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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 03:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Buffy finally having reality take the veil of new romance off was well realized. Intellectually she knew what she was getting into after the first reveal, but it's much different to be confronted with a dead body and the news of many more.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Missed several updates, even the last chapter! *hurries to read*
I'm glad that Buffy isn't assuming the worst how Riley died. But she knows now of the other killings.. yeah, really a wake up call but not of the good kind.
The question of the question now... how will Spike react? And isn't Buffy taking the easy way out? She would be killing people too. *on to the next chapter*

Reviewer: annie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2008 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

oh wow. totally unexspected. little out of character for buffy, but you write an amazingly good buffy-a-bit-off-cannon. I almost expected her to try and stake him, which is commonly done in fanfic, but I loved how you just turned that around. didn't see it coming and I love it when I'm surprised. great work, keep it up ;-)

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Now, that was unexpected! :) Nice twist, I'm dying to read more! / Ariadne

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty

HOLY SH-T! Didn't see that one coming! What an interesting turn of events. Can't wait to see Spike's reaction.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Wow! She feels that is the way to go forward? Wow! Will Spike agree?
I liked the Darwinian approach to vampirism. :D
great story!

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Well, at least sometimes Riley made her happy, but the things she has to go through now that she took the blinders off about Spike.
So I wonder if the detective noticed the marks on her neck?

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Another excellent chapter. Buffy's realization seemed very realistic and I'm glad she didn't shed tears over Riley. It seemed her tears were more for those nameless women who died and a little for her own loss of innocence. I'm looking forward to more, especially the conversation about Buffy's decision.

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Oh what a cliffhanger!! I knew Riley was going to get his ass killed. Stupid ponce. I wonder if Spike will turn her though. Will he refuse, given that she's grieving and confused, or will he take what he wants? MAN I love your stories!!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

What?! You can't leave it there.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I had a feeling when Buffy finally allowed herself to admit the truth, she'd go a little crazy. That said, her asking Spike to turn her was a bit of a surprise.

Still, it makes perfect sense that he mind would go in that direction. She doesn't want to leave Spike. She can't go on as she has been, knowing he's killing people. She knows vampires don't care about the humans that become food. If she becomes a vampire, she gets to keep Spike and she knows she won't care anymore about the people he's killing. Logically, it makes sense, but she's definitely not thinking about the consequences of such a rash decision. Much like when she was ignoring the realities of Spike's feeding, she just needs to be with Spike so desperately, and wants to just make any obstacles to that go away.

I think Spike will very easily realize that Buffy is a hot mess right now, and that her request is really not to be taken seriously. But then again, I never know what you've got planned, so I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter to see for sure.

Awesome update, as usual!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Really wasn't expecting her to want to be turned. I have to say I thought she'd stake him!!!! Wrong. I am so looking forward to what happens next.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 05:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty

OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG!!!

Not only didn't she give up on him, she wants him to claim her???

I really loved this chapter, but I don't think Spike will jump at the idea :-P (where do you stand with respect to claimage? *scratches chin* LOL)

I really, REALLY can't wait for the next chapter!
*hugs*

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty

She'd rather become a killer than be without him, huh?
I have a feeling Spike's going to want to refuse.....I don't know if he could go through taking Buffy's life.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 05:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty

"Hey, I think my husband might have been killed by the vampire I’m sleeping with?" -- Well, that would have been one course of action, but I kind of doubt these cops are quite on the level.

And in that moment, when she goes to him, I don't know how he can refuse her. Where the reality of what really matters comes into the light, so to speak. So powerful. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty

OMFG, I WONDER HOW HES GOING TO REACT!! i feel so bad for buffy, being put in that situation but then i think of it from spikes and i understand his point of view as well. i LOVE this story and am SOOOOO HAPPY that u updated. i CANT believe that she wants him to turn her and i CANT wait to see how he reacts. i hope that he doesnt freak but that he does give her time to decide if this is really wat she wants. i REALLY hope that things work out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!!! update as soon as u can, im DYING, really to read wat happens next. THANX SOO MUCH!!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty

ooooo nice cliff hanger at the end there:) i hope you update again soon

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty

wasn't expecting that? you must have something in mind to make a jump like that..post more soon

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Ooookay?! Wasn't expecting that. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty

You cant leave me hanging like this! I need more!!!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 02:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I knew it!!!!!!!


Gosh, you rob me of my ability to leave coherent reviews. More soon, please!!!

Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Seems like quite a leap there for Buffy--she's horrified at what Spike's doing and she can't live with it, so she wants to become a part of it?

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Wow...is he gonna turn her? Not quite the reaction I was expecting but I really don't mind, as long as she still loves him as a vampire. Can't wait for more!!!

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