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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2008 - 07:23 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

I'm glad they made up.

Reviewer: De Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2008 - 02:31 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Buffy watches Blood Ties? I LOVE that show! I wanna be Vicky when I grow up. Well... a Vicky that has better taste in men, 'cause really, who says no to Henry? And who else hated the ending?

Author's Response: Hee hee, I ADORE me some salty Henry goodness - couldn't help but add it in, *winks*. So glad you like the chappy darling and thanks for the review - smoochies.

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 - 03:17 am Title: Harmony and Discord

I thought I had left you a review, but I can't find it.... I remember reading this chapter anyway ;) I just loved it!
Buffy is so jealous ;) when will she realize??

Author's Response: Oh that's alright hon - I'm not sure, but I think that's been happening with a lot of reviewers, they simply disappear, huh. LOL - it'll take awhile for Buffy to come around, but then again, the same goes for Spike... it makes the spuffiness all the sweeter in the end, I promise. Thanks for the review boo - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2008 - 04:14 am Title: Harmony and Discord

awww hell yeah! make him beg tina!! make him BEGGGG!!! i was shivering myself through this chapter!! nice angsty drama, with a side of horniness! i loved the fight!! seemed like a scene right out of the show only more sex driven. (note exclamation points) i loved it!! zooming to next chapter!

(might not get to it tonight but CAN'T WAIT!!!!)

Author's Response: LOL - I couldn't resist it, writing them like that. Hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter hon and then I'll post mid week and again on the upcoming weekend - it's explained in the a/n. Thanks for the review sweetheart - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 05:06 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Spike's proprietary insistence that Buffy change her outfit was outrageous, and then grabbing her and not letting her leave the apartment? Wow. His idea of wooing is completely caveman. Buffy is responding despite herself, but if he'd exhibit a little subtlety, it might happen sooner . Instead, he's continuously pushing the wrong buttons. It's very entertaining to watch him throwing himself at her.

The fight was entertaining and erotic, though Spike's attraction to her anger and venom was a little disturbing. I'm sure he'll be facing more of that, so I guess it's good that it's an aphrodisiac. Oh, who am I kidding, anything that Buffy does turns him on. Thanks for another entertaining chapter of this rich, funny story.

Author's Response: HAHAHHAHA, indeed he is a rogue with not a clue. And yes, anything Buffy does turns him on - not just her being mad, giggles. Glad you enjoyed the chappy boo - thanks for the review - hugs.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2008 - 04:07 am Title: Harmony and Discord

Glad they are slowly but surely working through things. Wouldn't be them if they didn't get irrationally upset over simple things and the behave really childishly. Loved their battle at the beginning. Love to see that side. Great chapter.

Author's Response: YAY, I'm glad you enjoyed their little battle and yeah, they are slowly making up. It is rather fun to write them as being childish - guilty as charged. Thanks so much for the review sweets - smooches.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2008 - 03:38 am Title: Harmony and Discord

I can't believe how childish the two of them were acting. Spike has to make some adjustments on his belief that Buffy is a piece of meat and Buffy has to realise that all men aren't like her ex. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Giggles - but that's their character and attitudes right now. They'll both learn as they go - no doubts there, it just takes awhile, *winks*. Thanks for the fab review hon - huggles.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 10:47 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Woo Hoo! New chapter! Well, new to me.
I love the glimpses of "love's bitch" that I'm catching through Spike's bravado. Great job of writing him faithfully even with such a different romantic history.
Their denial is so cute! They're SO doomed. Doooooomed! Heh
thanks for the great chapter! *hugs*

Author's Response: WOW - thank you soooo much sweetheart, I'm so pleased you enjoy Spike's character despite the history I've created for him. Oh yeah - they are well and truly doomed and will fight it as long as they can - like only Spike and Buffy do. Thanks for the awesome review darling - kisses.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2008 - 01:30 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Loved how you fit the Spuffy sparring/fighting from the show seamlessly into this chapter. Bravo! And this:

“You fight almost as well as a man, pet.”

“That’s funny.” She aimed her shin at his side, satisfied she landed the blow though he braced for it properly. “I was just about to say the same to you.”

Bwahahahahahahahaha! :-D

Author's Response: YAY, I'm thriled you enjoyed the rough and tumble scene - I couldn't resist, it held so much opportunity while writing it. Giggles - glad you like that fight comment - couldn't help myself. THanks for the review sweety - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2008 - 07:17 am Title: Harmony and Discord

This story is amazing!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.

Author's Response: THank you sweety, glad you're enjoying it so much. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2008 - 12:41 am Title: Harmony and Discord

OMG! That fight was fantastic. Loved every minute of this chapter. It's hysterical that neither of them has any clue just how hard they're falling. I love it!

