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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: Confused Much?

I'm kind of surprised Spike didn't get in bed with someone else already, though that's what he gets for being with Buffy 24/7. great chap.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2008 - 03:51 am Title: Confused Much?

been a while, huh???? been a little occupied with my oh so delicious boyfriend. lol. great job. spike's still an ass but he is changing...a bit. he just doesn't know it. and harmony??? really???? ewwww!!! glad it wasn't anything graphic.kisses for the muse. he always delivers.

Author's Response: OMG - how are you honey? I've missed you. But hey, delish boyfriend detaining you... you go on with your bad self girl - get yer groove on. Yeah - Harmony had her cameo appearance but that's really the last we'll see of her in any capacity, I promise. No graphic spike/other from me... ick!! GLad you popped by to check out my story sweety - don't be stranger - luv ya lots and thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 11:56 am Title: Confused Much?

Great chapter! That was Harmony in the kitchen, wasn't it? Big surprise for Buffy, maybe she'll be angry for a while now, I know I would. And no way, Spike will "forget" about Buffy, just because he was with someone else, it will only get worse.
/ Ariadne

Author's Response: Giggles, yeah - I took the easy road on the most famous of bimbos. And you're right - no way will Spike forget about Buffy... no matter who he shags - and it does get worse. THanks for the review darling - huggles.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 03:41 am Title: Confused Much?

All the ways I want to know what happens next. Glad Willy figured out what Buffy's secret is. Course she's got it bad. Is there any other way. Can't wait til she figures it out. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hahhah, and I think you'll enjoy the next chapter, or at least I hope so. Yup - they both got it bad, now if only they can get it together. Thanks for the great review hon - smoochies.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 02:51 am Title: Confused Much?

A magnificent chapter... again! As if you could write anything but that. :D I loved the whole chapter, the scene with the pen, the conversation between Buffy and Willy which was oh so very revealing and damn over Buffy discovering what a naughty boy Spike was with Harmony. Boys will be boys I guess. ;) And he wasn't about to stop his ways after only a few days, it wouldn't have been natural or in character. Wonderful update and I can't wait for the comeuppance. ;) *smooches*

Author's Response: Awwww, thank my sweet carino - all your help has been invalouable to me. This was a heck of a chapter with both their tempers huh? Hee hee, and to think what will happen in the morning? War, confrontation... martial arts? Giggles. Thanks for everything mi hermana, Luv you boo.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 12:46 am Title: Confused Much?

I have been so bad about reviewing lately - RL is just totally kicking my ass these days. But I wanted to jump in and let you know I'm really enjoying the sparks flying all over the place!

Can't wait to see how the confrontation will go after Buffy's discovery of the dreaded Harm in her kitchen. I know you'll make it a humdinger!

Author's Response: Oh don't worry about it hon - I'm just glad to see you here and still enjoying it. RL sometimes is a pain in the butt, I know. I do hope you enjoy the little confrontation they'll have on Sat. morning, it will be full of fireworks, *winks*. THanks for the great review my friend, hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 03:38 pm Title: Confused Much?

Hey to be honest I haven't been keeping up with this fic or any Spuffy fic lately, but I decided to visit TSR today and when i saw that you updated I read the new chapter. My opinion, I like this twist. Seems to be in character for him I think. But why the comeuppance if they're not together? He doesn't owe her anything. If the payback is another love interest for her like some are suggesting, please not that big bore Riley. Like how about a Johnny Depp lookalike, but then with the cheekbones that could come off as him being used as a substitute and my Johnny's no substitute. There's also the very pretty Ryan Phillippe, SMG did Cruel Intentions with. It'd be a change of pace from most fics having a third party that's attractive and charismatic enough to be an actual threat to Spike LOL. But I still don't think having her sleep with someone else as quickly as Spike did with Harmony would be in character for her though. *shrugs*

Great Chapter. Made me definitely want to go back and catch up with the rest that I missed.


