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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 09:05 pm Title: Ch. 12-Tick...Tick...Boom!

Yay for Riley being history now :)
Good that Spike noticed (smelled) the bites/vampire's blood). Hopefully he won't do something silly (Riley, wanting revenge).

Author's Response: oooh Riley is NOT gone!! *eg* sorry for the long wait but moving and being broke sucks Angel balls! bear with me! Monica

Reviewer: spuffyroxmysox Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 10:29 am Title: Ch. 12-Tick...Tick...Boom!

Really loved the whole story!

Keep it up!!!

Huggels

Candie

Author's Response: hi candie! thanks for posting. sorry it's taken so long to get back. i've been in the process of moving a couple of states over and don't have my internet hooked back up yet. the story is by far NOT finished!! hopefully, u'll stick around and keep reading! so glad u liked it!! Monica

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 12:56 am Title: Ch. 12-Tick...Tick...Boom!

wow that blue up quick, like your style

Author's Response: yes, i've had a great inspirational person over at EF. she's been great! thanks so much for reading! internet is down right now but hopefully it'll be up soon!! Monica

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 - 05:05 pm Title: Ch. 12-Tick...Tick...Boom!

Great chapter. I am sure that is not the last we will hear from Riley. I am sure that he will try to make good on his threat to kill her. Thanks for the long chapter and quick updates.

Author's Response: you are very welcome! be sure to read my AN!! hopefully it will change!! yeah, i was FLYING on this chapter! i loved it! and making Riley a total creep/asshole was great! my dreams came true!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 - 10:01 am Title: Ch. 12-Tick...Tick...Boom!

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY for your longest chapter! I LOVED Riley having to bear their combined wrath and I even like Xander in this story!

Go you, girly, for making me want more!! *bounces*

Author's Response: YAYYYYY!!!! i saw u online and was wondering if u would catch it or not!! yes, i am making Xander more likable in this story! the only ass that's gonna be around here is Riley! i'm bouncing right along with ya!! i'm so glad u like it!!! Anya and Dawn made me proud in this chapter. i just HAD to do the vengeful little sister! and Anya's just Anya, lol. thanks for the review!! XOXO Monica

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 - 09:40 am Title: Ch. 12-Tick...Tick...Boom!

And waht a chapter it was.
Could this finally be the end of Riley's lumbering involvment in this fic? Or is he gonna try to get rid of Spike one last time (perhaps even try to attack Buffy while she's asleep). If so... te funniest thing ever would be Joyce going medieval on his arse (Spike didn't have all that respect for her for nothing, you know).
All in all... this fic is getting better and better.

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing!! as for this being Riley's end...if i told ya, i'd have to tape your mouth shut!! i'm not telling. maybe, maybe not. haven't decided yet. i feel the same thing about this fic. i believe it's mainly because i didn't have a SL mapped out. i just started typing. now i wanna go back and change things but i'm restraining myself. i'm glad u're sticking with my story!! i'm not sure if Joyce is going to really know why they broke up. i'm trying to include Joyce more in this fic. i'll see what i can come up with. again, thanks for reviewing!! HUGS!!! Monica

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