[Report This]Date: 03/02/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: 8
Oh I wonder who he was talking about.
Author's Response: If you look at my answer to the other reviews that mystery will be solved... ;-) *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 02/21/2008 - 03:05 am Title: 8
ooooookay.....um.....Buffy's a little bit of a bitch, kind of stupid, and needs to open her eyes. First off, she says that they can't do anymore than kiss, then she goes and gives him a blowjob?? She really needs to straighten out her priorities!! and i do hope Spike toughens up. he's getting a little whiny...then i have to remind myself that he's supposed to be 16 and that Buffy's actually older. btw, that's really weird for me! i'm used to Spike being older and more "go-get-'em"!
all that aside, i truly and honestly love this story!
Author's Response: LOL, I hope by now things are OK for you. He's just a boy in love, and believe me that summer will bring a lot of changes in him!I'm glad you're still with me! Thank you*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 02/21/2008 - 02:54 am Title: 8
A couple of hugs and reassurances later I was dragged to James, where I received a bear hug and forgot all my troubles:P
*kicks u in the shins* i SERIOUSLY hate you!!! i've never met him! u think if i cry too i can get a bear hug?????????????? i'll do it on national TV!!! make fun of me, i don't care!! i would've got to hug on that fine ass man for at least 2 mins.
did ya feel his booty???? ;o)
okay, now i have naked Spike booties swirling around my head and now i have to go READ this chapter! another comment in a min!
Author's Response: LOL, I did NOT feel his booty, Monica, I could barely stand! The man is even hotter up close! I think he's too sweet NOT to give you a bear hug if you cry... unless the crying is accompanied by pulling on your hair and screaming "I want your baby, James". Best thing that could happen in that case would be a security guy hugging you to get out of there! LMAO*smooches*
[Report This]Date: 01/05/2008 - 10:23 am Title: 8
God, Buffy is so stupid! I hope they figure it out... and you said a little angsty? Grrr...liar.
So does teaching him to be a man include doing the monkey sex? I hope so, they both need it.
Next...
Author's Response: Hahahahaha, I guess by now you've figured out what teaching him includes ;)XXX
[Report This]Date: 12/09/2007 - 04:38 pm Title: 8
Ok, what I want to know is why the hell are you reading my rubbish?!
God you are such a brill writer! *bows down to sotia and grovels* I wish i had a tenth of you imagination!
Damn girl you have a follwer for life!
*zooms to the next chap*
Author's Response: I don't just read your stuff, I love your stuff!!! And please don't refer to your stories as rubbish in my presence missy! *taps foot and scowls* It's brilliant!Other than that, your review was the greatest thing anyone has ever said to me *blushes and grins*Thank you!XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2007 - 02:20 pm Title: 8
still lovin' it!
feel more productuve now sugar? :p
Author's Response: Thanks babe! I think I do:P
XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 11:39 am Title: 8
Great chapter! Very intrigued as to what will happen between them now that Buffy will be educating him :) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Glad you liked:) I'll tr yto keep it as hot as possible:P after all, there are so many things he should be taught...*winks*XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2007 - 01:49 am Title: 8
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A most execellent chapter. So looking forward too more.
Author's Response: *Grins* You made my day! Thank you!!!XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 10:43 pm Title: 8
Sorry to hear you had a bad time first; I saw several pictures at LJ from people being there :)
Sneaky, William didn't tell that he's in love with Buffy. Well at last that made Buffy jealous and a bit possessive :-D
Till next part; still enjoying your story.
Author's Response: I have many pics too, I can send you the best of them if you'd like! William didn't mean to be sneaky, he was just trying to put it into words, it was her fault she reached the wrong conclusion *winks*The next chapter will be steamy! Im_bloody_English went through it and added her touch, so I think you'll really enjoy it!XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 09:28 pm Title: 8
loved it. little sad, both wanting to be with the other, yet aren't together. keep updating! kisses*
Author's Response: Happy that you liked it! Don't worry, I'm not for the sadness, things will become clear soon!XXX
Author's Response: Happy that you liked it! Don't worry, I'm not for the sadness, things will become clear soon!XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 07:37 pm Title: 8
loooooooove the teacher-student comin up story!!!!
when will u post the next chapter?