Author's Response: That's no problem, I'm just glad you popped by to read a chappy and leave me a comment hon. This fic has a lot of twists and turns in it that people won't expect - and yeah, I agree that even though Buffy really has no right to be mad, she's 'acting out' as it were. As for her being with someone else, yeah, it's going to happen but not as a payback to Spike and nooooooooo, no Riley. Ick!!!! As for her sleeping with someone else right off the bat - nah, not in character for her. I hope you come back hon, it was so good to hear from you. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 01:57 pm Title: Confused Much?

Hey ya, great chap as usual. I really hope Buffy gets to have some bedroom fun with someone else just as Spike has. Its a pet peeve of mine that Spike always sleeps around but Buffy idosent get any fun. Make Spke jealous for me, go on, you know you want to.

Author's Response: HAHhahahahha, I'm glad you put your trust in me. Spike will get his, it just comes in the form of something he doesn't expect, *wink wink*. As for Buffy bedroom fun, wellllllll, not exactly in her character makeup for this fic, but she will make Spike jealous and it won't actually be with the intention - which will drive him even more nuts, giggles. Glad you like the update deary, thanks for the fab review. Kisses.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 01:00 am Title: Confused Much?

Oh I wonder who the Blonde was and how Buffy and Spike will work through this.

I loved, it but yeah reallife does come first after all, that is why it is taking so long with my stories.



Author's Response: HAHAHHHAHAA, they'll have a time working thru it, that's for sure - one word, 'showdown'. Yeah, sometimes RL can reeeeally get in the way and it sucks when the muse wants to write but there's no time to play, poo. Thanks for the review darling - hugs.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 11:26 pm Title: Confused Much?

Spike ought to do some growing up! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Giggles - indeed he does, and he will, it just takes THanks for the review hon and I do hope you enjoy next chapter. Kisses.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 10:28 pm Title: Confused Much?

Buffy's not really running hot and cold. She's trying to maintain a comfortable working relationship with someone she doesn't really realize she has feelings for. It's a tightrope, and the mutual attraction, though hard to deny, is still new. Spike takes even their tentative friendship as Buffy giving in.

It makes perfect sense that Spike would consider his growing feelings a symptom of not having sex for a while. He's not used to caring for women. They've just been used for scratching an itch in the past. Buffy's reaction to Harmony also belies her intense not caring very much that Spike's getting said itch scratched. For a genius, he sure is an emotional bonehead. Their relationship is tense and hilarious and I love that Willy sees right through them.

Hungover Buffy, still bristling from walking in on Harmony, should be loads of laughs on Saturday morning. I can't wait.

Thanks for another highly entertaining update.

Author's Response: She really is, but of course it's tough with a guy like Spike, pushing buttons she's never had pushed before. ANd really, Spike being 23, well, I don't know a ton of 23 year old guys who don't tend to think with their second brain and then justify it somehow - that's testoerone for ya, but of course he's not really 'with' Buffy so in his head, he didn't do anything wrong - like you said, emotional bonehead. Oh, you can bet Saturday morning is going to have some fireworks, *inserts evil laugh*. Thank you so much for the great review - I always love reading your insight on things. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 04:52 pm Title: Confused Much?

ahh! now that's just taunting! *pouts* about the come-uppance i mean.
hee! frankly, i'm surprised spike lasted this long. another fascinating chapter, thank you so much!

Author's Response: Hehehh, oooops? But hey, it'll be worth it, Buffy get's some satisfaction out of it and Spike learns a thing or two. Thanks for the review sweets - smoochies.

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:20 pm Title: Confused Much?

That litlle PS has left me itching for more!!!! Can't wait to see it.

Author's Response: YAY, and it'll be a whopper of a chapter, that I can promise you. So glad you liked this one hon and thanks for the review - snuggles.

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 02:45 pm Title: Confused Much?

