Spike playing with her hair. As for Buffy not being upset about the Slayers, well she's had a different relationship with this Spike than canon Buffy. As well as the fact that there doesn't seem to be any reason to single out the Slayer deaths as special, out of all the people he's killed, since her being the Slayer hasn't put her in danger from him. (And the whole 'all the people he's killed' thing will come up again). I guess in this chapter, it's sort of like a less harsh FFL. She wants to be a better Slayer, so she's asking about the Slayers he's taken out. Anyway, glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 06:57 pm Title: 55 Weapons
That was cute, the thing with the hair. I loved it and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 06:55 pm Title: 55 Weapons
Great chapter. They are sooo cute together. I seriously love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder how the others are going to find out about Spike...
Don't take your time posting the next chapter ;)
Aly
Author's Response: The 'finding out' is coming soon, I swear! (At least part of the finding out...) Glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 06:48 pm Title: 55 Weapons
Loved the chapter and Spike and Buffy's interaction. When he changes in the morning, will Oz remember that Spike was there?
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Well, Oz doesn't seem to remember what happens, really, in his wolf state, so he won't. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 06:47 pm Title: 55 Weapons
brilliant as always, and spike will always take care of her...loved the chapter, more please
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 05:07 pm Title: 55 Weapons
Haven't reviewed in a while but wanted to say I have been watching and waiting. Loving the first part but hating the second. I am saving the drabbles for when you are finished. I will do a full read through. A question though how many more chapters are you planning for now. I know you had originally said 60, but then that went of the wayside, just curious 'cause as I have said before this story is amazing!! And lastly, I wonder what Oz is going to say in the morning?? Cannot wait til next time~~Kelly
Author's Response: Well, the drabbles just sort of fit in in different chapters, so they don't have to be read at any particular time. As for how many chapters now, I hate to say a number, because I'm sure I won't hit it. :) I can see the end, but as for how much writing it will actually take, I don't know. Maybe 80? But don't hold me to it. :) It wasn't like I originally planned for sixty. It was just that I knew there would more or less be two parts, LA & SD. Besides Buffy and Spike, there would be a shift in the plot and the characters between the two parts. And when I got to chapter 30, I just sort of figured the SD part would take about the same amount of time. Hehe, I was wrong.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 05:00 pm Title: 55 Weapons
Brilliant chapter. I could smell the dust they disturbed as tehy sparred, could smell her sweat as she tired fighting a losing fight, could see his smirk as he taught her how to be more, how to be better, how to be!
*takes bowl of munchies and starts waiting on your front porch for the next update*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the chapter so much! Buffy is going to be quite the fighter when Spike is done with her... Thanks for reviewing! *hands you soda to go with the munchies, as I type the next update*
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 04:58 pm Title: 55 Weapons
Babysitting poor Oz.. and love the talk.. and his desire to make her the Slayer.. capable of handling any "monster"..
Is more "Spuffy" coming soon ?
Enjoying.
Author's Response: There is Spuffy coming! Though it depends on your definition of "soon." It's like the development after the next two developments... But it seems soon in my head. Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2008 - 04:52 pm Title: 55 Weapons
I like how their friendship is growing.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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