Author's Response: YAY - I'm so glad you liked the fight scene. I just had to write it, it held so much promise for other things - like the dirty lil nasties he whispered, shudders, I would have melted right there. And yup - they're as clueless as they can be at this point, hee hee - that's the other half of the fun, *winks*. THanks for the great review darling - hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:37 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

hehe i loved it:) i can't wait for the next update..... lol at the fact that she locked him out of the house just to watch her show in peace:P



Author's Response: Giggles - petluant I know, but locking him out gave her the peace she needed to watch the salty goodness of Henry in private. Glad you liked the chappy sweety - thanks so much for the review. Hugs.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 06:31 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Loved it all I can't wait to see what happens if Buffy tries to bring someone in.

Author's Response: Giggles, and ya know - she won't even be doing it to get back at Spike, that's the funny thing - but of course Spike won't like it anyway, hahahhhaha, evil, I know. THanks for the fab review sweets - snuggles.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 04:25 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

Karate? Jujitsu? Oh tell me you didn't just write one of my fantasies! *LOL* And a bottle of oil! Now that's not in my fantasy but we can work something out. :D

Great chapter, once again! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: LMFAO - I didn't know I had written a fantasy of yours, but I know for myself, I wouldn't mind it either... rolling around on the floor with a hottie like Spike. THank you so much for the awesome review sweetheart - hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 12:14 pm Title: Harmony and Discord

I couldn't paste ALL the parts I loved here, cuz then I'd have to paste the entire update :P So the following will have to suffice:

“My problem `s that you don’ listen too good. You need to put somethin’ decent on.” Well there was a first! He never thought he’d hear himself say that to a girl.---- I loved his protective tendencies towards her, even if they only stemmed out of jealousy.

“Squirrelly li’l thing, aren’ ya?” If he could work a bottle of oil into this scenario it’d be a bloody fantasy come true.----Tehehehehehe, LOVED this!!!

He didn’t know what had her so mad with him but she wore it well. If he ever figured it out, he vowed to do it again.----NOOOOO, don't do it again, stupid man! LMAO, Tina you're bloody brilliant you know!

She could have walked in on God knows what and been blinded for life.----ROFL, yeaaaah, cuz that's what her problem was!

She hated the way Spike had left her feeling almost… ‘dirty’ with the way he came on to her. Grinding his erection against her, making her body burn hot against its will, how he made those nasty things he’d purred in her ear sound so good, the way he pleaded for her to stay with a husky-voiced promise of pure pleasure. She shivered at the mere thought. As much as she didn’t want to think about it, she was fairly positive he was capable of delivering that promise… and then some.---- Since Buffy doesn't want him to deliver, can he deliver to me, Mistress Tina? Please??? *bats eyelashes* I'll return him when I'm done, it won't be more than 30-40 yrs, promise!!!

I’d bloody well kill the bastard, rip his fuc… He stopped himself mid-thought, had to remember… she wasn’t his.---- Awwww, she IS his! He just has to clean up his act, the idiot! And riping a head or two would be nice. Especially if he did like NOW, or soon, anyway!

He got up to stand right behind her, placing his hands gently on both her shoulders. “`S okay,” he whispered in her ear. “Lie to me all you want, kitten. In my eyes, she’s doesn’ hold a candle to you.” Kissing her chastely on the temple, he left her with that thought.---- That infuriatingy perceptive, amazingly HOT man! Your Buffy is a fucking SAINT, I'd have jumped him there and then... of course I'd have jumped him ages ago, but that's just me :-P

Amazing update, can't wait to see how they make up, although I could live without them meeting anyone else... I wonder who those... 'elses' will be *looks innocent*

Love you lots!!!

Author's Response: OMG - so I take it you liked it? ROFL. Yeah, I went for the laugh a minute especially with the fight - and throwing in those husky voiced promises - oh yeah, baby. THa's Spike, bad to the bone. I like that wrote that he was a hot infuriating and perceptive man. Makes ya all angry and wanton at the same time - damn him, lol. THanks for all your help boo, luv you to pieces.

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 11:33 am Title: Harmony and Discord

Jealous Buffy acting immature, love it! Harmony called a public toilet-brilliant!

Please update soon!

Author's Response: HAHHAHAHAHA, glad you liked those parts and thanks for the fab review darling. Huggles.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:55 am Title: Harmony and Discord

Misunderstandings between the sexes - you brought the problems involved there across beautifully! Loved how she really doesn't realise that she actually is jealous, and that shes totally enticing him with the way she's dressing - the workout outfit. I could totally see his tounge down to his knees : ). She seems totally clueless sometimes - like in the hottub with the sexual innuendo (by the way - feel free to put Mr. Giles in there again - because wet, dripping Spike - yum!).
You are evil for promising more jealousy and hotness - in the next chapter. As always, looking forward to it!

Author's Response: Thank you sweety, I did try to bring it out in character style, the frustrations between them both. Buffy is as clueless as they come in almost everything she does. Hee hee, a wet SPike is always a sexy Spike - you can count on another hot tub scene *winks*. Yeah, I do have to have some more jeaousy in the future, but of course it all serves a purpose, I promise. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the update hon and thanks so much for the review. Smoochies.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 08:46 am Title: Harmony and Discord

Ah, another obedience lesson for Spike. Think he'll earn his trained puppy certificate? :P

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHHA, unlikely, but at least he got a couple of lessons down. giggles, down boy, down, bad dog, no biscuit, lol. THanks for the review sweets - kisses.