That was freaking fantastic :). I loved this chapter and I loved Buffy getting this drunk. Spike will have a lot work on his hand getting Buffy in her room.
Your're right.. he made a big mistake. I don't think Buffys opinion of him is any better.
I'm looking forward your next round of Spuffy!

Author's Response: Indeed Spike will have his hands full on Saturday morning. Technically he didn't do anything wrong because he's not 'with' Buffy, but yet in stil, he messed up and you're right that her opinion won't be any better of him for his efforts. THanks for the review dearie, hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: jeanieofoz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 08:27 am Title: Confused Much?

glad you had a good time with hubby. thanks for the update :) will always love your writing

Author's Response: Awwwwwww, thanks hon, I really appreciate it and I'm hapy you liked the update - smooches to you.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 04:50 am Title: Confused Much?

haha i loved that chapter:) i hope you update again soon

Author's Response: Good to hear you enjoyed the chappy - next stop is the showdown on Saturday, giggles. Thanks for the review hon. Kisses.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:54 am Title: Confused Much?

Yay, Spike got him some! Hey, if Buffy ain't puttin' out.... I know that's crude, but they aren't together and B's made it more than plain her thoughts on that ever happening. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHHAHA, I've got half the reviewers saying go Spike and half the reviewers siding with Buffy - this is great to have such opposite reactions from everyone. But like other folks, you're right. They aren't together so he can do whatever he wants... however.... his comeuppance is simply Buffy reacting badly due to her attraction for him but he will actually learn something which is the important part. They'll get back on track, but of course, this is Murphy's law, so there's more situations they'll still have to go through, giggles. Thanks for the review sweety - huggles.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 01:24 am Title: Confused Much?

I figured Spike would sleep with someone sooner or later... I'm curious though, is this a one time fling or an on going affair? Can't wait to find out what Spike's comeuppance is! ;) Great chapter!

Author's Response: And it really was inevitable and in character with his personality - glad you weren't to squicked by it. As for an ongoing affair... nope. Spike has no interest in being with the same woman twice - at least not til the spuffy ending. Hope you like next chapter, it's a doozy bound to get people riled up, giggles - I'm evil, what can I say? Thanks for the fab review sweetheart - kisses.

Reviewer: loveit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:38 am Title: Confused Much?

i love this story. i really think its awesome. i read your author's note at the very end however and it made me a little sad. i don't know if this is just my opinion, or the opinion of other readers as well, but if you have chapters ready,... why wait a week to post them. i know it drives me crazy during the week, and not in a good way. the story is so funny and well written that i juts want to read as much of it as i can. yeah

just wanted to let you know. :/

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter hon and it pleases me to hear you want as much of it as you can get. The reason why some authors choose to post once a week despite having chapters ready is that (and I'm not saying I speak for all those authors) we like to go over our chapters very thoroughly and I know I'm constantly tweaking little things here and there. It gives us time to finish writing the story knowing that we have chapters in reserve in case RL problems arise – kids getting sick, visitors, vacation - and I like to really polish my chapters up as much as possible before posting – it’s the virgo in me, giggles. Plus a week gives every reader a chance to read according to their work schedules and such. Some people don’t get to read the updates until later in the week and then they might be lost not knowing I’d posted so close together. Hope that answers your question. Thanks for the review – hugs.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:19 am Title: Confused Much?

Ouch that hurt! thanks for not being graphic , i would have spewed my dinner otherwise. That was a good chapter but bringing the skank home I think was a bad move. So what happens next , I hope she cold shoulders him for a while , make him grovel a little, or are they gonna play tit for tat , is she gonna bring someone home next just to show him? til next chappie , Tina.

Author's Response: Nope, not going to get graphic on that end, it pains me thinking about it, ick!!! And yes, bringing her home to THEIR place was a bad idea - thus a little lesson is in order - the comeuppance, giggles. As for Buffy doing a tit for tat, well, she's older and wiser and it's not really in her nature to do that, but she will get to date someone, giggles - and that in itself makes SPike jealous. GLad you liked the chappy sweets - thanks for the fab review.

