[Report This]Date: 01/21/2009 - 03:56 am Title: 61 Ruins
A truly vengeful Spike. Wonder who he plans to go after. Love when the anger takes control... When it's for Buffy, at least...
Author's Response: Yes, Spike has got some major cold, vengeful anger going for him. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 09/19/2008 - 05:59 pm Title: 61 Ruins
Drusilla being the savior was an excellent surprise, and her reaction to Angelus wanting to toy with Buffy was hysterical. It believably afforded Spike the opportunity to grab Buffy and bail. Now Giles knows about Buffy's "friend," it's going to be even more difficult to keep him out of the loop.
Spike's righteous anger is wonderful, and I love the idea of tying Angelus up and giving in to a spot of torture. Payback's a bitch.
Author's Response: Glad you liked Dru! I think she could be jealous in just the right situation. I bet Angelus always played with Faith, but *she* never got to play with Faith... And then she got bored. So she wants Angelus to kill Buffy right there. Or anything, as long as he doesn't bring her home, LOL. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2008 - 09:50 am Title: 61 Ruins
Very good chapter.
The description of Buffy as a chew toy is pretty powerful.
And I know she can handle fledglings... But two Master Vampires are present, not counting Spike. And she's their main target. So I still stay she was stupid to go off on her own, although I get why she did that, being pissed off and all.
Looking forward to Spike's Cattle-prod Hijinks.
Author's Response: Glad you liked how I described Buffy when Angelus had hold of her. And true, maybe going off alone was bad, thought it was also bad timing that they happened to show up just then. Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 09:19 pm Title: 61 Ruins
Is it revenge that is best served cold? As cold as a pissed off Vampire? Spike was there to save Buffy again - yeah. Fab update.
Author's Response: Ah! You hit my opening line for the next chapter: "Revenge is a dish best served cold." Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 09:00 pm Title: 61 Ruins
I've just caught up with the last 15 chapters all at once, so sorry for not reviewing each one, but wanted you to know that this story continues to entrance me. You've done a masterful job developing the B/S relationship... it feels so *real* and truthful, with all of the emotional snags that such a relationship would entail. Your dialog says so much, so succinctly ~ love it.
I especially adore the way you've tweaked canon in your basic story premise. We know all these characters, they're all in slightly different circumstances than we're used to, yet utterly in character (if that makes any sense at all).
Reading a bunch at once, I thankfully didn't have to suffer through the cliffhangers, but I'll be sure to keep up to date from now on because I just. can't. wait. to find out what's gonna happen!
Author's Response: Don't worry about not reviewing each chapter, it's good to know I've written a "page-turner," LOL. Thank you for the compliments on how I've handled Spike and Buffy's relationship. I've tried to take everything into account, and not have it be all romance and flowers, because they both have issues. And I'm glad you think everyone is still in character, even though they're "out of canon." I didn't have much problem with Buffy and Spike, but some of the Scooby scenes were hard for me to write at first, trying to "introduce" them to Buffy, while we still know most everything about them. Hmm, I didn't think I had *too* many cliffhangers in there, though you ended up reading at a point where there was a big one on the last chapter, LOL. Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you keep enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 04:58 pm Title: 61 Ruins
I hope Spike kicks Angel's ass! Great chapter! :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 12:38 pm Title: 61 Ruins
I'm really relieved Spike managed to save Buffy, and I'd almost feel sorry for what Angelus will have to deal with once the blond gets to him...
...unless, that is, things go wrong! They won't, will they???? That last line sent a shiver down my spine.
LOVE IT! *hugs*
Author's Response: Glad you liked the last line. It was one of my favorites. Hmm, things might not really go wrong, they might go horribly right... Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 08:47 am Title: 61 Ruins
*phew* So it was Spike there, crying out. Glad he got her away in time.
And that Buffy isn't drained, only her wound *sigh* hope it won't scar too much.
But now Spike is out for blood. Bad luck for Angelus.
Good to read the chapter after the cliffhanger. :))
Author's Response: Yep, Spike got to Buffy. And another cliffhanger, I know. But I promise next chapter will be cliffhanger-free. :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 03:26 am Title: 61 Ruins
OH SPIKE IS GOING TO HURT ANGELUS SO BAD!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im SO happy that shes ok and that spike went after angelus. also i thought it was hilarious how dru attacked him for wanting to play with buffy. i really hope that spike hurts angelus and that buffy and him talk and get together. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: Hehe, yes, Dru was a wild card. She wanted Angelus to kill Buffy right there, but no keeping her. What Spike's doing is coming up next! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 02:46 am Title: 61 Ruins
Yay! An update! Angelus had better watch his back. I hope Spike doesn't do anything too dangerous. He's angry and could get reckless. I really hope he kicks Angel's arse.
I absolutely love that Dru is the reason Angel lost his "prize." :)
Looking forward to your next update.
-Alyx
Author's Response: Hehe, well, Dru is unpredictable like that. She's got no problem with Angelus killing Buffy, but keeping her is another matter. As for what Spike's is up to, it's coming up next! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 02:07 am Title: 61 Ruins
yay.... buffy didn't get completely munched by angelus:)
i'm looking forward to the next update
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 01:32 am Title: 61 Ruins
I almost feel sorry for Angelus, almost. Loved the rest and more please soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 01:29 am Title: 61 Ruins
Hmmm a cattle prod. Will he be serving Angelus extra rare or medium well? Wonder what that other thing was? A brander a railroad spike? I damn hope so.
Hope you can update soon, I can't wait for the night of pain to begin for Angelus hurting Spike's girl. Make it slow and sweet.
Author's Response: Nothing so interesting as a railroad spike, but you'll have to wait and see. :) Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2008 - 01:03 am Title: 61 Ruins
WOW - totally luved this chapter, boo. THere isn't much else I can say. Spike saved the day and is out for revenge - God I seriously hope he gets some, revenge that is, maybe even dust Dru along the way, heheheheheheh. Thanks for such a quick update, you're spoiling us all. Luv ya babes.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, Spike is on the warpath, but what he's going to do might surprise you... Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2008 - 11:44 pm Title: 61 Ruins
So Spike/Will saved Buffy.. of course. With a little help from Dru. A torture lesson from Spike?
Early update... thanks
Author's Response: Well, more like a demonstration from Spike, to show that he was paying attention. And because he wants to. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2008 - 11:17 pm Title: 61 Ruins
Glad Buffy's ok but wonder what Spike has planned for Angelus! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hehe, I'll swear you'll never guess... Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2008 - 10:56 pm Title: 61 Ruins
brilliant update, hope Giles is ok with spike when he finds out what he is, loved every word
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!
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