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 07:42 am Title: Harmony and Discord

He really will never give up will he? Thank god! lol! Loved this update, I was half way reading it when i realised i hadn't read the last chapter, I really need to get a personal assistant to tell me when this is updated! Oh, and never trust my email to tell me when it's up! lol! Love the fight scene as well, very sexy, and I'm sorry this review is all over the place, but i keep remembering new things! lol! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Nope, not for a minute, he has his crosshairs on her for sure. Glad you enjoyed the fight scene - I couldn't help it, it held so much promise of anger and hotness, hee hee. I'm glad you liked the chapter and got caught up as well darling - yeah, the emails on updates have been coming in rather slowl as of late. THanks for the fab review - huggles.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 07:28 am Title: Harmony and Discord

The fight scene was fantastic, I loved Spike and Buffy's dialogue during it. As for Buffy's behavior... I can't really blame her, I tend to go with the silent treatment myself when I'm mad. Can't wait to find out who Spike and Buffy meet. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: YAY, I'm glad you enjoyed the fight scene. Giggles, Buffy's dialogue was fun to write and of course she left herself open for a few remarks as well. LOL - I go for the silent treatment myself as well - tends to get the point acorss quite well. Glad you liked the chappy hon and thanks for the great review. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: dkdk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 06:00 am Title: Harmony and Discord

Spike is still a giant asshole in this story. Why would Buffy ever go out with shit like him? I don't get it.

Author's Response: Hahahahhahaha, well, thje point is, she wouldn't right now. He's a giant ass that needs a few lessons and you can be sure he'll get them, *winks*. THanks for the review sweety, huggles.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 04:19 am Title: Harmony and Discord

Another bang-up couple of chaps (well, not to Buffy, but Spike got bangin in so that counts for something). I love how upset Buffy got because it was Harmony. I actually kinda like Harmony (in the series at least, cause she really didn't KNOW she was a slutty, brainless twit - she thought was was cute and sweet and everybody loved her - poor thing, she was so confuse - I though she was a kick in Angel, trying so hard to be good, but too dumb to realize what an odd little twit she was). Sorry, I got off track (I think I'm getting famous for that??!!).

I think Spike is starting to grow up a bit in this. I don't think his time with Harmony had quite the affect he thought it would, not on him and not on Buffy. And poor Buffy, so confused herself and only Willy realizes it (Spike is beginning to, but he's still a bit stunned that she doesn't want him in her bed - if only he could read minds!).

I'm really looking forward to the sparks you promise in upcoming chaps - I'm sure these two are gonna continue to rub each other the wrong way, but oh what fun when they finally rub each other the right way!

A stunning job as always my dear. Thank you for continuing to share your awesome talent!.

So hubby back to work? Hope you enjoyed your time together and had some wonderful romance and family time. I'm visiting my sweet grandson this weekend and while he was kinda stand-offish at first and didn't really remember me - he warmed up quickly and wanted to go with gramma when I left. I'm holed up in a hotel tonight so had some time to read a bit. I'll see him for about an hour again tomorrow and then it's a five hour drive home. Sorry again - I'm rambling.

Hugs and squeezes to you my friend.

Author's Response: LOL, you are too funny firl, nope, no banging except for Harmony, ick!!! sHE WAS RATHER A FUNNY CHARACTER, ESPECIALLY ON aNGEL, SHE MADE FOR LIKE THE COMIC SIDE KICK - A CLUELESS ONE AT THAT. , oops, stupid caps button, damnit. Anyway, Spike is just now starting to grow up but it's in the early stages - poor boy has a ways to go. Sleeping with Harmony backfired on him in more ways than one and you're right - only Willy is able to see things for what they are. I kinda like writing him as the good guy, it's fun. And yup - more sparks to come, you can always count on that, *winks*. Hubby is back at work - poo - but it has to be. I'm so glad you got to see your precious grandbaby, its a shame you have to drive that far, but I know its worth it. Hugs you tight my darling and thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: pepper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 03:17 am Title: Harmony and Discord

I've just started reading this and I had to just leave you a note to say it's Fabu! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much sweety - I truly appreciate that you're enjoying my little creation so much, thank you , thank you. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:38 am Title: Harmony and Discord

yay good chapter!

Author's Response: Giggles, thanks so much sweetheart - hugs.

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Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:35 am Title: Harmony and Discord

Spike's getting his come-uppance. Having them deal with UST with the fighting was fabulous. The boy/man is gonna have to learn harsh lessons before he and an unbending Buffy can have a real relationship. I love the ride you're taking us on. Thanks!

Author's Response: Yup - there's always that underlying UST and boy was it magnified during the fight - I had to go there, giggles. Oh yes, he has many more lessons to learn, sad but true - but - will lead to spuffiness in the end, *winks*. GLad you're enjoying the ride darling and thankss o much for the great review... kisses.

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