I know it may seem mean, but this is why I let these two chapters be posted, after having denied them numerous times. Even though I sent you numerous email telling you that you need a beta, you need to proofread, you still insisted on submitting your fic. So, I knew the readers would be honest, and I appreciate that they were all very constructive and not nasty. So now you see why I wouldn't allow the fic, and why I have denied chapter 3. You need to get a beta, now that 4 of us have said as much, hopefully you'll listen. I won't allow any further chapters, until they are fixed, also you need to go back through these two and fix them as well. Mind you they are 'MUCH' better than how they first started out, but they still need some fixing, and as I told you before I don't have the time to do it for you. Sorry.

Author's Response: its okay but i have no idea where to get one i tried to ask a few of my friends but they are no better then i am i gusse so if you know any i would really like it if you could let me know of them thanks Candie&Amy