Author's Response: *Grins* Thank you babe! I'm thinking Saturday, but you know me... A few good reviews and it'll be a bit sooner:P
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 04:21 pm Title: 8
i liked
Author's Response: Glad you did, hope you like the next one even more!:)XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 04:10 pm Title: 8
Ohhh... Buffy is in teaching mood! Was a lovely chapter and its funny that Buffy thinks about herself like this :) ... oh.. but she don't know that shes the 'heartless bitch' :).
So I'm looking forward your next teaching lesson!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! the first review for this chapter stung a bit, but I'm sooo happy most of you liked it! Thank you! XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 03:26 pm Title: 8
Why can't life be simple - oh yeah because it would be so boring but in your Spuffy world hot! Loved the chapter but poor Will feeling that he is inadequate for Buffy. All he needs is the love of a good woman and it looks like that is what he is going to get! Please keep up the good work. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well... we can't leave such man feeling inadequate now, can we? *grins*Insecurities will resurface (as they always do), for both of them, but have faith in them, (though there won't be any of the... other Faith in this story!!!) to overcome everything without major angst! Thank you for liking it, next chappy will be hotter, so tune in next week!!!XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 02:36 pm Title: 8
Woah! Hot stuff man!
Author's Response: Glad you think so... I plan for it to be hotter next week *winks*XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 10:36 am Title: 8
well of course i liked it!
and i dont get this whole "misunderstanding"!!! it's soooo clear that he's in love with buffy and not with another woman!! she is blind (from her passion) to see that HE wants HER. on the other hand, he's taking advantage of the situation cause he wants to proove her that he is the MAN she's being looking for!! it's a simple f.. game!
keep up babe! i presume sex scenes are coming up :)
Author's Response: Thanx babe! Needed that:) Yeap, a sex scene is coming next week, hope you like that too! And you sooo got the psychology of both of them as I meant it to be! (Hope it's because I managed to explain it, and not cause you're my best friend and always know what the f**k is in my mind:P)XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 09:39 am Title: 8
Much better! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!:P Hope you'll really like the next chapter
XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 09:33 am Title: 8
I'll keep reading anyway! :p I remember I read that phrase about him being so in love with her, but it just didn't made sense with what he said in this chapter. She didn't know he was in love with her, now it all makes sense! :) / Ariadne
Author's Response: Thanks, I added a little phrase in this chapter, hoping to clarify things. It's just after his declaration that he loves someone! If you can, please let me know if it's clearer!!!XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 08:52 am Title: 8
Who is he in love with?
Author's Response: Ok, my bad. I was so sure I had added one little phrase that would answer everything... There is noone else in his life, promise! I'll go add that now, so that no more misunderstandings occur:PXXX
Author's Response: Nope, the phrase was there, as I remembered. Chapter 7: "What was worse, at that moment he knew he was utterly, madly, and irrevocably in love with her and that he could never hope to be man enough to have, or even deserve, her! "
So you see, he's just trying to get around to telling her how he feels. And now I've spoiled the next parts for you:( See what ye of little faith made me do??? :PNo worries, I'm all for Spuffy!XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2007 - 08:42 am Title: 8
She sucks him off and the next thing is he confesses being in love with someone else? Wow, that must be so good for the girl, and it´s really believable that she wants to continue and isn´t put off at least.
Author's Response: LOL, guess you didn't like it, huh? First of all, she hasn't come to term with how she feels about him. Second, she cares, sees his need, and thinks she'll help him by showing him he is man enough. Finally, I know more than a few women who tend to act like this out of the desire to prove to themselves that even if the object of their desire loves someone else he can still want them.
It is up to you whether you can see things my way or not, however I do appreciate you taking the time to review, even if you didn't like it. Thank you!XXX
Author's Response: Oh, and if you read chapter 7, there is this little phrase about Buffy: "What was worse, at that moment he knew he was utterly, madly, and irrevocably in love with her and that he could never hope to be man enough to have, or even deserve, her!", so you see, he is not talking about someone else, just smoothing the way of telling her she's the one. His manner is awkward, but he IS 16 after all!
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