Date: 01/21/2009 - 03:29 am Title: 58 Discoveries
Love it when the secret gets out. Had to eventually. Yeah, aftermath! Pretty awesome argument between Spike and Buffy, too.
Author's Response: Thank you! This was one of their big arguments, and I was wondering how it would come off.
Date: 09/19/2008 - 02:02 pm Title: 58 Discoveries
The fight was vividly choreographed and exciting, and I love that it completely outed Spike to Willow. It was inevitable, but his anger and pissiness about watching her rather than protecting Buffy was wonderful. Your Willow is well drawn and in voice, and now I wish I had tome to hear Buffy's explanation for this turn of events. I'm sure it's going to be a good one.
Oh, I hope she swears Willow to secrecy. Willow's an awful liar, and it could lead to some zany conversations.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the fight, and the big reveal to Willow. It always seemed natural to have Willow find out first. And yes, Spike was less than thrilled to be ordered to take care of Willow... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/03/2008 - 01:36 am Title: 58 Discoveries
OMG, the humor in this was absolutely too freakin funny - really enjoyed that sweety. And my-my-my, but how Spike got so testy (but with valid points of course) after that fight with Willow involved. It's funny in a way that they actually 'argue' like a couple, all with the yeah, yeah, fine, fine. Can't wait to see how you have them resolve their little spat, particularly when each made very good points on their behalf. I see it as Spike really looking out for her best interests more than anything to be honest, and though I'm not really taking sides, I'm leaning towards him - no offense Willow, LOL. Can't wait for the next update hon, I'm still addicted to this story. Huggles and kisses.
Author's Response: Hehe, glad you like the way Spike and Buffy argue! I'm glad that everyone seems to think that both Spike and Buffy have valid points, because I tried very hard not to make either of them sound unreasonable. And yay for leaning toward Spike, because at first I was afraid that I wouldn't be able to find a really good reason for him to be mad, which I had to, because this fight has been coming for a long time, because of what happens as a result of it... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/02/2008 - 02:17 pm Title: 58 Discoveries
Can't wait to find out how this little talk is gonna turn out. :) Great chapter. Guess Spike doesn't care much about others yet. Maybe that'll change. Hope so. :)
Author's Response: Yes, Spike has a problem connecting... As for the talk, it's coming up next! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 09:34 pm Title: 58 Discoveries
Heh *g* funny how easy it is to scare a vamp with a mother asking questions ;))
That clearly showed how dangerous it can be to take amateurs with you to patrol ;) But protective Spike is hot.
Author's Response: Hehe, maybe Spike is like any other guy in that respect, doesn't want to be asked what his 'intentions' are, LOL. And what does Spike do that isn't hot? :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 12:05 pm Title: 58 Discoveries
Is this a sign of whats to come? Spike may be helping Buffy, but he's evil - he doesn't care about anyone else but her...
Love that Buffy is getting better when they spar! Also that she is becoming more assertive.
Wonder how Will is gonna react to the truth - or if Buffy will even tell her everything...? Looking forward to more!
-Alyx
Author's Response: Hmm, maybe a slight sign of something to come. I wouldn't go straight to evil on Spike, but I would say he doesn't care about anyone but Buffy. As for Willow, Buffy will pretty much tell her everything... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 09:34 am Title: 58 Discoveries
Uh oh... Not that it wouldn't happen, eventually, and hopefully it's just a spat, but uh oh...
I hope Willow is understanding and all...
As for me mentioning a claim in the previous chapter, it wasn't meant as a mystical thing... or maybe it was. Anyway, I got that it wasn't meant as one, it just seemed like a big deal, like a claim would be.
Well, that didn't make much sense, so I'll say again that I love this story and that I can't wait for more :-D
Author's Response: Yeah, uh oh. Next chapter, big uh oh. But Willow will be mostly okay with it. Or, sorta okay with it. As for the not-claim claim (which it wasn't a claim :) yeah, it was a big deal, what he said, because he's thiiiiis close to saying the L word... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 08:41 am Title: 58 Discoveries
Damn good chapter there. And whoa boy about Willow. Really curious how the talk will go.
Author's Response: Thank you! One talk, coming up next!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 08:26 am Title: 58 Discoveries
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Date: 08/01/2008 - 08:09 am Title: 58 Discoveries
So the Vampire's out of the bag! Really enjoyed that chapter and Spike and Buffy arguing is almost as hot as them not.
Author's Response: Buffy and Spike are just hot, LOL. Glad you liked it!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 06:06 am Title: 58 Discoveries
haha very interesting indeed... can't wait for Buffy's explanation...
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 04:20 am Title: 58 Discoveries
first got to day LOVED THE LAST CHAPTER SO SWEET!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i think its so cute that theyre fighting, i hope that its just a lovers quarrel and not something serious though. also i hope that willow doesnt freak and that everything works out well. sorry i didnt review the last one, i havent had internet for 2 weeks, i nearly went insane. ne ways PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it! As for Buffy and Spike's fight, it's somewhere in between lovers' quarrel and something serious. And Willow won't freak out too badly. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 02:23 am Title: 58 Discoveries
look foward to the Willow talk
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 12:52 am Title: 58 Discoveries
So the secrets out, loved it and I can't wait to see what that means.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 08/01/2008 - 12:31 am Title: 58 Discoveries
Well now Willow knows. It was bound to happen sooner or later! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yep, they've been outed! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/31/2008 - 09:26 pm Title: 58 Discoveries
Awww how cute, Spike is worried about Buffy fighting alone. He didn't have to be all grumpy on Willow though, it was Buffy's call. I don't think willow will be throwing stones...she IS dating wolf boy. This could be good for Buffy too--finally being able to have someone to talk to about her confusing relationship with Spike...getting a 2nd point of view on the matter. Update soon! :)
Author's Response: Well, he is worried, but he's more annoyed at being ordered off. He didn't have to be grumpy at Willow, but from his perspective, he didn't have a reason not to be grumpy at Willow, LOL. And Willow won't be too judgemental, once Buffy goes over some things... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/31/2008 - 09:16 pm Title: 58 Discoveries
Excellent chapter. Love to see the passion behind the fighting, whether it's monsters or one another. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
Date: 07/31/2008 - 08:16 pm Title: 58 Discoveries
So ... Spike is outed.. And Buffy is now in Slayer Mode.. First fight.. for our love birds. And I guess Angelus is making his first move.
Enjoying.
Author's Response: Yes, Angelus is beginning to play... Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!