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Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:16 am Title: Confused Much?

awww crap tina!! HARMONY!!!!??? i just spit my screwdriver out!! ewwww! u didn't even have to name the ho-bag and i knew who it was!!! i'm so glad u didn't go descript cuz i would up-chuck everywhere...or at least mentally i will! yes, grow Spike up a little and get him the hell away from her!! and a drunk Buffy is a hilarous Buffy! should've made her do her facial expression!! LOL and i really wish Buffy would get over her hot-cold crap! but i know u like angst so....i'm preparing myself for the torture! can't wait for the next chapter!!! :o)

Author's Response: HAHHAHAHAHAH, I'm sorry, it had to be, but I didn't go graphic. Harmon y was the perfect choice for the bimbo - but she won't see a lot of this story as far as time wise. Spike's done with her, I promise. Hee hee, drunk Buffy is fun to write, she really is and of course she has that hot/cold routine down, doesn't she? Glad you liked the chappy hon, you'll like the next one more, I promise - thanks for the review. Snuggles.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:14 am Title: Confused Much?

Well, seems like they both need a slap upside the head. And thanks for not going into the graphic detail with Sparmony. Ewwww is an understatement. Great chapter...and your end note there has my curiosity peaked! Can't wait!

Author's Response: Yup, indeed they do. They just get the correct messages from each other, misreading all the time, you name it. I'd love to throw them in a closet for a full day, but..... that would wind up causing WWIII at this point, lol. And you're welcome - I definitely am not doing any graphic sex that isn't between just Buffy and Spike - I just don't care for it, yuk! Glad you enjoyed the update hon and hopefully you'll like the next one just as much - it's a doozy, hee hee. Hugs.

Reviewer: Mindy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 10:39 pm Title: Confused Much?

Well, Spike just proved to Buffy what she had already known - he only cares about sex and not about the woman. So Buffy will run even further away. I'm actually looking forward to Buffy finding a guy who actually cares about her. I hope Buffy gets to have sex with someone, too. It's not fair that Spike gets to have that release but not Buffy. She does need to get laid. How stupid is Spike to bring Harmony to the apartment when Buffy and him are supposed to be rooming together in secret? Is Spike so mad at Buffy that he is tying to cause her all of this trouble at work also? If so, he definitely needs a comeuppance.

Author's Response: Oh yes, he did - he was predictable and of course she reacted badly only b/c she does find him attractive, not that he did any wrong doing to her personally. You're another reviewer who has wondered about Buffy being able to have some bed fun with someone else. But I do have to say, as tempting as that is, given her age and prudish character, it would be kind of 'out there' for her to respond as such. As for her dating someone else - that's not out of the question, *winks*. And yes, she does need to get laid, tht's for sure, giggles. Hope you like next chapter sweety and thanks so much for the great review. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 09:31 pm Title: Confused Much?

I love this story!! I'm so bad about reviewing but I wanted you to know how much I am enjoying watching Buffy confuse the hell out of Spike. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: They do seem to confuse each other quite a bit huh? But that's half the fun of writing them this way, giggles. I'm thrilled you liked the update hon and of course hope you like the next chappy too - thanks for the fab review - smoochies.

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Date: 04/06/2008 - 08:55 pm Title: Confused Much?

They're hardly beholden to each other at this point, so I don't really care that he went and got laid. I wouldn't be surprised if he ended up thinking about Buffy the whole time he was with Harmony.

Willy's a good friend. And drunk Buffy is always amusing. :)

Author's Response: Bingo - that's very true, they aren't together, it's just Buffy's attraction for him that made her act out like that. Sad but amusing, giggles. And yay, glad you like Willy, I always wanted to write him as a good guy. Thanks for the review sweets - huggles.

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