[Report This]Date: 06/10/2008 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter 3
this is gonna be awesome!
Author's Response: Glad you think so.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2008 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Cool vision - her true nature comes a knocking : )
Wrist cuffs? for the groom - just think of the possibilities with that nice groom ; )
Author's Response: The cuffs are important - you'll see why soon. And they do conjure up some pretty yummy images don't they.
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, I like the turn of your mind. An extra magical incentive to thoroughly satisfy his new mistress!!! LOL, yep just love that. And again with the decorated hands, another Arabian touch. The details and your story-telling is just lovely!
Author's Response: Funny how the flipside to utilitarian earthships turned out to be something out of the Arabian nights - strange how the mind works sometimes. Thanks greyangel.
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2008 - 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
'fragile little earthling'... LMAO!
spike will get the surprise of a lifetime! lol
for once, i like droosilla. and i like the brotherly relationship between spike and anjell. i'm wondering if we meet other old friends along the way...
itching markings in private places? you don't like spike that much, do you? ;P
Author's Response: Yep more familiar faces in new guises coming up. Don't like Spike? Wash your mouth out! I'm just not averse to a bit of unnecessary torture that's all.
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm extremely intrigued by your fic and its plot. Haven't seen anything quite like it before and am usually not into futuristic type fics, but I like how you've painted the characters while retaining some elements of canon. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: So pleased you like the story so far. Am trying to keep the characters believable despite their new setting. This is all fairly new to me so your review is much appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2008 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter 3
This is cool and hot more soon please!
Author's Response: Just as well my mum doesn't know I'm doing this - and before you ask - yes I'm waaay over 18.
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2008 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Exceptional story!
Author's Response: Thank you for that
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2008 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic story I love the other world effect!
4 out of 4 stars
Author's Response: 4 out of 4 stars - blimey - hope I can keep it up! LOL
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow. What an amazing beginning. I do hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Very soon I promise
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
So different it just pulls you right in I wanna beg and plead for more.
Author's Response: Don't think anyone's begged me for anything before. Feels good. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
:~*Giggles*~:
Looks like things are gonna get uncomfortable
Cant wait for that to happen
=P
Author's Response: You're my kind of sadist.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic most orginal story I have had the pleasure of reading in a long time
Lovely!
Author's Response: Your review? Lovely! (hugs review)
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh oh oh this is getting juicy!!!
I can just picture Spike sitting all moody and bored out of his mind at this wedding and Rilet seems as boring as ever. This has a edge to it and I like the whole basis to this story its so different I'll be looking for this all the time now :D
Author's Response: Hope you like the next chapter then - it even has the word 'juices' in it!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 09:26 am Title: Chapter 3
I continue to love how things are playing out between Spike and Buffy. Interesting touch to have White Wedding be the song Buffy and Spike first dance to as a married couple. :D I also enjoyed reading Spike's inner thoughts. And I look forward to learning more about Buffy's dreams. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. Couldn't resist the White Wedding reference - I'm even one of those people who would leap up and dance to it at a reception (sad). More dreams the on way too.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Woo!!! This is really REALLY interesting!!!! Please don't kill me with having to wait forever for an update (although I wouldn't blame you if it took you ages-- this fic is just so imaginative and attentive to detail!). I can not WAIT to find out what happens next! There's absolutely NO way I'm going to get bored with this!! :)
Author's Response: Death by withholding updates - now that would be new. Nah, wouldn't do it to you. Its true it does take me ages to write but I have a very encouraging Beta, plus I'm really enjoying this experience, not to mention reading reviews like yours.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter 3
Theirs is gonna be a bumpy night and I get the feeling those symbols they are both wearing is gonna give them a lot of tension lol
Author's Response: Tension is a good word for it!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 3
You made a fan out of me I cat wait for your next chappie
Author's Response: Thanks Misha
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 3
Interesting story, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Nicka
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Well count me in as a new fan I love this!
Author's Response: Eeek am under pressure now. But thanks a lot.
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 3
(No, from now on all he had to look forward to was a dutiful rut with the fragile little earthling. He’d have to hold himself back from hurting the girl ...too much. He smiled nastily.)
*Lol* and just what exactly does he have in mind *Lol*
Author's Response: Whatever your fevered imagination can come up with (and mine!) LOL!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Please please update soon!! It's such an interesting universe that you've created
Author's Response: More soon I promise.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Some honeymoon. LOL! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Not as expected - as you would expect. Thanks W&H
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love the dialogue, love the spike/buffy interaction. Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Lets face it, we all love to see Spike and Buffy interact! Glad you like the dialogue between them
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is really cool; What an original plot.
Author's Response: Thanks I just followed the challenge but I'm having great fun with it.
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2008 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well, wife of mine, shall we get to it?”
“What?” the girl squeaked.
Spike suppressed a smile; this was almost going to be fun.
“Our sworn duty to unite our two races. I believe you call it shagging.”
Ha ha ha ha cant wait for more please post more soon
Author's Response: Your sense of humour must be nearly as warped as mine. *grins*
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